Hey peoples, I've FINISHED IT! What do you think? Once again I've changed my mind about Spider-man Evolution. This will focus more on Spidey with the X-men as sub characters, I scrapped my orginal idea though for something, which I think, is better.
Sneaky Peaky:
Peter Parker never forgot the day the Spider bit him, or the week that followed. The Spider from Osborn Industries had started it all.
(I know it's called Oscorp but I think O.I is cool)
Something else he never forgot were some of the last words his Uncle Ben said to him "With great power come great responabilty"
***
"Peter!"
movement.
"PETER PARKER GET UP NOW!"
"I'm up Aunt May! I'm up!" said Peter grogerly
Peter looked at his clock and let out an "AAAH!" of suprise
Peter got dressed and shot down stairs, grabbing his lunch money and shooting out of the door tossing a 'Bye!!" over his shoulder.
He raced towards the bus, which for once it seemed had waited for him, he got right up to the back and it pulled away.
"Awww CRAP!" yelled Peter
"Help me Peter....." a voice came from a very dark, dank alley
It was the voice of his Uncle, Ben Parker. Peter carefully advanced down the alley and saw his Uncle lying on the floor with a bullet wound.
"I forgive you..." he said and the suddenly he breathed no more.
A figure came into view, the face was still shadowed, but he could see the gun in his clearly.
"YOU!!" yelled an out raged Peter "WHY?! WHY DID YOU KILL MY UNCLE?!"
"Oh don't be silly boy." said the man as he stepped forward the next time he spoke, his voice was the same as Peters
"I didn't kill him." the murderer stepped into view, the scruffy brown hair, the dark brown eyes, Peter knew those features well, they were his.
"YOU DID!!"
And then he woke.
"I'm sorry," Peter whispered in the dark. "I'm sorry......."
Sneaky Peaky:
Peter Parker never forgot the day the Spider bit him, or the week that followed. The Spider from Osborn Industries had started it all.
(I know it's called Oscorp but I think O.I is cool)
Something else he never forgot were some of the last words his Uncle Ben said to him "With great power come great responabilty"
***
"Peter!"
movement.
"PETER PARKER GET UP NOW!"
"I'm up Aunt May! I'm up!" said Peter grogerly
Peter looked at his clock and let out an "AAAH!" of suprise
Peter got dressed and shot down stairs, grabbing his lunch money and shooting out of the door tossing a 'Bye!!" over his shoulder.
He raced towards the bus, which for once it seemed had waited for him, he got right up to the back and it pulled away.
"Awww CRAP!" yelled Peter
"Help me Peter....." a voice came from a very dark, dank alley
It was the voice of his Uncle, Ben Parker. Peter carefully advanced down the alley and saw his Uncle lying on the floor with a bullet wound.
"I forgive you..." he said and the suddenly he breathed no more.
A figure came into view, the face was still shadowed, but he could see the gun in his clearly.
"YOU!!" yelled an out raged Peter "WHY?! WHY DID YOU KILL MY UNCLE?!"
"Oh don't be silly boy." said the man as he stepped forward the next time he spoke, his voice was the same as Peters
"I didn't kill him." the murderer stepped into view, the scruffy brown hair, the dark brown eyes, Peter knew those features well, they were his.
"YOU DID!!"
And then he woke.
"I'm sorry," Peter whispered in the dark. "I'm sorry......."
