The Candidate of Veelas
Ok guys, this isnt a chapter, however, I just want to get something clear, so you guys wont think its a mistake ^_~. Here is where I got a review from someone, but im not trying to be mean or anything to this reviewer, just wanted to point something out, however, I also have something for you readers.... sneak peek at next chapter on ver bottom! :
Sent From No name (thats not the name he/she subbited, I just made that up) :
WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE!!!!! Obviously none of you have really ever watched MK. There are so many mistakes. SPelling and everything else I could naem. Who the HELL was the pilot of Luhma-Klein during those 2 years. It's Erts VIRNY COCTEAU
Yes Yes, i know Erts took over after his brother died. I need to tell you though, im not finished with my story COMPLETELY. Im actually going to explain WHY Erts is piloting another few years in later chapters.
Continue:
I's Erts VIRNY COCTEAU not curoe. Clay never becomes a pilot he is an observer. Only ONE person can fit inside a Goddess otherwise Garu would have just hopped in and took Zero out of Eeva-Leena. Your spelling was also atrocious.
Ok, I admit, you caught me with spelling Ert's last name wrong, and once again, im not TOTALLY done with my stories. Once again, I will explain about Clay. Its going to be a long story, trust me. ^_~
As for my spelling T_T ::sigh:: your right. I looked over it and relized how many mistakes I made ::hits head:: stuiped stuiped stuiped! lol. For ONE person can fit inside the Ingrid, now thats not completely true. In the second episode, Curriculum 01, Garu was trying to get in the Ingrid yes, BUT the entrance to the Ingrid was completely shut off and was unable to be opened, because of a FUCTIONAL problem, they didn't say because only one person was in it, and when it finally did open, do you think it would take so much time for Garu to go inside the Ingrid and get Zero out, I mean, its a HUGE place and has lots of room, oh but then how would Garu just be able to pull him out and find him when its such a WIDE space, well, remember when the spirit of the goddess was holding him, then she let go of him and he started to flote away from her, well mabey he floated so far from her (or she pushed him) that he landed where the exit of the Ingrid was. So, mabey more then one person COULD enter the goddess, BUT it would have fatel injuries by doing so, like a part of your body broken, or death itself. Right?
Zero is not that stupid he is actually quite intelligent which is what some fans fail to notice.
I agree with you on that, HOWEVER, you must admit, sometimes he can be quite clueless, and it happends most likely when things come up to you unexpectedly, and it happened so fast that it takes you awhile to put the peices togethor of what just happened, like when he tried helping the boy by putting him into his own goddess, and it happened so quickly (and like I said before, have fatel injuries and so much pain he couldnt think) taht it took him awhile to tell Hiead what happened. And for the test, mabey he is quite intellegent, but he has trouble putting it on paper. Who knows? Im just putting up in my stories of what I think. Im not 100% sure that more then one person can enter a goddess, but I THINK its possible.
What would be the whole freaknig point of having training if they had to become a pilot through a test. They compete for the top spots in the candidate ranks but the pilots are chosen by GOA.
Well, sometimes you need to know things on what to say to your repairer on how to launch, what problems you have in your Ingrid, how to actually MOVE your Ingrid (there might be more then to just move around your Ingrid) etc. As for they are chosen by G.O.A, yes, BUT Azuma is part of GOA, mabey they needed a judge who was a proffesinal, who took notes of each candidate, and handed them to the HIGHER rankers of GOA and GIS, and as for the former pilots, there also proffesionals and they no what it takes to be a Pilot because they USED to be, so mabey both GOA and GIS needed to know what the Pilots thought over each candidate, and if they had what it takes.
Well just wanted to clear that up. I wasnt trying to be mean, I just wanted to straighten things up a bit, but besides that, thank you for the review, I appreciate it! ^_^
Oh and readers, I have a little Introduction of what happening in the next chapter, so just scroll down and youll see it! ^_^
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The legend is slowly coming in to place. The boy is injured, and slowly his past starts to unfold. He can see visions of spirits, that once where and still are. Something is wrong with a Pilot, and now knows what he must do, with regret of doing so. The goddess is waiting.... to show.
Curriculem 03 : Gone
With those with Wings fly to your dreams.
