Author's Notes: *flicks FFN off* I hate this fucking site sometimes I swear! Anyway, this is all 143 reviews left for the original posting of Anything's Possible! *GLOMPS her reviewers* I LOVE YOU ALL SO MUCH! I never thought I'd get this many reviews! Thank you all so much! I'll never, ever forget your kindness and support! Thank you all SOSOSOSOSOSOOOOOOO much!! *glomps again*
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JoSav 2002-10-02 1 Signed Hey,this is a very nicely written prologue.Great start. I was looking for some multi part NC17 stuff. Mine are to be taken down too.*sniffles*
Anywho, I'll read more asap.
to good to be true 2002-09-22 15 Anonymous
what took u so long that story is so good. i hope u update soon. dont wait a whole year again
anonymous celebrity 2002-08-11 15 Signed
you know, I just realized that I *never* read chapter 15... I'm so bad with this reviewing thing! Great chapter, though... I understand the situation! I really liked some of the plot twists (there could have been a *rape* situation?! Oh no!) And everyone was in character, as far as I could tell. ^.^ Yippie!
ANASTASIA: *all shiny-eyed* Maybe I'm a Saiyan, too... abandoned in this dimension by my dying mother...
What the hell are you talking about? There's no way... You have pink hair and blue eyes.
ANASTASIA: fine... I'm a *really* mutated Saiyan... And outcast to the Outcasts... *Queen* of my own tribe...
Where's your tail, then?
ANASTASIA: Dream crusher. *sulks in a corner*
QUATREKITTY: meow! *starts running around like crazy* (what's wrong with him?!)
Q-CHAN: I really liked this chapter. Who would have thought that Vegeta and Jen were *meant* to be together?
ANASTASIA: JEN'S MEANT TO BE WITH TRUNKS, DAMMIT! *more sulking*
Q-CHAN: Meant as in planned. Of course Jen and Trunks should be together...
QUATREKITTY: meow! ...what's "in heat"? I wanna be in heat!! Can I be in heat? pleasepleasepleasepleasePLEASE???
-_-() looks like Quatre Kitty and I need to have a LONG talk... until next time.
(and next time should be soon, r i g h t?)
ladymars 2002-07-26 15 Signed
Yugi: HII!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm in charge of this because the lady isn't exactly pleasant right now and has vacated the area.
Jeff: And I'm here to make sure he doesn't mess up again.
Yugi: It was an accident! She's not going to take it personally.
Jeff: How do you know? I would take "Misbehave again and DIE" personally.
Y: Are you trying to depress me?
J: No, but...nevermind.
Y: AHYWHOO...It has been a while sine a review was left, so one is in order. It's really good so far and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep going because I'm REALLY curious.
J: You're also a chatter box.
Y: So? * jeff shakes his head. * It's not bad for having writer's block for so long either. :) * A paper airplane hits him in the back of the head. * OWW! * Jeff picks it up. *
J: The lady says, "You still owe me reviews for..." THAT'S NOT NICE! * He suddenly blances. * OK! OK! Sheesh..Somebody's tempermental... She understands you've been busy and would appricieate it if you'd get around to it sometime. I'm just hoping to LIVE that long...
abby 2002-07-21 15 Anonymous
IN CHARACTER, SISTA!!!! don't worry about it, veg head is so well written, GOOD JOB!!!! i like your story, i'm sticking with it, so keep going!
BC (Billyone1739@aol.com) 2002-06-17 15 Anonymous
Dear DBZ chick,
I love the DBZ story Anything's Possible. I can't wait for the next part of it to be put up. I love it!
Your #1 fan,
BC
RazzleDazzleFaery 2002-06-16 15 Anonymous
The coolest story I've read in a while(believe me, I read a lot). I guess I'm just addicted to Trunks being with OC's. Oh well, either way, rock on, and keep on writing. I especially like how Jen first transformed into SSJ mode, too;)... that was a nice twist.
