This is a reply to that very heartfelt review that Corn critic gave me. I understand that I have been changing the POV a few times, and I apologize for that. Concerning the grammar, I write my stories on Microsoft Word before I post them. These grammar mistakes that you are probably referring to are called simple sentences. I don't know who is reading my stories, so I try and make them simple and clear enough for everyone to read. If I have failed in doing so, I do apologize. I will try and review all of my stories if I have the time, and change anything that I think needs it. Concerning my level of writing, I am a college student not quite at a college level yet, but I am working at it. I have been writing different types of things for years now; including poetry, short stories, fiction, and non fiction. If you don't like what you read, then just don't read it.