Well I back and glad to see that a:) people liked the last two chapters
And b:) that lynx didn't stuff anything so it looks like I can trust him to
not stuff around with my stuff too much.
Anyway as I didn't get to thank all the reviewers last time here's an
extended thankyou list
Emotionless Shadow thanks for appreciating my dancing pretty pink piccolo's I thought everone had missed that and I'll check your fics out as soon as I can get my net time back which considering how often I hammer it, could be awhile.
Jetforce of course it's different it's chapter 7, I got to through something in out of the blue every so often.
Time Twins thanks i'll see what I can do
DEE that is the plan but as lynz says "why plan when you can improvise"
Majunior good to see i've still got the knack, if you want some more check out "the great spandex adventure" the first couple of chapters really need to be edited a bit but the rest isn't to bad (at least not in lynx or my views)
Silver_shelter good to see you again and yes I don't really want to have videl saying uncle to vegeta as much either but what else is there there's only calling him vegeta all the time I mean videl could call him prince but I can't see that happening even in fanfic or hey you spikey hair but she does like to live as much as the next girl so what else is there. If anyone has some ideas please let me know.
A-man thanks
Jetforce good to see you like my fic enough to review the last two chapters thanks
Druth thanks it's good to have someone telling me what i'm doing wrong I can't fix it otherwise I'll try to implement the changes in this chapter and as for turles i've no idea what relation he is to goku just that he is and I had seen the brother thing so I thought this is fanfic lets try something new
Disclaimer : I'm really worried now, after letting lynx do the last disclaimer i'm more confused than I was before. I know that I don't own dbz and I don't think lynx does but he's got me worried all the same.
Repentance Chapter 9 : Introduction to family and extended training.
"Okay videl this is my GR, I set the rules, these are for your safety, if you don't follow you could die are you listening"said vegeta with his typical stance leaned back, arms crossed, scowl etched across his face. "Yes yes vegeta now can I just train" sarcasm evident in her words. "Damnit girl you may be my sisters daughter but that doesn't give you the right to train in my personal space. You do so at my pleasure and that means you listen or your out"fumed vegata. "Very well vegeta what are these rules of yours" "That's a better attitude it will keep you alive longer now the rules are 1:) never touch the control panel. If you do you will almost certainly kill yourself if you need the settings changed then ask me and 2:) do not open of of the side doors without first getting me to turn off the gravity or the rooms will pressurize and be destroyed and that will annoy bulma and consequently me significantly, bulma doesn't like her home destroyed and will exact vengence against all that are responsible, you don't want to see that vengence I have and believe me it's not pretty"shuddering "All right vegeta i'll do as you say, so how are you going to train me then" "Right as gohan has at least given you some training I start you off at 10x gravity and move it up as you grow more comfortable" walking over to the gr controls vegeta sets it up for 10x gravity. "Now I want you to start doing so of the kata's that gohan has taught you so I can observe your basic skill level before I start training you for real" "Okay" 10 minutes later "Right that's not to bad for your first time under gravity now go through the third and fifth forms of that kata again" "Okay I think i've got it, for the way you position yourself i'd say your used to battling multiple enemies that are weaker than you but rarely engage in a full on spar against someone either as strong as yourself or stronger" "What about gohan then, I spar with him all the time"interjected videl "He's barely trying, infact he's actively holding back to stop from hurting you accidently, he's not pushing you to your limits and then beyond them as would happen with someone closer to your own power level" "So what do you suggest then"videl asked "For multiple opponents leave your stance as it is, it works and there's no flaws so why change it, for single opponents tighten your upper blocking positions up, loose is good for multiple opponents, all it does against a single opponent is open yourself up to attack, also tighten your swivel stance for the same reason, now i'm going to raise the gravity to 20x so go through your kata again putting those changes into effect"said vegeta as he wandered over to the controls to affect the change. "Ohh bugger this is a lot harder than before"groaned videl "Of course, intense training isn't spose to be easy but it is the only way to increase one's power outside of battle" "Right can you at least tell me about my heritage a bit though while i'm training" "Okay just concentrate on your kata while i'm telling you though" Deep breath