RazzleDazzleFaery 2002-06-16 15 Anonymous
The coolest story I've read in a while(believe me, I read a lot). I guess I'm just addicted to Trunks being with OC's. Oh well, either way, rock on, and keep on writing. I especially like how Jen first transformed into SSJ mode, too;)... that was a nice twist.
moonsaiyanprincess 2002-06-14 15 Signed
This was great! Jen's name if the t's are silent, then would her name be Sakuya? Oh ignore me, I'm having trouble with pronounciation. *hits side of head* UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
n/a 2002-06-08 1 Anonymous
Time to update!
evil-lemon-tigerness 2002-06-01 14 Signed PLEASE write more please you r great with the lemon and everything else .
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PLEASE write more
gundam200x 2002-05-22 14 Anonymous
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS!!!!
Sayianseeker2@yahoo.com 2002-03-30 14 Signed
Another great chapter.The Lemon was great for youre first time. I would think that you have done many. I cant wait for the nesxt chapter. I gotta go bye.
MiraiXenia18 2002-03-29 14 Signed
This is really good! I love fics were a fan gets put into the DBZ World. Don't worry, you're GREAT with lemons. ^_^
Saga Genesis (queenoffrench@hotmail.com) 2002-03-24 14 Anonymous
So i can't be bothered signing in, who cares? Yeah it's me, ChEeZe, but i don't like that name no more, so i changed it. I might end up changing my email...NAH! Only speacial peops an get it. Since you have such a...uh...lustul fic, i gave ya mine! This is really going good, and you better damn well be proud of how good this chappie was, cause if not, you need help. You just HAVE to write more. HAVE TO!!!
Angela Giovanni (Sephiroths_Princess_Angela@hotmail.com) 2002-03-21 14 Anonymous
Bah!!!! Where's the rest?!?!?!?!? Wite more write more!!!!! please!!!!!! ^.^ email me to let me know when you update please!
linainverse2005 2002-03-16 14 Signed
ooooh, kewl! one of the best written lemon's i've ever read. things are going to get real intersting soon, methinks. write more soon plz!!
veggies lil sis k-chan 2002-03-13 14 Anonymous
great chapter continue!
anonymous celebrity 2002-03-13 14 Signed
ANASTASIA: *jumping up and down, chanting excitedly* Lemon! Lemon! Lemon! Lemon! Lemon!
Q-CHAN: Come on, it wasn't that big of a deal...
ANASTASIA: You're just not interested because it wasn't you and Trowa for a change! =P
Q-CHAN: *blush* That's not true. I don't pay attention to those, either.
ANASTASIA: YES YOU DO!
Q-CHAN: I do NOT!
ANASTASIA: DO TOO!
Q-CHAN: I *DON'T*!
ahem, you two, the task at hand...
ANASTASIA: Oh, yeah. Nice lemon. ^_^
Q-CHAN: I thought the thing with Vegeta and Jen being betrothed was an interesting twist.
ANASTASIA: You like that part better because you didn't read the lemon.
Q-CHAN: WILL YOU GET OFF THAT!!
ANASTASIA: Well, I "got off" on the lemon...
Q-CHAN: I DIDN'T WANT TO KNOW THAT!!!!!!!!!
Anastasia, that's quite enough!
ANASTASIA: hehehehehe...
*sigh* Anyway, I enjoyed the chapter, but, since I saw most of it coming due to your massive spoilers, I let the muses review instead. Big mistake, huh? -_-;;
ZZMAGE (ZZMAGE@AOL.COM) 2002-03-12 14 Anonymous
Thanks for the update i had allmost forgoten about this story so thanks. nice to you keeping up the good work.
--ZZMAGE
Karen (pugbaby84@hotmail.com) 2002-03-10 14 Anonymous
Mmmm... lemony fresh. Okay, honestly, kinda skimmed the lemon part (no offense... but... well, not in the mood for lemon today). Trunks has a tail! Yay! And I wonder who will be waiting for them... **cough**Vegeta**cough**
Mad Stickwoman 523 (too lazy to log in) 2002-03-10 14 Anonymous
Like I might have said before, I LOVE THIS FIC!!! ^_^
moonsaiyanprincess 2002-03-10 14 Signed
This is your first?.......No way! You liar, this is a lemon by an expert! did you practice. I'm still drooling and staring at the page. I haven't read a good good 'shooting stars' lemon in so long! I love you! *kisses author* I hope you don't think I'm a freak or something, but I loved how you made the lemon aswell as the rest of the story, suspensful and simply delicious!
