Miss Blue Star: Okay, listen up. I have not read very many stories on FF.net, okay? If my story really is a "copy" of someone else's story, I'll delete it. I wrote this story before I even knew about FF.net. I have a whole stack of stories written down on paper in my room! I am thinking about just deleting my FF.net name and just writing down my stories on paper again. Eternal, learn good grammar, I don't want to be descriptive, and I did not copy anything! Just review and tell me whether I should delete my story or not. Oh, and I am posting this story on FF.net so I can have a little relief, not so I can have people tell me that my story is a copy. My Mom recently died, okay? I just want to type my story out, post it, and read some reviews! If someone said my story was just plain stupid and told me how to fix it up a bit, I would have no problem with that person, but when someone tells me my story is a copy, that does not help.