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There was black everywhere man came and patted his cheek one was working on phone seems to be relaxed ..he herd sorry inspector daya is no more..

Abhi jerk and open the eyes he was sweating fully

Abhi - I..i..inspector daya no more h..h..h kon yeh o..or doctor essa ha (he kept hand on his mouth )

Abhi - kahi m..m..mene toh nahi mara na ..a..a..agr mara ha to..tooh mujhe yaad kyu nahi..m..m..mujhe kou yaad kyu nahi jinko mene mara tha ..m..m..mujhe koi bimari ha kya ...m..m... mujhe y..yaad kyu (he hold his head and drank the water )

Abhi - daya ko mara ha mene lekin yaad nahi .. kamal ha cid mein raha mein itne saal jadoosi ki lekin mujhe shakle or hadse yaad kyu nahi..

Abhi hold his head he on the mobile and seached is inspestor daya died? he saw a newspaper and shocked Inspector daya son of acp pradyuman got killed by senior inspector abhijeet ..

Abhi - matlab mene acp ke bete ko mardiya pakka ab yeh mujhe chodhe ga nahi pack karle abhijeet ACP ka dimag tujhe pata nahi ha ..

he hot up and started packing..

On otherside

Voice - abhay boss

A man came running in the factory

Abhay - kyu be esse gadho ki tarha kyu bhag rahe ho

Man - solid khabar ha boss apko rizwaan bhai yaad ha

Abhay - ha

Man - vo naksha dhundne mein lage ha unhe pata laga ki naksha or koi nahi senior inspector abhijeet ke pass ha

Abhay - areh waah kya baat sunai ha tunne lekin agar vo naksha rizwaan je hath laga toh vo takatwar hojae ga or mein essa nahi honne du ga

Man - boss us nakshe mein ha kya

Abhay - ek ese raste ka patta jo puri desh ko barbad kar sakta ha foren abhijeet ko dhundo samjhe

At night 4 a.m

Train arrived

Announcement - yatri gan kripya dhyan dijiye ... mumbai se Delhi janne wali train platform no. 2 par khadi ha

Abhi enter inside..with his bag station was in deep silence including train as all were sleeping..

soon the train started abhi was sitting near door and looking out

Abhi - aheeb admi hu kein bhi mujhe mera naam yadd ha bank details yaad ha maksad yaad ha identity yaad ha lekin phir bhi mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi ..dikhti ha toh bus yeh kali tasvire ... koshish karta hu bachpan mein kya karta tha mein

He tried to remind

Abhi - taad kyu nahi ha (irritate) kuch bhi yaad nahi ha khali dimag ha mera bus... papa ki bhi baate sun rahi ha lekin shakal nahi ban rah(tearly and tensed he clutched his hairs and diwn the head )

Abhi - kya ho raha mere sath samjh nahi aa raha .. (he herd tumne kiya ha khoon daya ka ... tumne goli mari ha daya ko )

Abhi - (closing eyes in pain ) chup hojao please

Daya ko kyu mara tumne

khooni ho tum khooni

Abhi he covered his ears..

Abhi - (in pain ) nahi please band ksro

he saw two negative image sitting on chair and he was pointing gun at them

shoot abhijeet shoot ..

Abhi - (in pain ) nahi vo vo mar jae ge nahi ..

shoot abhijeet shoot ..

Abhi - (in pain ) nahi please mar jae ge maat marna unhe nahi

And the bullet shoot

Abhi - (shouted ) nahiiiiiiii (he open the eyes tears were flowing from his eyes he found him self in train breathing heavily..)

Abhi - m..m..mene do do log or mare ha m..m..mene (he just covered his mouth ) kitne bache mere karan anath hogaye kitni biwiya vidhva hoagyi mein kese (he started crying)..

Voice - kyu bay

He stop crying clear the tears and turned back socked to see the police

Abhi - p..p..police

Police - nashe kar raha ha train mein

Abhi - n...n..nahi sir mein toh bus ese hi

police - (to man ) Bag check kar gadbad lag rahi ha

Abhi - (pov) bag mein toh cash padh ha ...

Abhi - sir bag kyu khol rahe ha app chodiye na

Police - ab toh pakka gadbad ha (to man ) khol isse

Man open and saw ID card

Man - (shocked ) sir ID card

Police officer see and shocked

P.O - senior inspector abhijeet (he saluted abhi ) sorry sir vo hume laga gad bad ha

Abhi gulped the saliva

Abhi - theek ha mera bag rakh do

Man - sir vese app ro kyu rahe the ..matlab app yaha

Abhi - vo..b..vo maa..maa ki yaad agayi thi toh ..

P.O - oh acha app yaha kyu bethe ha

Abhi - ticket bhool gaya mein vo urgent jana padh raha ha delhi

P.O - ek kaam kariye app aiye ... aiye na humare sath

Abhi - (pov) kitna powerful batch ha yeh iska istemal ho sakta ha

He went after police officer who gave him comfortable seat and dinner ..

Next day

Acp prepared the breakfast and came out with two plates and kept he was going to take another one then he realized..he herd

Daya - bolo vivek ... acha matlab PCO par jo call hua vo kisi ne mooh dhak kar baat ki thi... theek ha or vo gaadi...matlab meera road se nikli lekin dusri road nahi pahunchi..

theek ha vivek ek kaan karte ha ..team ko divide karte ha tum , tasha or freedy meri team mein . dad , shreya or Pankaj ek taraf yeh sab baki case sambhale ge or hum abhijeet ko dhund ge

Acp - (angrily) CID ko team mein divide karne wale kon hote ho tum

Daya - (angrily) dekhiye dad hume abhijeet zinda chahiye ..jaldi chahiye or apke sath rahe na toh agar abhijeet ki body ghar ae gi tab bhi apko chain mil jae ga ..

he recieved a tight slap on his face ..

