Okay so first off, I want to say sorry for the last couple of months without an update. been going through allot, not gonna bore you with the details unless you really wanna know. And during those months, some of you have been sliding into my DM's, threatening to call Omnisaurus and stomp all over my house before rebuilding it… and stopping over it again.
So as compensation, here is a 500 word teaser for the next chapter, which will be fully finished very soon. As you can probably tell, these are snippets and not the full chapter. I have also posted another reupload of the OG version as part of my apology. Before we show off this teaser, here's a few reviews worth responding too:
From Maximum Rhapsody:
The beginning of the story is not bad, it is different from the original, I hope to see more changes in the story of the fanfic, I still think that this story should appear years before the main story of DXD begins, but it would be your decision, besides that robot would be important for the future of the story?, since it ended up transporting Ben to another universe together with him?, many possibilities can be seen.
Bakuganman: Ben will age up in the sequel, but to stay true to Omni's original vision, he will be 11 at the moment. The robot was a Gogmagog, a robot from the DxD universe. Tried not to make it too obvious but some people caught it.
From GuestD:
Hey I think you can do better also don't use the stuff if the current Ben 10 cartoon use the old ones and when he was older because those ones were way better including the song so don't use the new cartoonish one please. Also it good so far but can you have more plot in the story I want to know what happens next
Bakuganman: You mean the reboot with the aliens with bubblegum proportions drawn in Microsoft paint 2003? I refuse to bleach your eyes with that. More plot will be shown, its just that was a prologue and this a teaser.
Chapter 2 - Teaser
"This is why I don't let you idiots manage the Gogmagog sector of the Dimensional Gap." Said a male in bright robes that shined with light, talking to 2 other males also in robes, but they were of a smaller stature and appeared younger. One was still taller than the other. "Honestly, how could you mess up putting a giant British toaster away where it belongs!"
"HE DID IT!" Both the younger males claimed in unison, pointing at each other.
"I don't care who did it," said the taller one, then leaned inti the Younger ones personal spaces with an enlarged head as he yelled at them. "DON'T DO IT AGAIN!" He then quickly calmed down and backed off.
"Ugh… crazy old man." Said the shortest member of the duo.
"Yeah… typical old-school God." Said the taller one. "I mean, what's gonna happen? A human from another dimension falls out of the sky?"
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It was a sunny day in Japan. The sun was shining, birds were singing, flowers were blooming and the locals were either earning their livelihoods or visiting the various attractions, including the Pokémon tourist trap. Just seemed like a normal day…
That is, until a human fell out of the sky. He was floating in a space a second ago with a giant robot, but then fell downwards after the robot disappeared. Now he was falling down towards a city in his human form, crying out in shock, his falling speed making him feel wind blowing in his face, clothes and hair.
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Fourarms had Dohnaseek by the collar and pulled a set of fists back…
*Beep, beep, beep, beep… beeeeeeep.*
FLASH!
In a flash of red light, the four-armed alien had been replaced by a young boy, maybe a year or 2 younger than Mittelt. He looked confused as to what happened, looking over his own body after the transformation ended… but then nervously smiled at the man he was grabbing by the collar.
"Hehehe…" Ben chuckled with a finger wave with his free hand. Dohnaseek was not amused. Now that Ben was in his weaker human state, the fallen angel merely got up and tossed the boy aside. "Woooah! OOOF!" Went Ben after getting tossed.
"Wait… he's human?" Asked Mittelt.
"So let me get this straight: we've been beaten around senseless for nearly 5 minutes… by a kid?" Asked Kalawanger. "A human kid?"