BC (Billyone1739@aol.com) 2002-03-10 14 Anonymous
I love the DBZ story Anything's Possible. I can't wait for the next part of it. I love it! The lemon is the best I have read!!!!
Your #1 Fan,
BC
moonsaiyanprincess 2002-02-26 13 Signed Lemon.....Yay! I can't wait. I wonder how Jen got that necklace! Keep going!
BC (Billyone1739@ aol.com) 2002-02-26 13 Anonymous I love the DBZ story Anything's Possible. I can't wait for the next part of it.
I love it! Your #1 Fan,
BC
cyzay (zylia@lycos.com) 2002-02-25 13 Anonymous
oh now this is definately damn intresting. im totallly sucked into your story. i cant wait till you can find the time to be unbusy and add more to this story!! totally email me when you get more up!
zylia@lycos.com
Karen 2002-02-25 13 Anonymous
Dun Dun DUN!! Dude! Like the Saiyan Mating Hunt. =) Nice touch. And I can't wait to find out what the hell is going on with this Jen & Vegeta thing! Or should I say Tsaktua? DON'T WAIT SO LONG TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! Or else I will personally tear you limb from limb! (sorry... Wizard of Oz quote... been working on that play too long... *cough* anyways...) Good job!
Lady Lila 2002-02-23 13 Signed
woah!! cool attack and whats this? 'QUEEN... of the saiyan?
ChEeZe (snowboardingcheeze@dbzmail.com) 2002-02-22 13 Anonymous
obviously, i cant be bothered signing in. I LOVE this story, so wright more! I read one chapter, then my computer stuffed up, and wouldn't let me come to fanfiction.net, or any other good sites! Friggn computer...anyhoo wright more!
ILC (I Like Cheese) (c) Snowboardingcheeze industries
juliemoonstar 2002-02-22 13 Signed
great. update soon. k. ja'ne.
Dragon Lady 2002-02-20 13 Signed
Oh, I love your fic. I read all the way to chapter 13 without stopping, couldn't put it down! Can't wait to see the next chapter!
W-chan 2002-02-19 1 Signed
Cool fic! Yeah!!!
BC (Billyone1739@aol.com) 2002-02-18 13 Anonymous
I love the DBZ story Anything's Possible. I can't wait for the next part of it.
Your #1 Fan,
BC
abby 2002-02-18 13 Anonymous
pretty cool, pretty cool. this chapter wasn't all that exciting, but what was great about it was that it linked you to really wanting to read the next one! good chappie!
Kammy 2002-02-17 7 Signed
Dam message cut off. EMAIL ME WITH NEW CHAPTER PLEASE!!!
Kammy 2002-02-17 13 Signed
BAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!! I read all the way up to chp. 12... and you tell me the lemon is in the NEXT CHAPTER!!! *makes a sour face* Uh... but thats not the only reason I wanted to read the fic.. .
stewy 2002-02-17 13 Anonymous
wwwwhoooooooooooooooooo this is grat news this is awsom i cnt ehat to find out about jenys past and the " lemon" this is so good you dont know how much i whanted you to right PPPPPLEEESSSSSSSSS right more sone im alredy so exited Yipppp there tjis is goub to be grate !
ladymars 2002-02-17 13 Signed SWEET! I can't wait for the next chapter...And you need MORE SLEEP!
To Good To Be Ture 2002-02-17 13 Signed
that was ssssssoo good write more and soon
Heather 2002-02-17 13 Anonymous
oh pls oh pls don't make this ia v/j fic. he's married and think of what it would do to trunks. he obviously loves her. write more soon.
Invader Setsuna 2002-02-17 13 Signed
grrrrr...you just HAD to leave it off there!! Ya know, if I wasn't an author, I would demand that you get the next chapter up within two days, but I know that writing a good chapter could take days, and I DEFINITLY want a good chapter!! ^.^ So just try to get it out soon.
Invader_Setsuna signing out.
::transmission ended::
Mad Stickwoman 523 2002-02-17 13 Signed
I really do love this fic!!!!!