"You are a princess of the line of queen Vasti, my mother, she was the first female saiyan to break the 10 000 barrier in ten generations. Our lineage is reckoned from our deeds for example my lineage would be of the kings of vegeta-sei dating back to vegeta the first, the first super saiyan- jin, and also that of my father king vegeta the 1001th king who achived a power of 800 000 more than any other in 6 generations. I could also just state that I was vegeta the 1002, prince and super saiyan-jin level 1 and 2" "So how would I be introduced formally to other saiyan-jins then"inquired videl "Formally as princess of vegeta-sei, granddaughter of vasti, warrior elite"vegeta responded "So that is your lineage, now there is also the protocol that would be expected of you, the only royal that you are expected to show deference to is the king as he is the our ruler, even though I am the ruling prince you would not be expected to show deference to me, only respect and honor the same is true also of your grandmother though because you are recognized formally as of her line you are expected to greatly honor and emulate her more than any other royal except the king" "Okay so what else is there, any functions or duties I would be expected to attend or carry out" "Yes were you on vegeta-sei you would be expected to preside at the royal ball every new moon this only happened every two years(A/n who know who cares)and was were the young males and females met and were able to look for a mate in a socially acceptable environment and by that I mean the males would brag about their combat excellence and the females would appear in their finery so as to impress the males with their charms"trying to hide a smirk "I didn't think that saiyan-jin females dressed themselves up"queried videl "Your right they didn't as a rule, they dressed for battle, in armor the same as the men, this was the only occasion they dressed up so they made the most of it, so did the men it was the only occasion they could see the females without layers of armor on them so they enjoyed it too"the smirk was now fully visible "So if that's the functions that I would have been involved in what would have my duties for the rest of the year been" "Well in the event that a group of female warriors were being sent out to purge a planet you would have led them otherwise you would have been the palace's tour guide showing any visitors around and generally showing of your good looks" "So I wouldn't have had that much to do then" "No not really but then you would have been encouraged to use your free time to increase your combat skills" "The more things change the more they stay the same" "Philosophical ehh must be time for an increase in gravity" "BUGGER and I was getting used to this too" Snicker snicker snicker "Hehehe 40x here we go ten minutes at this level and then we'll go for food" "Yippee food, oh yeh that reminds me how come I don't eat as much as you or the others" "Simple your a saiyan-jin female they didn't eat as much as the men but still ate a resonable amount I bet you could outeat most of the males when you were in high-school though" "Well yeah I did, I always wondered about that"she admitted "Damn this is bloody hard work trying to think,talk and train at the same time" "Yes it can be at first how about you finish up and we go for tea" "Sound great"
Finishing her kata videl has a shower in the rest area before putting on a spare clean gi. Then vegeta and videl leave the GR
/*/ wowan i'm home and i've got a surprise for you /*/ /*/ really veggie where are you /*/ /*/ heading for the kitchen I'll meet you there /*/
"Were you talking telepahically then vegeta" "Yes, it's good to see you can recognise it but don't let on or the banshee's will descend on you with wedding bells in their eyes" "Right I'll remember that"
"Vegeta there you are, where did you get to after that presentation today oh and hi videl" "Oh I just went with videl and kakka-brat 1 over to interrogate the savior of the world" Insert favourite sarcastic saying here "Oh how come" "Just wanted some answers from him" "Vegeta you don't ask people questions without a good reason what's up" "Oh nothing much but I probably should properly introduce videl to you" "Why what's she done" "Oh nothing, she's only my niece" "Your niece" gradual falling over followed by CLONCK Trunks walks into the kitchen " hi dad hey videl" "Hey trunks" "Son" "Uh dad why is mom on the floor" "I just re-introduced her to videl" "But why would that knock her out mom knows videl" "Because I just found out that videl is my niece making her your cousin" "Cousin" wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee CLONCK "They're both out that means we'll have to wait for them to wake up before we can have some food" "Yeah"grumbled vegeta.