Ok guys, this isnt a chapter, however, I just want to get something clear, so you guys wont think its a mistake ^_~. Here is where I got a review from someone, but im not trying to be mean or anything to this reviewer, just wanted to point something out, however, I also have something for you readers.... sneak peek at next chapter on ver bottom! :
Sent From No name (thats not the name he/she subbited, I just made that up) :
WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE!!!!! Obviously none of you have really ever watched MK. There are so many mistakes. SPelling and everything else I could naem. Who the HELL was the pilot of Luhma-Klein during those 2 years. It's Erts VIRNY COCTEAU
Yes Yes, i know Erts took over after his brother died. I need to tell you though, im not finished with my story COMPLETELY. Im actually going to explain WHY Erts is piloting another few years in later chapters.
Continue:
I's Erts VIRNY COCTEAU not curoe. Clay never becomes a pilot he is an observer. Only ONE person can fit inside a Goddess otherwise Garu would have just hopped in and took Zero out of Eeva-Leena. Your spelling was also atrocious.
Ok, I admit, you caught me with spelling Ert's last name wrong, and once again, im not TOTALLY done with my stories. Once again, I will explain about Clay. Its going to be a long story, trust me. ^_~
As for my spelling T_T ::sigh:: your right. I looked over it and relized how many mistakes I made ::hits head:: stuiped stuiped stuiped! lol. For ONE person can fit inside the Ingrid, now thats not completely true. In the second episode, Curriculum 01, Garu was trying to get in the Ingrid yes, BUT the entrance to the Ingrid was completely shut off and was unable to be opened, because of a FUCTIONAL problem, they didn't say because only one person was in it, and when it finally did open, do you think it would take so much time for Garu to go inside the Ingrid and get Zero out, I mean, its a HUGE place and has lots of room, oh but then how would Garu just be able to pull him out and find him when its such a WIDE space, well, remember when the spirit of the goddess was holding him, then she let go of him and he started to flote away from her, well mabey he floated so far from her (or she pushed him) that he landed where the exit of the Ingrid was. So, mabey more then one person COULD enter the goddess, BUT it would have fatel injuries by doing so, like a part of your body broken, or death itself. Right?
Zero is not that stupid he is actually quite intelligent which is what some fans fail to notice.
I agree with you on that, HOWEVER, you must admit, sometimes he can be quite clueless, and it happends most likely when things come up to you unexpectedly, and it happened so fast that it takes you awhile to put the peices togethor of what just happened, like when he tried helping the boy by putting him into his own goddess, and it happened so quickly (and like I said before, have fatel injuries and so much pain he couldnt think) taht it took him awhile to tell Hiead what happened. And for the test, mabey he is quite intellegent, but he has trouble putting it on paper. Who knows? Im just putting up in my stories of what I think. Im not 100% sure that more then one person can enter a goddess, but I THINK its possible.
What would be the whole freaknig point of having training if they had to become a pilot through a test. They compete for the top spots in the candidate ranks but the pilots are chosen by GOA.
Well, sometimes you need to know things on what to say to your repairer on how to launch, what problems you have in your Ingrid, how to actually MOVE your Ingrid (there might be more then to just move around your Ingrid) etc. As for they are chosen by G.O.A, yes, BUT Azuma is part of GOA, mabey they needed a judge who was a proffesinal, who took notes of each candidate, and handed them to the HIGHER rankers of GOA and GIS, and as for the former pilots, there also proffesionals and they no what it takes to be a Pilot because they USED to be, so mabey both GOA and GIS needed to know what the Pilots thought over each candidate, and if they had what it takes.
Well just wanted to clear that up. I wasnt trying to be mean, I just wanted to straighten things up a bit, but besides that, thank you for the review, I appreciate it! ^_^
Oh and readers, I have a little Introduction of what happening in the next chapter, so just scroll down and youll see it! ^_^
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The legend is slowly coming in to place. The boy is injured, and slowly his past starts to unfold. He can see visions of spirits, that once where and still are. Something is wrong with a Pilot, and now knows what he must do, with regret of doing so. The goddess is waiting.... to show.
Curriculem 03 : Gone
With those with Wings fly to your dreams.