Lilac Moon 2002-02-17 13 Signed
I love your story! Can't wait till the next chapter, update soon!
trunksgrl06 2002-02-17 13 Signed
hey dbz chick! I just spent the last hour reading your story...and man was it worth it! I really like the plot twist with Jen being the *supposed* mate of Vegeta. Ooooo the possiblities are endless...and now that Vegeta and Jen are both mated (Jen is sorta...) this is gonna get interesting.. The only bad thing is that I spent all my time readin ur story and now I still have my writers block for a chappy of my story (faltered Destiny) grrrrr... *pulls hair out* iz so stressful...specially when I'm almost done with this chapter...*laughs nervously* sorry I got a little off track. You have a great story going here and you have a lot of reviews too! I commend you on this story, pleez keep writing! Ooohh lookie i'm reviewer number 101! Yeah! Well congrats on ur story..continue pleez!
Trunksgrl06
moonsaiyanprincess 2002-02-16 12 Signed
Don't stop there. Keep going! Please. *sticks out lower lip*
D7 Peacemaker 2002-02-16 1 Anonymous
Really good. Please make it at VegetaJen fic. I don't know why, but i live Vegeta and OC Fics.
Gohans Gal(too lazy to log in) (gohansgal@hotmail.com) 2002-02-10 12 Anonymous
Grrrrrrrrrrrrr! How could you do that poor lil ol' me!!!!!! So short, so very, very short, but good none-the-less!...!!...!!!
April (Aprilise@aol.com) 2002-02-07 12 Anonymous
very very cool story. Please continue it.
luie Bean 2002-02-06 12 Anonymous
this is grati short but good. this had beter not be the end or ill br crasy !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
anonymous celebrity 2002-02-02 12 Signed
Oh? Is that last line the twist that you meant? It certainly is interesting and unexpected (definitely a "WHO?!?! Vegeta's WHAT?!?!?! Queen of the Sayins HUH?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" kind of reaction). Anyways, I'm looking to see how you explain that to all of us, DBZ chick. I think you owe us.
DeathStorm 2002-02-02 12 Anonymous
Damn. Lets just say you've got my attention!
ladymars 2002-02-01 12 Signed WHOLY SHIT!
juliemoonstar 2002-02-01 12 Signed
great chapter. update soon. k. ja'ne.
Karen (pugbaby84@hotmail.com) 2002-01-31 12 Anonymous
AHHH!!!!!! I can't believe you did that to me! Betrothed... AHH!!! You did this on purpose, didn't you? Left it with a major major MAJOR cliffhanger and now I have to wait, right? Get your rear in gear and WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
linainverse2005 2002-01-31 12 Signed
BETHROTHED MATE OF VEGITA??? but... but... but... she's with trunks now, right? *spinns around dizzily* write next chapter soon, i so confused...
ZZmage (ZZmage@aol.com) 2002-01-31 12 Anonymous
you Are good. i love it.and you remembered the ROSAT. how ever hurry it up and post the next chapter or a little girl will pay you a visit.
Can we Say CHIBI-MOON
luie bean 2002-01-24 1 Anonymous
ok i rillllly like this story but im ging nuts in the whats pless right more!!!!!!
yay I have to find out whats hapinin whith there relation ship ( what do the do when they are in the time chamber!!! *_~) ko then by
Karen (pugbaby84@hotmail.com) 2002-01-20 11 Anonymous
AHHH!! Room of Time and Spirit! Hurrray. They're gonna be in there... all alone... nobody to interrupt them... hmmmm... are we finally getting to the lemon? Hurray your @$$ up and write so I can see what happens!!!
Ashley (anseli@cfl.rr.com) 2002-01-20 11 Anonymous
This is a kewl story keep it up because i want more email when you get the next chapter done
linainverse2005 2002-01-15 11 Signed
hiya! kewl ficcy... please post the next chapter soon? but they can't kill 18 in the normal timeline, cause then she wouldn't marry krillin and marron would never be born! and.... and.. and.. o well. it's just marron. she's a whore anyway. AWAY WITH 18!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ibrahim (Ibrahim_Mendez@Hotmail.com) 2002-01-14 2 Anonymous
It's gettin' real real good
Ibrahim (Ibrahim_Mendez@Hotmail.com) 2002-01-14 1 Anonymous
It's good
heather (celestra79@aol.com) 2002-01-14 11 Anonymous
i just read the first 19 chapters of your story... its great,i love the story... i cant wait for u to update it.... can u add me to your ml. so i can know when to come back and read some more.... thanks!
