Hello readers,
Its RagingFusion here. It has come to my attention that this story has a massive plot hole
As one reviewer put it, it makes "Zero fooking sense"
I do take an offence at the review that says it's a disappointment. I mean Ouch, that hurts.
I am still new to writing, and it really hurts to have someone call this a disappointment, although I can understand your irritation. I myself find it a little... problematic, but it still wounds me to put it so...bluntly. But in the end, you are just trying to help me, and I really appreciate that. So, my hurt feelings aside, thank you for this massive help.
My solution? I am going to rewrite the story. I am going to revamp my plots, develop the characteristics a bit more, and generally try to make sure these disappointments do not happen again. College starts in 2 days, but hey, what's life without a good challenge.
I would like to state the fact that I do not plan on abandoning this story until it reaches 100k words. I do not care if I have to rewrite it a hundred times, I WILL keep writing until my goals are reached.
Sorry for disappointing anyone,
And please, do tell me next time if there are any mistakes or plot holes,
RagingFusion, signing out.
