Reviews of Just An Illusion Of Passion until Fanfiction.Net before Fanfiction.net decided to stop NC-17 ratings.
I wanted to thank all of you who have reviewed this fanfic. I just did not want to loose all what u've taken time in writting to me so I've decided to keep one page with all the reviews.
Total Number of Reviews : 42
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| Reviewer | Date | Chapter | Type |
| FloralBlackMoon | 2002-08-31 | 10 | Signed |
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| This is simply a beatiful story. I fell inlove with t the first chapter. It is definitely going to my favorite stories. It would be nice is the whole Trunks is a bastard continued. ^^ | |||
| Princess Kitana (too lazy to sign in) | 2002-08-28 | 10 | Anonymous |
| Okay, since it seems that it's based on
some tru events, I say make "Trunks" The way he is to you, a real bastard as
you said. I don't kno, that's just me. I really like ur fic here, it's
really good. Please update soon. ^^ Princess Kitana kitana82483@aol.com |
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| starfire | 2002-08-26 | 10 | Anonymous |
| its goin really good, din't make trunks nice, or a jerk. maybe something in between. that would be fun to read about | |||
| Lady Tomboy | 2002-08-23 | 10 | Anonymous |
| So it's something like a part of your
life huh? Well can't judge 'bout that, but I do know that I'm a sucker for happy endings ^_^ Hope this one will have one too, story and for you too of course. G'luck and hope you'll update again soon. |
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| girlygirl | 2002-08-22 | 10 | Anonymous |
| love the story! make trunks realize his stupid idiotic mistake of letting her go!! woo hoo! | |||
| mrchezzysnickers (mrchezzy@hotmail.com) | 2002-08-22 | 10 | Anonymous |
| *grunts* i wanna find out what happens next!!! you just had to end it right THERE didn't you?!?!!?!?!?! keep up the great work and POST SOON!!!!! keywords there: POST SOON!!!! ttyl!!! | |||
| 2002-08-21 | 9 | Anonymous | |
| not bad not bad at all | |||
| Lady Tomboy | 2002-08-11 | 9 | Anonymous |
| Bugger that is was so short, hope you'll update soon | |||
| Avi Daragon (daragon@angelfire.com) | 2002-08-09 | 9 | Anonymous |
| First of all I want to congratulate you, I'm what you could call a fan fic adict, and I must admit, this is one of the best ones yet! I have to admit that Trunk's evil personality doesn't strike up my attention (I happen to be his # 1 fan) but hey, it's a cool insight on him... Just one more thing... hurry up! I'm dying to know what will come next... | |||
| mrchezzysnickers [2lazy2login] (mrchezzy@hotmail.com) | 2002-08-09 | 9 | Anonymous |
| *pull out her hair* ahhh you just HAVE to end it THERE, didn't you?!!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!!!?!? please post soon and MAKE YOUR CHAPTERS LONGER!!!!!!!!!!!!! email me when you post!!! ^^ | |||
| Lady Tomboy | 2002-07-25 | 8 | Anonymous |
| I hope you'll update this soon, LOL haven't read a story like this one before. | |||
| mrchezzysnickers [still2lazy2login] (mrchezzy@hotmail.com) | 2002-07-24 | 8 | Anonymous |
| nice chapter!!!!! i loved it just like
all the others!! ooo i wonder what that important email is about... oO;;;
update soon or i shall be forced to send my hitmen after you!!!! +--Chezzy--+ |
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| sassy5413848 | 2002-07-20 | 7 | Signed |
| Write more, Please. | |||
| mrchezzysnickers [2lazy2login] (mrchezzy@hotmail.com) | 2002-07-13 | 7 | Anonymous |
| hey there! wow u have a really good fic
goin! i hope u post AS SOON AS ff.net is outta read-only mode! if it's not
too much trouble, please email me when you post! well ttyl! email me or
somethin! i'd love to hear from u! +--mrchezzysnickers--+ |
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| jess | 2002-05-26 | 1 | Anonymous |
| get next one out quick | |||
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| Reviewer | Date | Chapter | Type |
| PanChan27 | 2002-05-18 | 7 | Signed |
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| i cant belive you stoped right there...I wanna so badly no if trunks falls for pan ='( i hope so...that darn cheat...but hes so sexy =) *Meep* update soon i am dieing here..... | |||
| Saiyan Serpent | 2002-05-15 | 7 | Signed |
| Wow...that really is ironic that pan would end up working with the girlfriend of her one night stand...*sighs*...but whatever happens...trunks more than deserves what's coming to him...if he is gonna treat women with so little respect and belittle every ounce of their dignity...well, let's just say that he won't make too many friends that way...that jerk has dug his own grave...he just doesn't know it yet...*smirks*...WONDERFUL CHAPPY!!!...gotta go...later peep...;+D | |||