anonymous celebrity 2002-01-13 11 Signed
LEGOLAS *IS* THE HOTTEST THING ON TWO LEGS!!!!! *ahem* And I knew nothing of the rating before your birthday (I was wondering what that popup was... hehehe j/k) Anyways, pretty good chapter, even if it is just a concoction of a plan. *major envy... 79 reviews* Keep working, because I'm waiting for that lemon, girl! (you ruined me as badly as I've ruined you! _
DigiZ (braindamage9000@hotmail.com) 2002-01-13 11 Anonymous
Wow! Great cliffhanger! The plot DOES thicken! I smell @ least 25+ more chapters are needed to complete this saga, so you have your stuff cut out for you! But keep on goin!!! Cause this is A+ work!!
(however you should join some self-help group for hopelessly addicted DBZ fans)
Saiyan Mia 2002-01-13 11 Signed
This is a great fic I can't wait to read the next chapter... I hope its soon my e-mail address is aussielover_12@yahoo.com can you e-mail me when you are planning to put the next chap. up. ^_^
veggies lil sis k-chan (2lazy2signin) (veggies_little_sis_k_chan@hotmail.com) 2002-01-13 11 Anonymous
really good! So continue SOON!! Onegai? I wanna see if Kami agrees! (YUMMY SUGAR!)~Ja
juliemoonstar 2002-01-13 11 Signed
great chapter. update soon. k. ja'ne.
stewy (Im a gurl (LuieBean @AOL.com) 2002-01-13 11 Anonymous
thanks this is grat whats going on whith there hormons thow im so exited + i whant to see if somthing hapens in the time chamber maby some little kid coming out whith them. OK ok i know get my mind out of the guter but EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE i hwant to know what hapens
Alexial the Saiyan 2002-01-13 11 Signed
The is excellent! yes, you have my interest. This is a really cool story! please hurrry up and post the next chapter!! *^_^*
Vindali 2002-01-13 11 Signed
Lemon! Lemon! They're gonna be in the Room of Spirit and Time for a whole year! Lemon! Lemon! Can you tell yet I want a lemon^_- *taps chin* And can kami lie? Never really thought about it before. *shrugs* Well like Jen said he can just avoid tellin em^_^
Aeryn-Kit (Rhea-Kit@bolt.com) 2002-01-07 10 Anonymous
Wow, Thats really good. I never thought that the idea would work (Earth girl going to the anime world) and you're very talented for making it so interesting. You better write more or i'll...abduct your kitty! (insane laughter)
-Ahem, besides that, could you put me on your mailing list?
Me 2002-01-04 10 Anonymous
Write more soon, or ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mad Stickwoman 523 2001-12-29 10 Signed
MORE!!!!! MORE SEX,MORE VIOLENCE, MORE CHAPTERS
MORE OF ANYTHING ELSE YOU CAN FIT IN THIS FIC!!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!SOOON!!!!!
THANX :-)
D7 Peacemaker 2001-12-23 10 Signed
HEY!!! When are you going to continue your story.
Rose Kitty 2001-12-17 10 Signed
Love it,love it,love it!!! I wish I was in Jen's place,LOL..training with Vegeta,hanging out with TRUNKS (^___^)..me want too! =P I wanna be on your mailing list...email me garfield8me@hotmail.com okie? Later till your next chapter! ^_^
Karen (pugbaby84@hotmail.com) 2001-12-16 10 Anonymous
DAMN YOU SAMN YOU DAMN YOU!!! Stupid cliffhanger... GRRRRRR!!! Hurry up and write that other chapter. You better believe I'm gonna be on you back until you do!
Leaf Zelindor 2001-12-16 10 Signed
AH! okay hehe this is good, sure let me know when you update, my email should be on this.
liz 2001-12-16 10 Anonymous
You have a great story. I hope you keep updating.
juliemoonstar (juliesky_160@yahoo.com) 2001-12-16 10 Anonymous
great chapter. put the next one up soon. k. ja'ne.
