One Happy Birb The 3 chapters before this one hurts my eyes and even triggers my OCD due to the Bold and Paragraph Lining, another is that, to must back story and flashbacks.

My bad I didn't know it's my first time making a story and I didn't realize that I was writing it on bold.

Razberry17 interesting story so far i wonder when kushina going to stop seeing naruto as a monster and fix their relationship also why she haven't may naruto sibling or sasuke or kyiomi to see naruto as a demon or loser since he not being trained by minato and kushina i have seen this in many neglect fic

It because naruto did something that kushina saw and the kids and minato don't know because kushina doesn't want to spilt the family apart and she knows that minato will choose naruto but then the kid will have to decide to choose who to believe there father or there mother and when Naruto did what he did to him kushina found Naruto's true nature.And why they don't see Naruto as a loser is because Kakashi is training him and now he's training with law a that knows how to use a sword and been thought 2 shinobi wars so yeah.I hope I answered your question

Guest :a name for naruto's sword in the future huh? what about rengoku, the same one from fate grand order, and to say if naruto suddenly fainted or face some enemy that he may not have a chance to overcome ( just a sugguestion) in battle, then rengoku would taken control of his body to deal with it, well maybe still can't win but still can manage to fend off a bit until naruto can fully used rengoku full power that it. just a sugguestion though like i say, wishes you good luck and all the best on the next chapter.

hmmm it's really interesting I never really thought of that thank you for the suggestion.

Guest Regardless of the story the quality of your writing is sinply awful and nearly unreadable, you make a ton of grammar and spelling mistakes and the dialogue is shit.You also don't properly space your paragraphs making conversation incomprehendabel. Please do the bare minimum in making a decent story.

I mean it's was the first chapter that you read but if you don't like it you could leave plus it's was my first time writing.No shit the paragraph were not properly spaced and I'm trying with dialogue


"SHE WILL POISON YOUR FOOD WHY WOULD AUNITE KUSHINA EVER DO THAT!!!"Sasuke yelled

"Maybe I will tell you later" As Naruto continued walking he when to a food shop

As Naruto when to the shop 3 blurs zoomed passed after they pass by Naruto when out with a bag and continued to walk to the academy

"Hey Naruto what did you get?" Sasuke said while running up to him

"catch" As Naruto reached inside the bag he threw Sasuke a tomato

"So Naruto why would your own mother ever do that to you?" Sasuke said while eating his tomato

"Even if I told you won't understand" Naruto said while eating a piece of watermelon

"How would I not understand if you haven't told me?"

"Drop it Sasuke"

"Bu-"

"Drop it"

"Don't you tell anyone about this."

"WHY PEOPLE GOT TO KNOW THAT YOUR MOM IS TRYING TO KILL YOU I MEAN YOU CAN TELL YOUR DA-"

"No there will be no point it will just make the family spilt apart"

"Well well look what we have here the uchiha brat and the hokage son"

As they were talking naruto and Sasuke kept on walking while

"HEYY WHAT DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING"

Sasuke stop a yelled back "what do you think were doing" as Sasuke said the he sprinted up to naruto

"Hey Naruto"Sasuke said in a low voice

"Yeah?"

"Who do you think killed my clan."

"What brought this up?"

"I don't know it's just that you said that you don't want t your family to split up and well my family got killed at 6 and well I really miss them and I want them back but I know they're not coming back."

"oh I see but don't,you still have your sister and brother ?"

"Yes I do but it's not the same."

"Do you still love your family Naruto?"

"Yes I do why?"

"what about your mother?"

"Naruto narrowed his eyes

"Oh look where here" Sasuke said running up to the door but Naruto just looked at him with suspicion

"Sasuke what ar-

"OH MY GODDDDD ITS NARUTO-KUNNNN" A couple of girls said as the fan girl where look at naruto he just started to walk to the front door

As Naruto was walking to class he see girl whispering and look at him but he just ignored them as he was walking to his assigned class he heard a voice

"Hey Naruto what's up" A lazy voice said

"Nothing much I mean I'm about to enter class" Naruto said not even look at the person who said that as he said that he opened the classroom door

"oooh yeah" the lazy voice said


Authors note: yeah I was busy with school so yeah pretty short chapter I don't really have time so yeah here are the votes

Naruto girls

ino 1

temari

Mei

konan 2

tsunade

bleach girls

unohana 2

rangiku

yoruichi 2

nemu

Hallibe 1

Nelliel