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There was black everywhere man came and patted his cheek one was working on phone seems to be relaxed ..he herd sorry inspector daya is no more..
Abhi jerk and open the eyes he was sweating fully
Abhi - I..i..inspector daya no more h..h..h kon yeh o..or doctor essa ha (he kept hand on his mouth )
Abhi - kahi m..m..mene toh nahi mara na ..a..a..agr mara ha to..tooh mujhe yaad kyu nahi..m..m..mujhe kou yaad kyu nahi jinko mene mara tha ..m..m..mujhe koi bimari ha kya ...m..m... mujhe y..yaad kyu (he hold his head and drank the water )
Abhi - daya ko mara ha mene lekin yaad nahi .. kamal ha cid mein raha mein itne saal jadoosi ki lekin mujhe shakle or hadse yaad kyu nahi..
Abhi hold his head he on the mobile and seached is inspestor daya died? he saw a newspaper and shocked Inspector daya son of acp pradyuman got killed by senior inspector abhijeet ..
Abhi - matlab mene acp ke bete ko mardiya pakka ab yeh mujhe chodhe ga nahi pack karle abhijeet ACP ka dimag tujhe pata nahi ha ..
he hot up and started packing..
On otherside
Voice - abhay boss
A man came running in the factory
Abhay - kyu be esse gadho ki tarha kyu bhag rahe ho
Man - solid khabar ha boss apko rizwaan bhai yaad ha
Abhay - ha
Man - vo naksha dhundne mein lage ha unhe pata laga ki naksha or koi nahi senior inspector abhijeet ke pass ha
Abhay - areh waah kya baat sunai ha tunne lekin agar vo naksha rizwaan je hath laga toh vo takatwar hojae ga or mein essa nahi honne du ga
Man - boss us nakshe mein ha kya
Abhay - ek ese raste ka patta jo puri desh ko barbad kar sakta ha foren abhijeet ko dhundo samjhe
At night 4 a.m
Train arrived
Announcement - yatri gan kripya dhyan dijiye ... mumbai se Delhi janne wali train platform no. 2 par khadi ha
Abhi enter inside..with his bag station was in deep silence including train as all were sleeping..
soon the train started abhi was sitting near door and looking out
Abhi - aheeb admi hu kein bhi mujhe mera naam yadd ha bank details yaad ha maksad yaad ha identity yaad ha lekin phir bhi mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi ..dikhti ha toh bus yeh kali tasvire ... koshish karta hu bachpan mein kya karta tha mein
He tried to remind
Abhi - taad kyu nahi ha (irritate) kuch bhi yaad nahi ha khali dimag ha mera bus... papa ki bhi baate sun rahi ha lekin shakal nahi ban rah(tearly and tensed he clutched his hairs and diwn the head )
Abhi - kya ho raha mere sath samjh nahi aa raha .. (he herd tumne kiya ha khoon daya ka ... tumne goli mari ha daya ko )
Abhi - (closing eyes in pain ) chup hojao please
Daya ko kyu mara tumne
khooni ho tum khooni
Abhi he covered his ears..
Abhi - (in pain ) nahi please band ksro
he saw two negative image sitting on chair and he was pointing gun at them
shoot abhijeet shoot ..
Abhi - (in pain ) nahi vo vo mar jae ge nahi ..
shoot abhijeet shoot ..
Abhi - (in pain ) nahi please mar jae ge maat marna unhe nahi
And the bullet shoot
Abhi - (shouted ) nahiiiiiiii (he open the eyes tears were flowing from his eyes he found him self in train breathing heavily..)
Abhi - m..m..mene do do log or mare ha m..m..mene (he just covered his mouth ) kitne bache mere karan anath hogaye kitni biwiya vidhva hoagyi mein kese (he started crying)..
Voice - kyu bay
He stop crying clear the tears and turned back socked to see the police
Abhi - p..p..police
Police - nashe kar raha ha train mein
Abhi - n...n..nahi sir mein toh bus ese hi
police - (to man ) Bag check kar gadbad lag rahi ha
Abhi - (pov) bag mein toh cash padh ha ...
Abhi - sir bag kyu khol rahe ha app chodiye na
Police - ab toh pakka gadbad ha (to man ) khol isse
Man open and saw ID card
Man - (shocked ) sir ID card
Police officer see and shocked
P.O - senior inspector abhijeet (he saluted abhi ) sorry sir vo hume laga gad bad ha
Abhi gulped the saliva
Abhi - theek ha mera bag rakh do
Man - sir vese app ro kyu rahe the ..matlab app yaha
Abhi - vo..b..vo maa..maa ki yaad agayi thi toh ..
P.O - oh acha app yaha kyu bethe ha
Abhi - ticket bhool gaya mein vo urgent jana padh raha ha delhi
P.O - ek kaam kariye app aiye ... aiye na humare sath
Abhi - (pov) kitna powerful batch ha yeh iska istemal ho sakta ha
He went after police officer who gave him comfortable seat and dinner ..
Next day
Acp prepared the breakfast and came out with two plates and kept he was going to take another one then he realized..he herd
Daya - bolo vivek ... acha matlab PCO par jo call hua vo kisi ne mooh dhak kar baat ki thi... theek ha or vo gaadi...matlab meera road se nikli lekin dusri road nahi pahunchi..
theek ha vivek ek kaan karte ha ..team ko divide karte ha tum , tasha or freedy meri team mein . dad , shreya or Pankaj ek taraf yeh sab baki case sambhale ge or hum abhijeet ko dhund ge
Acp - (angrily) CID ko team mein divide karne wale kon hote ho tum
Daya - (angrily) dekhiye dad hume abhijeet zinda chahiye ..jaldi chahiye or apke sath rahe na toh agar abhijeet ki body ghar ae gi tab bhi apko chain mil jae ga ..
he recieved a tight slap on his face ..
