yay!! i got more reviews. and they like my story. :) ok regular
disclaimer i don't own anyone you recognize from the series.
zipp- ok. i can't answer all your questions because that will give away
the story. sorta. i kinda just write this out and let things pop into
my head. but i do have a certain story line in mind.
also they all arn't married. only hikaru got married because she wanted
a child and she cared for Sayorie. (hint) if you read that part again
it says that they weren't in love.
to the age thing. well im not sure of their ages but its been about 17
years out of highschool.i think. sounds stupid since its my story but
whatever.
zipp, Ascot Summon, ANIMA-MOUSE-PERSON-SHOUJO, and krylancelo- tanks
for reviewing and i hope you like the story.
after the pillar is gone
by akoya
chapter 5
`where the monsters were`
"AHHHHHHHHHHH!" screamed three voices as they landed on the ground a
little roughly."ow.ow.ow." was the main sentimant from the three women.
"atleast the portal isn't very high off the ground now." umi said as she
dusted herself off.
"true." Fuu looked around at their surroundings. "it looks like we are
in the forest next to the castle. this is where Ferio and i met." Fuu
whispered to herself the last sentince.
"who are you?" a menicing voice demanded out of the shadow of a large
tree.
"were surrounded" hikaru said dead pan. Umi looked at hikaru and silently
gasped to herself. Hikaru's eyes had fires in them. (like a reflection)
"what do you want?"
"we want to know who you are and why all of you keep falling from the
sky." a couple stepped out of the folage and looked at the group of
women in front of them.
"'keep falling from the sky'? there was someone besides us that came
from the sky?" Hikaru asked calming down.
"yes." the woman answered after a few seconds." she was seen by our
scout group who was scouting out the monsters that had set fire to the
niegboring village."
all three women looked at eachother surprised that there were still
monsters around. Fuu looked at the couple and spoke, "excuse us please,
this is.... news to us and we have not been here for a while. we wish
no harm to anyone. but my friend lost someone special to her and so we
are looking for her."
the couple looked at eachother and to the shadows again and another man
walked out. he looked really old and all three women bowed slightly to
him. he seemed slightly surprised at the instant respect but smiled at
them. "my son saw a girl come from the sky and fall in front of the
group of monsters." he nodded at the man next to the woman that spoke
before.
"she had long brown hair that was braided down her back and she was about
my wifes hieght." the man nodded at the woman next to him.
"excuse us our discourticy. my name is Fuu and my two friends are Hikaru
and Umi. we are looking for Hikaru's daughter. we think she came here."
Fuu introduced and indicated each as their name was mentioned.
the man looked at Hikaru and asked her to turn around. "yes you could
be related to the girl i saw. both of you have the same... uh," he
looked aprehensivly at his wife. "you have the same feel."
"the same presence. yes, i guess that could be true. what happened to
her?" hikaru.
"we left after she deflected an attack that was headed toward our group.
we didn't wish to be seen." he looked at the ground.
"you left a girl that fell from the sky to fight off a group of monsters
by herself?! did you even think that she might not know what was going
on?" Hikaru was pissed. a fire lit up her palm as she stood there. the
other people moved back with wide eyes. Hikaru looked at her palm and
gasped and closed her hand to extingish the flame. "sorry, i think you
were right when you said that she was my daughter."
the people looked at the three forgieners and didn't take anymore steps
away but were still very wary. Umi" i think we should go look for her.
thank you for the information. and may i ask your names?"
"yes, mine is Tran and my wife is Merian. our village is near here, but
please be carful. some people arn't used to others having powers." and
they left. the girls turned around and left.
"lets go to the palace and see if Mage Clef can help us. besides, even
though we have our powers we need to get sutable clothing and armor." Fuu
they nodded and walked in the opposite direction the villagers had gone.
`with lantis`
that way. and he followed the trail of the elusive mage that he had been
tracking for a while. it seemed that there was someone with her besides
her usual monster companions. odd, she usually works alone.
"Nomki" he said to the wind.
"yes? what do you want Lantis." she stated his name like it was a curse.
"to figure out what life your trying to ruin now." Lantis looked for the
other person that he noticed a while back.
"oh, you looking for someone? whatever," she started to charge up for an
attack. "just leave me alone!" she pointed her ball of electricity at
Lantis.
"STOP!!" a girl stepped out of the trees and faced the two startled
fighters. Lantis stared for a second then stated in a small voice.