Okay thats 9 it could be longer but I want to go to bed and this way I still have some idea of what to put in the next few chapters. The next chapter will be up possibly Wednesday, Thursday at the latest, anyway until then R&R
Emotionless Shadow thanks for appreciating my dancing pretty pink piccolo's I thought everone had missed that and I'll check your fics out as soon as I can get my net time back which considering how often I hammer it, could be awhile.
Jetforce of course it's different it's chapter 7, I got to through something in out of the blue every so often.
Time Twins thanks i'll see what I can do
DEE that is the plan but as lynz says "why plan when you can improvise"
Majunior good to see i've still got the knack, if you want some more check out "the great spandex adventure" the first couple of chapters really need to be edited a bit but the rest isn't to bad (at least not in lynx or my views)
Silver_shelter good to see you again and yes I don't really want to have videl saying uncle to vegeta as much either but what else is there there's only calling him vegeta all the time I mean videl could call him prince but I can't see that happening even in fanfic or hey you spikey hair but she does like to live as much as the next girl so what else is there. If anyone has some ideas please let me know.
A-man thanks
Jetforce good to see you like my fic enough to review the last two chapters thanks
Druth thanks it's good to have someone telling me what i'm doing wrong I can't fix it otherwise I'll try to implement the changes in this chapter and as for turles i've no idea what relation he is to goku just that he is and I had seen the brother thing so I thought this is fanfic lets try something new
Disclaimer : I'm really worried now, after letting lynx do the last disclaimer i'm more confused than I was before. I know that I don't own dbz and I don't think lynx does but he's got me worried all the same.
Repentance Chapter 9 : Introduction to family and extended training.
"Okay videl this is my GR, I set the rules, these are for your safety, if you don't follow you could die are you listening"said vegeta with his typical stance leaned back, arms crossed, scowl etched across his face. "Yes yes vegeta now can I just train" sarcasm evident in her words. "Damnit girl you may be my sisters daughter but that doesn't give you the right to train in my personal space. You do so at my pleasure and that means you listen or your out"fumed vegata. "Very well vegeta what are these rules of yours" "That's a better attitude it will keep you alive longer now the rules are 1:) never touch the control panel. If you do you will almost certainly kill yourself if you need the settings changed then ask me and 2:) do not open of of the side doors without first getting me to turn off the gravity or the rooms will pressurize and be destroyed and that will annoy bulma and consequently me significantly, bulma doesn't like her home destroyed and will exact vengence against all that are responsible, you don't want to see that vengence I have and believe me it's not pretty"shuddering "All right vegeta i'll do as you say, so how are you going to train me then" "Right as gohan has at least given you some training I start you off at 10x gravity and move it up as you grow more comfortable" walking over to the gr controls vegeta sets it up for 10x gravity. "Now I want you to start doing so of the kata's that gohan has taught you so I can observe your basic skill level before I start training you for real" "Okay" 10 minutes later "Right that's not to bad for your first time under gravity now go through the third and fifth forms of that kata again" "Okay I think i've got it, for the way you position yourself i'd say your used to battling multiple enemies that are weaker than you but rarely engage in a full on spar against someone either as strong as yourself or stronger" "What about gohan then, I spar with him all the time"interjected videl "He's barely trying, infact he's actively holding back to stop from hurting you accidently, he's not pushing you to your limits and then beyond them as would happen with someone closer to your own power level" "So what do you suggest then"videl asked "For multiple opponents leave your stance as it is, it works and there's no flaws so why change it, for single opponents tighten your upper blocking positions up, loose is good for multiple opponents, all it does against a single opponent is open yourself up to attack, also tighten your swivel stance for the same reason, now i'm going to raise the gravity to 20x so go through your kata again putting those changes into effect"said vegeta as he wandered over to the controls to affect the change. "Ohh bugger this is a lot harder than before"groaned videl "Of course, intense training isn't spose to be easy but it is the only way to increase one's power outside of battle" "Right can you at least tell me about my heritage a bit though while i'm training" "Okay just concentrate on your kata while i'm telling you though" Deep breath