Acp - (angrily) tumhare mooh se bakwass kese nikli ..fikar mujh samjhe tumhara bhai hone se pehle mera beta ha vo kaan khol kar sunlo tum zayada yeh seth banne ki zarurat nahi ha samjhe ... manta hu galati hui ha .. lekin mein ek bete ki arthi utha chuka hu samjhe dusre ki uthane se pehle mein khud uth jaunga

He just took the car keys and left

Daya - itni fikar apne kho janne se pehle ki hoti na dad toh ajj halat kuch or hone the

On otherside

Abhi got down in old delhi

P.O - sir app meri promotion ki baat kare ge na

Abhi - a...ha ha zarur karu ga mein baat ..

P.O - thankyou sir

Abhi smile

Abhi - (pov) agar esa raha toh yeh cid ko bata de ga ki mein yaha hu kisi bhi tarha mujhe purani delhi se nayi delhi jana hoga

And he left..

In forensic lab

Dr.s - ek sadme wali baat mili ha tum sabke liye

Daya - kya sir

Dr.s looked at acp

Dr.s - acp yeh koi plan wagera yah tum kahi uante toh nahi na kuch I'd bar abhijeet ka

Acp - salukhe dimag maat ghuma mudde par aa

Dr.s - khoon abhijeet ki gun se hua ha

All shocked and looked at eachother

Dr.s - Yanni yeh gun jo waha se tumhe mili number registered bhi uske naam par ha , finger prints bhi uske naam par ha or lash mein goli bhi isi se chali ha

Daya - agar esa toh vo gun chodhe ga Kyu ?

Acp - cid officer ha itni badi bewakoofi nahi kare ga ..salukhe

Dr.s - boss khoon abhijeet ki gun se hua ha mene yeh nahi kaha ki khoon abhijeet ne kiya ha

All got confused

Dr.s - boss buri khabar bahut ha mere pass ..yeh jo khoon mila ha tumhe rizwan ke waha yeh khoon is doctor ka ha .. or jo khoon kursi ke pass mila wo abhijeet ka ha ... yeh machine abhijeet ko lagai tgai thi

Shreya - sir machine kya kam karti ha ...

Dr.s - dimag ko control karne ka kaam karti ha yeh machine insan ko esa lagta ha ki uski sochne ki power galat yah sahi ka fark sab cheen gaya ha

all shocked to hear that

Acp - (tearly ) ab yeh maat kehna ki abhijeet ke dimag se...p...phir kisi ne

Dr.s just nodded

Dr.s - band par abhijeet ke bal the yeh doctor ek psychiatrist ha pradyuman ishara yehi ha ki abhijeet ka misuse hua ha

Daya - nahi koi bhi abhijeet ka misuse nahi kar sakta (to all ) app log hi sochiye zara agar abhijeet ka misuse hota toh ab tak jo cheez rizwaan chahta tha..vo mil jata ..Rizwaan ese bhatak ta nahi

suddenly acp's cell rang he picked

Acp - ha bolo Manu theek ha... beuro ajao..

he cut the call

Acp - khabri ne bataya ha ki bahut badi khabar hath lagi ha beuro chalo ..

In beuro

Manu - sahab khabar bahut buri ha

Daya - kya baat ha ?

Manu - pura underworld abhijeet sahab ke peeche padh gaya ha (all shocked ) Rizwan , Abhay, katori, Dolly , Harish sab ke sab sahab abhijeet sir ko kahi Marne ki toh kahi torcher ki planning chahiye

Acp - kiya kya ha usne jo ese sare jann ke peeche padh gaye uske

Manu - insab ka karan ek naksha ha Sahab

Tasha - naksha

Pankaj - khazane ka Naksha ha kya

Manu - naksha bahut khatarnak ha sahab itna samjh ha ki naksha inke hath lag gaya toh desh ko khatra ha sahab desh barbad hojae ga

Acp - Manu tum jante ho abhijeet ke pass esa naksha kaha se aya or abhi vo kaha ha

Manu - kaha or kese aya yeh toh nahi pata lekin ha ek cheez kisi ghar ke bhedi ne hi yeh khabar failai ha sir app mein se koi ha jo karan bana ha sir ki jaan khatre ka

All looked at eachother..

Acp - abhijeet ke pass vo naksha kabse tha jante ho ?

Manu - nahi sir..

Acp - abhijeet kaha ha

Manu - pata nahi sir

Daya - rizwaan or baki sab kaha mile ge ?

Manu - sir ajj hi jis gang mein ma tha unhone jagha badli ha mein samne rehte waha se nikal gaya...

Acp - theek ha Manu tum jao

Manu nodded in yes and left

Shreya - ab toh khatra or badh gaya ha hume jaldi se jaldi sir ko dhundna hoga .

Daya - abhijeet ki gun vikrant ke ghar mili thi matlab vo as pass kahi toh capture hoga sunsan jagha ha waha road par atleast auto hi sahi

Suddenly vivek cell rang ..he picked

Vivek - sir local police ko gaadi mili ha ek uss raste par

Acp - chalo chalte ha