DigiZ 2001-12-16 9 Signed
wowowowow this is great, nice romance between trunks and jen, so it doesn't mess up the timeline, but make sure to keep this a saga/light lemon so it is balanced! Sosoru 2001-12-16 10 Signed LOL, I can't believe I like this fic...but I do. More! More!
Pan2001 (lauren_dunlop@hotmail.com) 2001-12-16 10 Anonymous
LOVE IT! Please hurry up and write MORE!!!!!!!!!!
Thankyou!
luie bean (LuieBean@AOL.com) 2001-12-08 9 Anonymous
hi this is grate. This might sound stupid but i rilly like the fact that you gave Jen a Tail ( i love thos). PLES right more !!!! im so happy this came out Ive been whating for a week theis is grate by.
anonymous celebrity 2001-12-05 9 Signed
Yeah, you're right, you had ample room for lemon in this chapter. ^_^ But that's okay... it's coming (I know when!), and I'm willing to wait. Yeah, you heard me, I'M WAITING ON A LEMON! (what's wrong with me) Anyway, keep going, and maybe I'll get the initiative to do the same myself. ^_^
To Good To Be Ture 2001-12-03 9 Signed yea it was good e-mail when u get your next Chapter (bluedice63@aol.com)
Lena (mavshorty01@hotmail.com) 2001-12-03 9 Anonymous
I liked it. you did a good job with your first type of Kissing/make out scene. keep up the good work. oh and thanks for letting me know that ch. 8 was up. :)
juliemoonstar (juliesky_160@yahoo.com) 2001-12-02 9 Anonymous
great chapter. update the next one soon. i want to see what happens next. k. ja'ne.
Karen 2001-12-02 9 Anonymous
Tangy indeed... okay, so next chapter has to be the flat out lemon, right? But gotta love Vegeta in a suit... ^_^
Pan2001 (lauren_dunlop@hotmail.com) 2001-12-02 9 Anonymous
I absolutely LOVE your fanfic,'Anything's Possible'! I really hope you find time to write the next chapter soon! If you have time could you please email me? I haven't been getting emails lately and it's depressing. Thank you!
Your fan,
Pan2001
setsunna (destinys124@yahoo.com) 2001-12-02 9 Anonymous
ooooohhhh.....I wanna see more!! When is the next chapter gonna be out??? This is a really good story...love it!
leo lioness 2001-12-02 9 Signed
awesome work! It's clear you have worked hard on this and it's paying off. Keep up the great work. I really like how you have created your own original character into this story. It's not a usual thing anymore to see romances involving an original character and it's a nice change from the norm.!
TheKryztalRoze 2001-12-02 9 Signed
*claps* BRAVOMISIO!! THAT WAS AN EXCELLENT STORY!
I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE! PLEASE ADD ME TO YOUR MAILING LIST
fli_gyrl16@hotmail.com
THANX!
Sosoru 2001-12-02 9 Signed
LOL, I liked it alot. More please :D
Allison 2001-12-02 9 Anonymous
Good..VERY GOOD. BUT I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!
veggieslilprincess 2001-12-02 9 Anonymous
dont worry about the kissing part its a hell of a lot better then i could do kepp the chapters rolling k?
DigiZ (braindamage9000@hotmail.com) 2001-12-02 9 Anonymous
nice job, this story is goin great, although don't forget to continue the story and not just make it a T/J lemon throughout the WHOLE story, cause I wanna know what else happens with Jen there!! ^-^;
fanfiction god (fortmicah@yahoo.com) 2001-12-02 9 Anonymous
great chapter
veggieslilprincess 2001-11-30 8 Anonymous
cool story hope to read more soon
anonymous celebrity (2lazy@2sign.in) 2001-11-29 8 Anonymous
(creative way of copping out, ne?) Anyway, this isn't nearly as bad as you set it up to be... in fact, it's good. I know what happens NEEEEEEXT (plus for personally knowing the author), and I can't wait to see it in prose format as opposed to notes (is that a lemony-fresh scent I smell?) Anyways, WRITE MORE! Thanks ^_^
Karen (pugbaby84@hotmail.com) 2001-11-26 8 Anonymous
Hurray! Yeah DBZ Chick! Yeah, I smell some lemon coming on, but it's all good. Had to be NC-17 for a reason, right? You better hurry up and get the chapter out. Or else I'll get my sister to tell me where you live and I'll come for you. And your little kitten too. **evil witch cackle** If you can't tell, I'm a little hyper...
