First time making a story so it won't be the best please review and tell me your thoughts on the story so far

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Twelve years ago a great tragedy befell the great village of Kohonagakure but three children were born that day named Naruto Mito, Menma on that night the kyubi no kitsune was divided through out the siblings Naruto having ten percent of the kyubi's chakra menma having fifty five percent and mito having twenty five percent and kushina having ten percents.

Hiruzen Sarutobi might have made the biggest mistake of sealing the kyubi's chakra to the children. Because of that the world have might made its doom.

2 years later


"Minato I think we might have to start training the menma and Mito" "Why just Menma Mito why not Naruto too ?" "He's are son too?" "Well Minato jiraiya sama came to me since your were busy and said the toads told him that the one kid from the yellow flash and the red hot blooded habanero well bring peace and prosperity or destruction to the shinobi world."

"So you want to say that one of are kid could bring peace to the shinobi world?" "Yes Minato I think it could be Menma or possibly Mito they have the. Kyubi's chakra." But what about naruto he could be the person that brings peace to the shinobi world?" "Minato Naruto has like ten percent of the kyubi's chakra he can't possibly do anything with that I mean we could train with him when we in roll the kids in the academy." "Kushina you can't be serious he's are son we can't leave him out just because he doesn't have a lot of the kyubi's chakra I mean some shinobi don't even have the kyubi's chakra like me mightguy, kakashi sakumo and Hiruzen a lot of people became legends in there own right." "I know I know it's just that we could finally have peace between the nations and we don't have to go to war anymore." "Kushina..." "But still we can include Naruto too." "NO MINATO" she finally has lost her temper with him trying to include Naruto" "WHAT WHY NOT" And Minato starting to raise his voice " WELL WE HAVE TO FOCUS ON MENMA HES THE PERSON THAT WILL BRING PEACE TO THE WORLD" OH REALLY AND WHAT IF HE ISN'T AND IT MITO HUH OR NARUTO."

"MITO I COULD MABYE SEE BUT NARUTO WHAT IS HE GOING TO DO MITO AT LEAST HAS 25 PERCENT OF THE FOXS CHARKA NARUTO ONLY HAS 10 PERCENT WHAT IS HE GOING TI DO WITH THAT???" "WHY DOES THE CHARKA MATTER SO MUCH I MEAN I DIDN'T HAVE ANYTHING I WAS AN ORPHAN AND CLAN LESS AND LOOK AT ME IM THE FUCKING HOKAGE OF THE STRONGEST VILLAGE?"

"MINATO YOU DON'T GET IT THE CHARKA OF THE BEAST IS IMMENSE IT'S SO POWERFUL IF I COULD HAVE CONTORTED THE CHARKA I COULD HAVE CRUSHED A VILLAGE OR EVEN MORE WHO KNOW WHAT THE CHARKA COULD DO.IF MENMA COULD CONTROL THE BEAST CHARKA WE COULD HAVE PEACE and no one's village has to be destroyed." "Kushina..." "But kushina I will have someone train Naruto." Bu- "no buts "fine"


6 YEARS LATER

kaaa-Chan kaaa-chan " What Menma-chan" " can we train all ready Mito is waiting for us" "Ok ok I will be there" while chucking as she was walking to the outside training yard she saw him she hated him for what he did as Naruto was passing by he noticed her walking past he saw the glare that she sent towards him but he shrugged it off like it was nothing and that piss her off even more I can't believe he lives here she thought with distain when they past each Naruto when straight to his room "God I hate that woman" Naruto muttered

God she hated that boy no that thing no that monster she will never forgive him for what he did "Are y'all ready to train?" Yes both of the kids said. As Naruto enter his room he when to a bookshelf and pulled on book the shelf stared to moved he when inside of the middle size room he when to the desk and saw the sword that he was creating the sword he was creating a special sword so far the sword could produce fire and shadows while he was a 5 year old child


Flashback

A 5 year Naruto with red hair like his mother but spike like his father and ocean blue eyes when to train in training ground 2 but saw a Jonin and his genins so he decide to hide and hear what the jonin is talking about the jonin told the genins about chakra paper and the elements and some of the kekkei genkai "hmmm that's really interesting"he saw a kid with a katana then and there Naruto created an idea that will change the world so Naruto researche about kekkei genkais in the konoha library there he found about every kekkei genkai's in konoha,mist and rocksince they got the info in the wars Since then he started to create the sword with the kyubi's charka original the sword plain but now the sword looks like (ichigos Bankai sword if you don't know how it looks like search it up) first Naruto shocked but then he had an idea so naruto gather blood of the Nara clan that he killed poured the blood on the sword then poured his charka and kyubi's chakra too while the shadow clones are doing that he poured his blood on the sword it and it worked and merged with it but something was missing he didn't know what it was but that one process took him 2 year to befriend a Nara and to kill her but after he killed her he didn't feel nothing then to do the experiment with kyubi's charka he did try and do it with just the kyubi's chakra but it was just pouring inside the sword and the blood just vaporize but with the fire element Naruto poured as much fire charka out while he's pulling on the kyubi's chakra it's took him 3 months to pull it off but in the end it was worth it with the kyubi's chakra the fire enhance so it was hotter than before


Flash back end

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