"Hikaru?"
thats it for now. bye bye. jane
akoya
disclaimer i don't own anyone you recognize from the series.
zipp- ok. i can't answer all your questions because that will give away
the story. sorta. i kinda just write this out and let things pop into
my head. but i do have a certain story line in mind.
also they all arn't married. only hikaru got married because she wanted
a child and she cared for Sayorie. (hint) if you read that part again
it says that they weren't in love.
to the age thing. well im not sure of their ages but its been about 17
years out of highschool.i think. sounds stupid since its my story but
whatever.
zipp, Ascot Summon, ANIMA-MOUSE-PERSON-SHOUJO, and krylancelo- tanks
for reviewing and i hope you like the story.
after the pillar is gone
by akoya
chapter 5
`where the monsters were`
"AHHHHHHHHHHH!" screamed three voices as they landed on the ground a
little roughly."ow.ow.ow." was the main sentimant from the three women.
"atleast the portal isn't very high off the ground now." umi said as she
dusted herself off.
"true." Fuu looked around at their surroundings. "it looks like we are
in the forest next to the castle. this is where Ferio and i met." Fuu
whispered to herself the last sentince.
"who are you?" a menicing voice demanded out of the shadow of a large
tree.
"were surrounded" hikaru said dead pan. Umi looked at hikaru and silently
gasped to herself. Hikaru's eyes had fires in them. (like a reflection)
"what do you want?"
"we want to know who you are and why all of you keep falling from the
sky." a couple stepped out of the folage and looked at the group of
women in front of them.
"'keep falling from the sky'? there was someone besides us that came
from the sky?" Hikaru asked calming down.
"yes." the woman answered after a few seconds." she was seen by our
scout group who was scouting out the monsters that had set fire to the
niegboring village."
all three women looked at eachother surprised that there were still
monsters around. Fuu looked at the couple and spoke, "excuse us please,
this is.... news to us and we have not been here for a while. we wish
no harm to anyone. but my friend lost someone special to her and so we
are looking for her."
the couple looked at eachother and to the shadows again and another man
walked out. he looked really old and all three women bowed slightly to
him. he seemed slightly surprised at the instant respect but smiled at
them. "my son saw a girl come from the sky and fall in front of the
group of monsters." he nodded at the man next to the woman that spoke
before.
"she had long brown hair that was braided down her back and she was about
my wifes hieght." the man nodded at the woman next to him.
"excuse us our discourticy. my name is Fuu and my two friends are Hikaru
and Umi. we are looking for Hikaru's daughter. we think she came here."
Fuu introduced and indicated each as their name was mentioned.
the man looked at Hikaru and asked her to turn around. "yes you could
be related to the girl i saw. both of you have the same... uh," he
looked aprehensivly at his wife. "you have the same feel."
"the same presence. yes, i guess that could be true. what happened to
her?" hikaru.
"we left after she deflected an attack that was headed toward our group.
we didn't wish to be seen." he looked at the ground.
"you left a girl that fell from the sky to fight off a group of monsters
by herself?! did you even think that she might not know what was going
on?" Hikaru was pissed. a fire lit up her palm as she stood there. the
other people moved back with wide eyes. Hikaru looked at her palm and
gasped and closed her hand to extingish the flame. "sorry, i think you
were right when you said that she was my daughter."
the people looked at the three forgieners and didn't take anymore steps
away but were still very wary. Umi" i think we should go look for her.
thank you for the information. and may i ask your names?"
"yes, mine is Tran and my wife is Merian. our village is near here, but
please be carful. some people arn't used to others having powers." and
they left. the girls turned around and left.
"lets go to the palace and see if Mage Clef can help us. besides, even
though we have our powers we need to get sutable clothing and armor." Fuu
they nodded and walked in the opposite direction the villagers had gone.
`with lantis`
that way. and he followed the trail of the elusive mage that he had been
tracking for a while. it seemed that there was someone with her besides
her usual monster companions. odd, she usually works alone.
"Nomki" he said to the wind.
"yes? what do you want Lantis." she stated his name like it was a curse.
"to figure out what life your trying to ruin now." Lantis looked for the
other person that he noticed a while back.
"oh, you looking for someone? whatever," she started to charge up for an
attack. "just leave me alone!" she pointed her ball of electricity at
Lantis.
"STOP!!" a girl stepped out of the trees and faced the two startled
fighters. Lantis stared for a second then stated in a small voice.
"Hikaru?"
thats it for now. bye bye. jane
akoya