Lena (mavshorty01@hotmail.com) 2001-11-26 8 Anonymous
You're doing an awesome job. :) The fic is great so far and I can't wait to read some new chapters. Keep up the good work.
Yin 2001-11-26 8 Signed
Hey, great story so far...I just read the entire thing! Jen's a pretty interesting character, and I agree about Bulma being important to the show (c'mon, without her...none of it would have happened!), although personally I like Chi-Chi...*shrugs*oh well everyone has their opinions right. Of course, any DBZ fangirl would LOVE the chance to see Mirai no Trunks ;)! Can't wait to read the next chapter...and hopefully they'll kiss soon!
Shadows Dark 2001-11-25 8 Signed
I like this story!!!! I want more!!! My e-mail's sablestarlight@yahoo.com
Gryphon 2001-11-25 8 Anonymous
hmm, Trunks gets a different girlfriend...I wonder what yer gonna do with Pan? :D heh heh. seriously, a great fic, keep it going!
linainverse2005 (girlsaurian@yahoo.com) 2001-11-25 8 Anonymous yay!! kewl chapter... by any chance is your real name Jen? *grins wickedly* or is jen just based on u or one of your friends??? btw, sorry this isn't a signed review, but i never feel like signing in NEmore...
chichiri: she's just lazy, no da
oi... -_-;;
juliemoonstar (juliesky_160@yahoo.com) 2001-11-25 8 Anonymous
good story. getting better and better. please put the next chapter up soon i want to see what happens when they are left...ALONE!!(sorry i had to put it like that.i coukldn't help myself.)k.ja'ne.
Vindali 2001-11-25 8 Signed *throws rotten tomato* Why didn't they kiss!? *pouts* damn Veggie barging in like that. *taps foot* well? Come on! On with he next chapter! and yeah can i be on ur mailing list? My addy be Badgurlpiccolo@hotmail.com ^_^I luv my addy
Luie (LuieBean@AOL.com) 2001-11-25 8 Anonymous
hi i just read
thes and there gate you must right more thanks
Allison 2001-11-25 8 Anonymous
KEEP WRITING FOR THE LOVE OF CHRIST! I wanna know what happens....And , oh yeah, isn't it great having claws dug into your legs?
Karen (pugbaby84@hotmail.com) 2001-11-21 7 Anonymous Man, what a place to stop! Have to admit, I was skeptical about the whole girl-from-our-world-goes-to-their-world-and-is-Saiyin thing. But you've made it work. Hurry up and get another chapter up!
ladymars 2001-10-03 6 Signed Are you trying to drive me nuts? Because if you are, you're doing a spectacular job. I can't wait for the next part. Stupid cliffhangers.
Baka-sama 2001-10-01 6 Anonymous I realy like your story, something about it just pulled me in. Keep up the good work.
Your's truely,
Baka-sama anonymous celebrity 2001-09-28 6 Signed Hey, thanks for the plug! God knows I need it *sniff*. Anyway, cool chapter... kinda funny considering I was watching DBZ on Midnight Run during the whole training thing... Vegeta and Trunks in the Gravity Pod or whatever it is... and Trunks punching Vegeta in the face and Vegeta punching him back and Trunks crying and Vegeta taking him to the park. Now. Since it IS so ungodly late and I AM so ungodly tired, I am now laughing hysterically, because I'm picturing Vegeta and Jen in the same general situation (park and all... yeah, yeah, out of character and everything). Guess what? I THINK I KNOW WHO IT IS!! *smile*
Mera Megeta Vengence 2001-09-28 6 Signed
very good!!!!! Please Continue Soon!!!!
Lady Morgan Fire Angel 2001-09-26 6 Signed
COOL! WRITE MORE SOON!
linainverse2005 2001-09-26 6 Signed
kewl! who has jen found?? keep writing.
BTW, u spelled something wrong, but maybe it was a typo. sensi=sensei
Sosoru 2001-09-26 4 Signed
I haven't finished reading it yet, but it's good. I remember when you first put made this story, the begining was a little different wasn't it? Anyways, I'll finish it when I get back from classes.
