Hey guys GeezerSage here, this is my first story so please give me advice to make my story better. Also, Naruto is not as dense and is a lot smarter than his canon form. The last thing is that Orochimaru and Tsunade never left the village for plot reasons.
P.S (I don't own Naruto Kishimoto does)
P.P.S
"Tailed beast or death god talking"
"Speak"
'Thought'
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Shadow Clone jutsu!
It was a Regular cold October night in the Village Hidden in the Leaves, until... ROAR! The Nine Tails could be seen. A dark shade of red with what could seem like 3 black dots in its eyes.
A figure was seen looking at the Nine tails from the Hokage monument increasing anger, 'Damn you Madara' he thought. The nine tailed beast started rampaging the hidden leaf until it saw the figure. It readied up a Tailed Beast ball and shot it at the figure.
The now dubbed 4th Hokage went through hand seals, 'Rat,Ram,Dragon,Bird,Ox,Snake' thought the 4th, "Flying Rajjin: Absorption Barrier Jutsu!
A Sealing array Formed Infront of him stopping the Tailed beast ball, absorbing the ball and teleporting it to an unknown location. A new figure appeared behind him and tried to grab his back, then attempting to teleport him away with his teleportation technique. Minato knew that someone was trying to do something to him, so in an effort to disarm the foe, he tried to slash him through the head with his Tri-pronged kunai.
It proved to be useless as the kunai went straight through the opponent's head. A vortex like dimension appeared from the figures single eye. He whispered, "Kamui" as quickly as the vortex came was as quickly as Minato used FTG to go to his Tri-pronged kunai he had set months before this night.
'shit' Minato thought as he landed near his kunai. "You should give up; I control the nine Tails now." said Madara now analyzing his strategy to defeat the 4th. " NO! I refuse to do so, not when I still have someone to protect." said Minato. Minato got up and stood holding an FTG kunai in hand. He rushed at Madara, Madara did the same. Minato has now jumped up straight into Madara. He then realized he was going through him. 'What!?' he thought. The 4th now had to FTG away to another kunai he placed earlier. he landed now thinking about what options he had now that Madara was essentially intangible. 'I have to strike the moment he tries to grab me' he thought. Minato readied himself he then ran towards Madara again. This time throwing his FTG into Madara. Time slowed down as Madara's hand was slowly reaching for the 4th's haroi. In an instant Minato formed a Rasengan. 'I win' thought Madara until...
"BOOM" was the only sound that was heard as Minato flashed to the Tri-pronged kunai he had just thrown in order to slam a Rasengan into Madara's back. "That was my Flying Rajjin: Level 2" Minato said confidently. He then imprinted a FTG seal on the masked man. Afterwards he flashed back to his marker he left earlier in the battle. He then flashed back to Madara and stabbed him with a kunai, "That is for kushina-" he then twisted his jacket. a seal appeared and made Madara grunt, " This is for the Nine Tails" The ground started to shake from the Nine Tails Tailed Beast ball. Madara got up and started his post-game monologue, "You live up to your title 4th Hokage, but he will be mine one day. I shall rule this world, there are plenty of ways to do it." with that he teleported away.
Minato rushed to the battlefield, "It will take a lot of chakra to teleport the nine tails I'll need some help" he said as he sped through hand Seals, 'Boar, Dog,Rooster,Monkey,Ram' he thought "Summoning Justu!" he yelled. A gigantic toad appeared and crashed straight into the Nine Tails with Minato on top of its head, "Huh, what am I doing in here?" said the toad. "Gamabunta I need your assistance to tame the Nine Tails and get it away from the village." said Minato slightly pleading "Oh, well uh I'll do the best I can no promises!"
In an instance Minato flashed to kushina and Naruto he then flashed back to Gamabunta and flashed the Nine Tails Into an open field away from the village. "(huff) Man that was way too much flashing, I'll need to erect a barrier now" In an instance chains erected themselves out of Kushina's back. "Minato seal the Nine Tails in me I can it with me to my death" she said clearly tired. "Sorry no can do it would break the balance of power in the 5 nations" he said calmly "But he will have a horrible life always being hated by those Weak-minded villagers!" said a pleading kushina "That is a chance we will have to take, there is a chance that if we did not, other villages would try to attack us Ultimately destroying Konoha and possibly killing everything and everyone that Naruto may have kept close to his heart" said the fourth. "So, I will seal 100% of the Nine Tails within him-" Kushina Interrupted "100% That could kill him or worse put him under the kyubbi's influence!" yelled a clearly agitated Kushina.
"Wrong There's a key word in your sentence, "Could" I will take the possibility that it might happen" after that he began sealing the Nine Tailed beast,"Shikki Fuin!" yelled Minato. The Death God (Shinigami) appeared it started to speak," You called upon me mortal?" spoke ever so excitedly by the Death God, "Yes I need your assistance sealing the Nine Tails into my newborn son, Naruto" "Quite a beast you have, let me see what I can do." The Death God pushed its hand through Minato's chest taking all the chakra Of the Nine Tails and putting it inside of Naruto,"8 Trigrams Seal!" The kyubbi started to shrink, but not before it could try to impale Naruto with its finger.
"SLIT" was all that was heard when Minato and Kushina barely stop the Kyubbi's finger from stabbing Naruto, "Naruto... Don't be a picky eater, eat heartily, so you grow big and strong! Take a bath every day. and keep warm... and... don't stay up late... get... enough sleep! And make friends... you don't need a lot but... just a few true friends... you can really trust! And... I was never good at it myself... but study hard and practice your ninjutsu! But... everyone has things they're good at and things they're not... so if... you have a hard time... don't let it get you down... Respect your sensei's and senpais... at the academy! Oh and... one more important thing... about the three ninja vices... be especially careful... when lending or borrowing money... and save the money you earn from missions... and don't drink until you're twenty. and drinking too much is bad for you... so. take it easy! And as for women... I'm a woman... so I don't really understand, but anyway... there are only men and women... so you will find yourself interested in women... but just don't... fall for a strange one! Find... a woman like your mom! And speaking of vices... one more thing... watch out... for Jiraiya-sensei! Naruto... you will face... many painful times and hard times... but just be yourself! And have your dreams... and the confidence... to make those dreams come true! I really! really... really... really! Really... wish I could be there... to teach you so many more things... I really wish I could be with you longer... I love you., And with that they both passed away, Leaving only Minato's FTG Kunai with Naruto.
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Omake
Death Gods POV:
"Man, that escaladed quickly, I mean that was way too quick I most didn't get that blond man's soul!" said the Death God clearly spooked, "Welp my job is over" with that he went back to Hell.
Omake over