"You are a princess of the line of queen Vasti, my mother, she was the first female saiyan to break the 10 000 barrier in ten generations. Our lineage is reckoned from our deeds for example my lineage would be of the kings of vegeta-sei dating back to vegeta the first, the first super saiyan- jin, and also that of my father king vegeta the 1001th king who achived a power of 800 000 more than any other in 6 generations. I could also just state that I was vegeta the 1002, prince and super saiyan-jin level 1 and 2" "So how would I be introduced formally to other saiyan-jins then"inquired videl "Formally as princess of vegeta-sei, granddaughter of vasti, warrior elite"vegeta responded "So that is your lineage, now there is also the protocol that would be expected of you, the only royal that you are expected to show deference to is the king as he is the our ruler, even though I am the ruling prince you would not be expected to show deference to me, only respect and honor the same is true also of your grandmother though because you are recognized formally as of her line you are expected to greatly honor and emulate her more than any other royal except the king" "Okay so what else is there, any functions or duties I would be expected to attend or carry out" "Yes were you on vegeta-sei you would be expected to preside at the royal ball every new moon this only happened every two years(A/n who know who cares)and was were the young males and females met and were able to look for a mate in a socially acceptable environment and by that I mean the males would brag about their combat excellence and the females would appear in their finery so as to impress the males with their charms"trying to hide a smirk "I didn't think that saiyan-jin females dressed themselves up"queried videl "Your right they didn't as a rule, they dressed for battle, in armor the same as the men, this was the only occasion they dressed up so they made the most of it, so did the men it was the only occasion they could see the females without layers of armor on them so they enjoyed it too"the smirk was now fully visible "So if that's the functions that I would have been involved in what would have my duties for the rest of the year been" "Well in the event that a group of female warriors were being sent out to purge a planet you would have led them otherwise you would have been the palace's tour guide showing any visitors around and generally showing of your good looks" "So I wouldn't have had that much to do then" "No not really but then you would have been encouraged to use your free time to increase your combat skills" "The more things change the more they stay the same" "Philosophical ehh must be time for an increase in gravity" "BUGGER and I was getting used to this too" Snicker snicker snicker "Hehehe 40x here we go ten minutes at this level and then we'll go for food" "Yippee food, oh yeh that reminds me how come I don't eat as much as you or the others" "Simple your a saiyan-jin female they didn't eat as much as the men but still ate a resonable amount I bet you could outeat most of the males when you were in high-school though" "Well yeah I did, I always wondered about that"she admitted "Damn this is bloody hard work trying to think,talk and train at the same time" "Yes it can be at first how about you finish up and we go for tea" "Sound great"
Finishing her kata videl has a shower in the rest area before putting on a spare clean gi. Then vegeta and videl leave the GR
/*/ wowan i'm home and i've got a surprise for you /*/ /*/ really veggie where are you /*/ /*/ heading for the kitchen I'll meet you there /*/
"Were you talking telepahically then vegeta" "Yes, it's good to see you can recognise it but don't let on or the banshee's will descend on you with wedding bells in their eyes" "Right I'll remember that"
"Vegeta there you are, where did you get to after that presentation today oh and hi videl" "Oh I just went with videl and kakka-brat 1 over to interrogate the savior of the world" Insert favourite sarcastic saying here "Oh how come" "Just wanted some answers from him" "Vegeta you don't ask people questions without a good reason what's up" "Oh nothing much but I probably should properly introduce videl to you" "Why what's she done" "Oh nothing, she's only my niece" "Your niece" gradual falling over followed by CLONCK Trunks walks into the kitchen " hi dad hey videl" "Hey trunks" "Son" "Uh dad why is mom on the floor" "I just re-introduced her to videl" "But why would that knock her out mom knows videl" "Because I just found out that videl is my niece making her your cousin" "Cousin" wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee CLONCK "They're both out that means we'll have to wait for them to wake up before we can have some food" "Yeah"grumbled vegeta.
Okay thats 9 it could be longer but I want to go to bed and this way I still have some idea of what to put in the next few chapters. The next chapter will be up possibly Wednesday, Thursday at the latest, anyway until then R&R