Sosoru
Heidi 2001-09-23 5 Anonymous
Oooh! Please tell me when you update this story, im checking it every day for new chapters! Gryphonanthro@aol.com
Rakath (DemonRakath@hotmail.com) 2001-09-14 5
This is the WEIRDEST self-insertion story I have ever read... keep up the good work.
P.S.:Let me know when you update. =)
ThE cRaZy GiRl NeXt DoOr 2001-09-08 5
plz add more!!!!!!!!!
Liza 2001-09-04 5 Anonymous
Please continue this!
Greek 2001-09-01 5 Anonymous
I don't usually read these kind of fics but I'm glad I read yours. Can't wait for
more :-)
anonymous celebrity 2001-08-30 5 Signed HIIIIIIIIIIII!! I've been really, really, really hyper since this afternoon, and so I will express so here. THEY ARE TRAINING (I would have been like, screw it, 4:30am, ain't happening... then again, I'm undoubtably human... saiyans aren't red-haired, freckled albinos like me ^_^) Saiyan no Ouji means "Saiyan Prince," right? I did that without my ghetto Japanese dictionary (thank you to the ffn author from whom I "borrowed" it, btw... "A Little Japanese"... useful stuff) Anyway, BYE!
Stardust 2001-08-30 5 Anonymous
Good story, I liked it.
Ratha 2001-08-25 4 Signed Cool story! I can't wait for the rest of it!
anonymous celebrity 2001-08-23 4 Signed Aw, you're more than welcome *blush* I'm glad to help... and this chapter isn't as bad as you made it out to be. Actually, it was quite enjoyable (although my brother's telling me there aren't female saiyans, but he usually doesn't know what he's talking about). Get going on Chapter 4 already. ^_^
Jewel Phillips (dbz_jewel@hotmail.com) 2001-08-22 4 Anonymous I love it, write more, you do repeat or contradict yourself a few times and I agree Chi-Chi is a total BITCH!
Ja Ne!
DigiZ 2001-08-02 1 Signed
Very nice fic, plz continue writing great fics like this, and u have a great chace of becoming a world-class author! Keep up the good work and lets have more chapters here! (o and plz make some twits to tha timeline when the android and cell battles come up, or have her become super-powerful or somethin')! :p
anonymous celebrity 2001-07-26 2 Signed *sigh* stupid ffn. Anyway, the rest of my *original* review went into a tangent about how I liked the story and it's better than your original draft (ah, the wonders of editing ^_^). Great work, and keep writing!
anonymous celebrity 2001-07-26 3 Signed
I just read the whole thing... "I'm the Prince of all Saiyans! I don't need to be *helpful*!"
Moon-Lyn (n.0name@excite.com) 2001-07-25 3 Anonymous 2cents:
Very interesting story you have. here. I would very much like to read some more of this. Good description makes this fic a very nice afternoon read for me.
linainverse2005 2001-07-24 3 Signed
vegita must have been creeped out when she said "i know all of u vegita" kewl fic, keep going!
Kris 2001-07-24 3 Anonymous
Oooo! Cute! I like this. Please write more, because I want to see how everyone else reacts to her.
Kitty Rose (Daria61@hotmail.com) 2001-07-23 2
Aaaaaaaa! Why'd ya stop there!?! I eant more it tell you! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRE!!!!*going slowly in to an evil laugh, then yanks out a whip* hee,hee...*crack* write my 'er writting slave, WRITE!!! HA,HA,HA,HA,HA,HA,HA!HAAAAAAAAAAA! -_-*
linainverse2005 2001-07-23 1
dat girl so lucky...
2001-07-22 2
hm... ...................
2001-07-22 2
Not bad. I like it! *beams* Continue
Miss Bad Ass (pansaiyanwarrior@hotmail.com) 2001-07-22 2
Oh, I like it!! What happens when she wakes up?!?!?!?!
linainverse2005 (girlsaurian@yahoo.com) 2001-07-22 2
yes! excellent! You must write more! more i say! mooooooooooooooore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please?
Brenda Mueller 2001-07-22 2
Great Start! Chapter 3 is sure to be interesting with Vegeta pestering that poor girl.
Shadowfang 2001-07-22 2
I think this is really well-written! Hurry with the next bit please!