Acp - (angrily) tumhare mooh se bakwass kese nikli ..fikar mujh samjhe tumhara bhai hone se pehle mera beta ha vo kaan khol kar sunlo tum zayada yeh seth banne ki zarurat nahi ha samjhe ... manta hu galati hui ha .. lekin mein ek bete ki arthi utha chuka hu samjhe dusre ki uthane se pehle mein khud uth jaunga
He just took the car keys and left
Daya - itni fikar apne kho janne se pehle ki hoti na dad toh ajj halat kuch or hone the
On otherside
Abhi got down in old delhi
P.O - sir app meri promotion ki baat kare ge na
Abhi - a...ha ha zarur karu ga mein baat ..
P.O - thankyou sir
Abhi smile
Abhi - (pov) agar esa raha toh yeh cid ko bata de ga ki mein yaha hu kisi bhi tarha mujhe purani delhi se nayi delhi jana hoga
And he left..
In forensic lab
Dr.s - ek sadme wali baat mili ha tum sabke liye
Daya - kya sir
Dr.s looked at acp
Dr.s - acp yeh koi plan wagera yah tum kahi uante toh nahi na kuch I'd bar abhijeet ka
Acp - salukhe dimag maat ghuma mudde par aa
Dr.s - khoon abhijeet ki gun se hua ha
All shocked and looked at eachother
Dr.s - Yanni yeh gun jo waha se tumhe mili number registered bhi uske naam par ha , finger prints bhi uske naam par ha or lash mein goli bhi isi se chali ha
Daya - agar esa toh vo gun chodhe ga Kyu ?
Acp - cid officer ha itni badi bewakoofi nahi kare ga ..salukhe
Dr.s - boss khoon abhijeet ki gun se hua ha mene yeh nahi kaha ki khoon abhijeet ne kiya ha
All got confused
Dr.s - boss buri khabar bahut ha mere pass ..yeh jo khoon mila ha tumhe rizwan ke waha yeh khoon is doctor ka ha .. or jo khoon kursi ke pass mila wo abhijeet ka ha ... yeh machine abhijeet ko lagai tgai thi
Shreya - sir machine kya kam karti ha ...
Dr.s - dimag ko control karne ka kaam karti ha yeh machine insan ko esa lagta ha ki uski sochne ki power galat yah sahi ka fark sab cheen gaya ha
all shocked to hear that
Acp - (tearly ) ab yeh maat kehna ki abhijeet ke dimag se...p...phir kisi ne
Dr.s just nodded
Dr.s - band par abhijeet ke bal the yeh doctor ek psychiatrist ha pradyuman ishara yehi ha ki abhijeet ka misuse hua ha
Daya - nahi koi bhi abhijeet ka misuse nahi kar sakta (to all ) app log hi sochiye zara agar abhijeet ka misuse hota toh ab tak jo cheez rizwaan chahta tha..vo mil jata ..Rizwaan ese bhatak ta nahi
suddenly acp's cell rang he picked
Acp - ha bolo Manu theek ha... beuro ajao..
he cut the call
Acp - khabri ne bataya ha ki bahut badi khabar hath lagi ha beuro chalo ..
In beuro
Manu - sahab khabar bahut buri ha
Daya - kya baat ha ?
Manu - pura underworld abhijeet sahab ke peeche padh gaya ha (all shocked ) Rizwan , Abhay, katori, Dolly , Harish sab ke sab sahab abhijeet sir ko kahi Marne ki toh kahi torcher ki planning chahiye
Acp - kiya kya ha usne jo ese sare jann ke peeche padh gaye uske
Manu - insab ka karan ek naksha ha Sahab
Tasha - naksha
Pankaj - khazane ka Naksha ha kya
Manu - naksha bahut khatarnak ha sahab itna samjh ha ki naksha inke hath lag gaya toh desh ko khatra ha sahab desh barbad hojae ga
Acp - Manu tum jante ho abhijeet ke pass esa naksha kaha se aya or abhi vo kaha ha
Manu - kaha or kese aya yeh toh nahi pata lekin ha ek cheez kisi ghar ke bhedi ne hi yeh khabar failai ha sir app mein se koi ha jo karan bana ha sir ki jaan khatre ka
All looked at eachother..
Acp - abhijeet ke pass vo naksha kabse tha jante ho ?
Manu - nahi sir..
Acp - abhijeet kaha ha
Manu - pata nahi sir
Daya - rizwaan or baki sab kaha mile ge ?
Manu - sir ajj hi jis gang mein ma tha unhone jagha badli ha mein samne rehte waha se nikal gaya...
Acp - theek ha Manu tum jao
Manu nodded in yes and left
Shreya - ab toh khatra or badh gaya ha hume jaldi se jaldi sir ko dhundna hoga .
Daya - abhijeet ki gun vikrant ke ghar mili thi matlab vo as pass kahi toh capture hoga sunsan jagha ha waha road par atleast auto hi sahi
Suddenly vivek cell rang ..he picked
Vivek - sir local police ko gaadi mili ha ek uss raste par
Acp - chalo chalte ha
