A/N: Hello all, Rose here, and before you read please take the following
into consideration. These are the first poems I've written, so I'm in
serious need of constructive criticism (what needs improvement, and what
not). I'd also really appreciate it, if you specify which poem you liked
best, so that I can work with what I do have :-). Oh, and these last words
G/H R/H Forever!
And I hail the QoHG! They're the best! Make sure to visit gryffindortower.net for some great Harry/Ginny and supporting Ron/Hermione stories. And no, I'm not on QoHG, I'm promoting them because I want to.
Lot's of love
UNTITLED
Hermione's POV, thoughts on an ordinary day, and what keeps her on her feet.
Glancing to the sky
Grey, all I see
Over my shoulders
Whispers, all I hear
Yet
The rythmatic pounding
Envelops me
Making me see the sky.
Clear, I plan to see,
Lovely words, I yearn to hear
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
HERE, WITH ME
I never really liked Cho (anybody who rejects Harry, I don't like, although technically it wasn't her fault, but like I said, mere techincalities). But, I must admit, losing the person you love is something I Wouldn't even want to bestow onto a fictional character :-)
I close my eyes
I see it.
Fluttering my eyes,
It's no longer there
Crossing my arms
Stubbornly
I open my eyes once more
To glare
I raise my chin
Defiantly
Attempting to face
What's no longer there
With a heavy sigh
Heavy heart
And Heavy tears
I drown in memories
Because it will no longer
Be here
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
DIFFERENT
Silly poem, Ron's POV, that's why it's silly! ^_^
Oceans are yellow
Why not?
I see things differently.
All people are kind
They have no flaw
Why not?
I see things differently.
Love is just another word
Why not?
I see things differently.
An Average Girl, Bookworm even
Just plain Average?
I think not.
I see things differently. I see 'Her' differently.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
The last two are Ginny POV, basic unrequited love :-( Although I am POSITIVE J.K. will get them together And they will live happily ever after in their fairy-tale Castle, which conveniently we have (Hogwarts).
YOUR LOVE
I Love You
No I don't,
You ignore me.
I love you
No, I deny it,
And so do my tears.
I Love You
Of course I don't,
You infuriate me.
I Love You,
I still do
You're the One
Who doesn't love Me
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
HEARING THE UNSEEN
I fight and shout
He doesn't here me
I sing and stomp about
You don't hear me
I whisper softly
He 'still' doesn't hear me
But how could he hear me
If he doesn't even see me?
Final A/N: Please review, it's all I ask, well that and world peace, but that's not happening any time soon, so how about you review? I guess One out of the Two isn't bad.
And I hail the QoHG! They're the best! Make sure to visit gryffindortower.net for some great Harry/Ginny and supporting Ron/Hermione stories. And no, I'm not on QoHG, I'm promoting them because I want to.
Lot's of love
UNTITLED
Hermione's POV, thoughts on an ordinary day, and what keeps her on her feet.
Glancing to the sky
Grey, all I see
Over my shoulders
Whispers, all I hear
Yet
The rythmatic pounding
Envelops me
Making me see the sky.
Clear, I plan to see,
Lovely words, I yearn to hear
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
HERE, WITH ME
I never really liked Cho (anybody who rejects Harry, I don't like, although technically it wasn't her fault, but like I said, mere techincalities). But, I must admit, losing the person you love is something I Wouldn't even want to bestow onto a fictional character :-)
I close my eyes
I see it.
Fluttering my eyes,
It's no longer there
Crossing my arms
Stubbornly
I open my eyes once more
To glare
I raise my chin
Defiantly
Attempting to face
What's no longer there
With a heavy sigh
Heavy heart
And Heavy tears
I drown in memories
Because it will no longer
Be here
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
DIFFERENT
Silly poem, Ron's POV, that's why it's silly! ^_^
Oceans are yellow
Why not?
I see things differently.
All people are kind
They have no flaw
Why not?
I see things differently.
Love is just another word
Why not?
I see things differently.
An Average Girl, Bookworm even
Just plain Average?
I think not.
I see things differently. I see 'Her' differently.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
The last two are Ginny POV, basic unrequited love :-( Although I am POSITIVE J.K. will get them together And they will live happily ever after in their fairy-tale Castle, which conveniently we have (Hogwarts).
YOUR LOVE
I Love You
No I don't,
You ignore me.
I love you
No, I deny it,
And so do my tears.
I Love You
Of course I don't,
You infuriate me.
I Love You,
I still do
You're the One
Who doesn't love Me
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
HEARING THE UNSEEN
I fight and shout
He doesn't here me
I sing and stomp about
You don't hear me
I whisper softly
He 'still' doesn't hear me
But how could he hear me
If he doesn't even see me?
Final A/N: Please review, it's all I ask, well that and world peace, but that's not happening any time soon, so how about you review? I guess One out of the Two isn't bad.