| Zidanezgrl | 2002-04-27 | 6 | Signed |
| This is really good! You need to write more!!!! | |||
| Zidanezgrl | 2002-04-27 | 1 | Signed |
| *kablink* Oh wow...that was really good! ^_^ Great chapter! | |||
| TrunksPan-Luver4evr | 2002-04-24 | 6 | Signed |
| Great story so far ca't wait for you to update..... i hope trunks gets a beating err the nerve of that guy | |||
| Meiyume (meiyume@dbzmail.com) | 2002-04-24 | 6 | Anonymous |
| ey! this is really good! keep goin!!! | |||
| Saiyan Serpent | 2002-04-24 | 6 | Signed |
| Well, i'm glad that pan is getting on with her life...maybe she will forget all about trunks soon and find a guy that really does love her...*winks*...WONDERFUL CHAPPY!!!...thanx for updating!!!...;+D | |||
| Saiyan Serpent | 2002-04-23 | 5 | Signed |
| Grrrrrr...trunks really is a **stard!!!...*scowls*...he pretends that he had feelings for pan...and then has the nerve to send her an e-mail asking what she is so upset about!!!!...i swear to kami he is the biggest jerk EVER!!!...i hope someday a woman takes his heart and steps all over it...maybe then he will know what it is to hurt...maybe then he will understand why pan is so upset...*sighs*...EXCELLENT CHAPPY!!!...i can't wait to read the next one!!!...gotta go...later peep...;+D | |||
| Saiyan Serpent | 2002-04-23 | 4 | Signed |
| Wow...*shakes head*...poor pan...trunks really did a number on her...*sighs*...that good for nothing baka!!...*growls*...i knew he was up to no good!!...*sighs*...i hope pan will learn to trust again...and maybe someday she will find a man that is deserving enough to have her by his side...TERRIFIC CHAPPY!!!...;+D | |||
| Saiyan Serpent | 2002-04-23 | 3 | Signed |
| Well, at least pan didn't go all the way...i think that was smart on her part...it still feels like trunks is using her...but who knows, maybe he's not...*shrugs*...i dunno...i'm sorry to hear about the dilemma that marron had to deal with...*sighs*...i wonder if she will ever tell goten about the pregnancy...it's really up to marron either way...FANTASTIC CHAPPY!!!...;+D | |||
| Saiyan Serpent | 2002-04-23 | 2 | Signed |
| Hmmmm...i don't like where this is heading...i think trunks is moving a little too fast...*sighs*...i hope he doesn't use pan and throw her away like a piece of trash...guess we'll see what his true intentions are shortly...anywho...WONDERFUL CHAPPY!!!...;+D | |||
| Saiyan Serpent | 2002-04-23 | 1 | Signed |
| Well, things seem to be off to a good start...though i'm not sure that all those rumors about trunks are not without basis...i hope i'm wrong about that...but i guess we'll find out soon enough...anywho...FABULOUS START HERE!!!...i can't wait to see what happens next!!!...;+D | |||
| Magma-Chan | 2002-04-22 | 5 | Signed |
| I really like this fic keep going thats for the email! Tell me when you update again! | |||
| anonomous | 2002-04-20 | 5 | Anonymous |
| THAT PRICK I CAN'T BELIEVE HIM. HE'S A LOW LIFE!! Marron is a good friend | |||
| lilone | 2002-04-13 | 4 | Anonymous |
| i lik it so far. i hope dat u continue on wid ur story. soon pan n truck will b together i hope. | |||
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| Reviewer | Date | Chapter | Type |
| Magma-Chan | 2002-04-13 | 4 | Signed |
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| AWW I like this its very sweet! and i like the way you've written it this is really good | |||
| TrunksSaiyajinGirl | 2002-04-12 | 4 | Signed |
| I like it, but I thought graphic sexual content was supposed to be rated NC-17...oh well. i think i might go read your poem now. | |||
| Lex | 2002-04-12 | 1 | Anonymous |
| This didn't copletely appeal to me from the beginnig, all of the z warriors have and will always know each other. Seriousley, Pan would have already known Trunks. And have been friends. So I just must say I would like it better if Trunks and Pan had started off as friends. | |||
| Baby | 2002-04-12 | 4 | Signed |
| trunks had better come back, its not nice. | |||
| Rachel | 2002-04-12 | 4 | Anonymous |
| cute!i luv poetry! | |||
| essie | 2002-04-05 | 2 | Anonymous |
| I luv it! | |||
| Rachel | 2002-04-05 | 2 | Anonymous |
| good=D | |||
| essie | 2002-04-03 | 1 | Anonymous |
| LOVE THIS KEEP IT U K! HALLOR BACK YOUNGEN OOOOOHH |
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| ills | 2002-04-03 | 1 | Signed |
| that was good keep on going | |||
| Princess of Darkness | 2002-04-02 | 1 | Signed |
| ooh it's a diary, cool.... yay Marron isn't a bitch in this ^_^ I'm glad | |||
| blue-angel1204 | 2002-04-02 | 1 | Anonymous |
| this is gud! please continue! | |||
| Rachel | 2002-04-02 | 1 | Anonymous |
| Cute! | |||