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Adbzfan2k03 hehe I got to put in the odd cliffy now and then, though i'll try to not make it a habit.
DEADGURL yeah them kiwi birds have you seen the cartoons with taz chasing the kiwi birds around and then a big one comes and scares him off LOL anyway thanks.
Z thanks for thinking the gods cool I thought urth's (I've read your bio I get your spelling) got Dende if i'm wishing the saiyan-jins back I got to give them some gods too, and yeah all the saiyan-jins are evantually coming to earth this is just the advance party and I agree with you on mark the sound man. My zoids fic i'm thinking of would be a song fic with van and fiona I just have to figure out how to mesh it together. Killing random characters is fun unfortunately there's not going to be that many in this fic I can't just bring the saiyan-jins back and then kill half of them off, mind you with lynx probably doing the fight scenes i'm sure he'll find a way around that.
Tm good to see you and pink is the major colour, for some reason the saiyan-jins don't seem to like that colour but i'm sure I can find another to through in now and then. And yes that poor pink kiwi bird will soon be corrupted by vegeta mind you I think it would like to get it's own back on dende for turning him pink.yesss I can visualise it now THE ATTACK OF THE KIWI BIRD.
BmAtH2002 yep you know exactly what i'm doing and i'm sure there will be some interesting conversations involving Radditz and Nappa.
DEE thats actaully not a bad idea thanks I wonder If I could make that Vegeta's new royal crest.
Disclaimer : as Vegeta hasn't been able to sneak the dragon radar past Bulma yet I don't own DBZ (sniff)
Repentance Chapter 13 : The meeting part 2.
Vegeta and the others looked at the fighter who was landing before them and saw a female 5'11 with long strait black hair reaching halfway down her back.
She landed and looked around at the assembled group "hmm 8 lets see one little green namek he'll be the guardian, hmm two boys one looks saiyan-jin with that hair and the other, must have interesting parents to get that hair colour. Two teenagers ahh young love, the boy looks powerful and the girl hmmm she's no weakling, she reminds me of someone though. One human female nice hair colour must be the mother of that other kid. And two saiyan-jins one spiky haired looks like Bardock without the scar could be his son and the other, vertical crest(gasp) looks just like father without the goatee, Vegeta is that you brother" Vanessa said describing the scene before her.
Running to her Vegeta embraces his sister (common he's not a total heartless bastard) "Vanessa dear sister it's so good to see you again but you have a more important priority now than catching up with me"
"Ohh how so"
"That girl you thought looked familiar look at her eyes" Vegeta directed.
"Okay, (shifts her glance across) no it can't be vi Videl is that you oh my daughter you've grown so much I haven't seen you for so long" running from Vegeta to Videl, Vanessa embraces her daughter.
"Oh mum it's so good to see you but why did you never come back" Videl wonders as she embraces her mother.
"I wanted to but you know your father, I just couldn't stand being around that ego of his and that was before his so called win over Cell I wonder how bad it got after that." Vanessa explained.
"Wait you know what happened at the Cell games" Videl asked shocked.
"No but I felt Cell's power there's no way in HFIl hercule could have even so much as farted in his general direction why what happened" Vanessa told her daughter.
"Did you see the telecast (seeing her mother shake her head) okay well the Z-fighters took on Cell after Dad had a go and cell just flicked him out of the ring, then Goku the spiky haired guy over there took on Cell but eventually realised he couldn't beat him so he passed the fight on to his son Gohan my boyfriend anyway then Gohan got knocked around a bit because he didn't really want to fight but Cell then stated attacking his friends and then Gohan powered up something chronic and started whopping Cell ass unfortunately he got careless which gave Cell a chance to self-destruct but Goku sacrificed himself to get Cell off earth, he knows some sort of teleportation move, anyway Cell didn't really die and gave back stronger than ever and then Gohan and Cell had a massive ki blast Showdown with everyone else helping and eventually they defeated Cell" Videl explained the events of the Cell games to her mother.
"Okay I think I got that bit, but how did you find out your dad wouldn't have told you" Vanessa wondered.
"Well Gohan shared some of his memories with me after I kept bugging him to" Videl explained.
"Makes sense, but I still don't see where they got the power from, my ki sensing skill isn't great but I would have said that cell was over 100 million"
"He was but then so were we, Vegeta was probably the lowest out of us saiyan-jins and he was 105 million dad was 125 the same as Cell I was 145 before my second transformation Mirai trunks was 115." Gohan explained to Vanessa.
"Second transformation but none of you have tails neither do I if it comes to that so what transformation are you talking about" Vanessa was really confused now.
"Super saiyan-jin, those power levels were our transformed powers" Gohan clarified for her.
"Super saiyan-jin your all super saiyan-jins but I thought that was just a legend" Vanessa was amazed.
"Not quite Dad was the first then Vegeta then me but I was the first to ascend to level two" Gohan said pride evident in his words.
"Level two how many levels are there" Vanessa was clearly shocked she believed that super Saiyan-jin was a legend and now there were levels of it.
"Three we know of but dad's the only one to get to it yet besides Gotenks (right spelling?) and he doesn't count"
"Hey" Goten and trunks yelled.
"Who's this Gotenks" Vanessa was getting more confused by the minute.
"Ohh that's Goten, my younger brother, and trunks, Vegeta's son, fused form"
"Riiiight It looks like I got a lot of catching up to do so what's the current status on every ones power" Vanessa wondered trying to get a comparison to her own.
"Well Vegeta's the strongest of us in Level two because he trains almost non stop but he can't go level 3 yet dad in level 3 is about 450 million the same as my power in my mystic form but I can still I think go level 1 on top of that though that would put my power in the billions and probably shred the place. Goten and trunks can both go level 1 but trunks is at the moment just stronger due to Vegeta training him more and last we checked Videl was 3200 but that's probably gone up a bit cause Vegeta's decided to give her gravity training so what yours" Gohan concluded.
"12000 and I thought I was doing well my power's nothing compared to yours" Vanessa said shamefully.
"Don't worry sister I have a training session for Videl this afternoon you can join if you want" Vegeta informed Vanessa.
"Thanks Vegeta"
"That's okay so Kakkarot what are we doing about the others"
"Hmmm how about we meet back up here tomorrow and sense were there landing from here that way we're in a good central location to start from" Goku suggested.
"Good idea well Vanessa, Videl follow me Dende where's Mr Popo"
"Umm just inside why"
"No reason"smirking
"Bulma and Trunks you can go into the library while your waiting for Vegeta" Dende Suggested.
"Thanks" Bulma said as she dragged Trunks and Goten into the library.
"Mr Popo I want you to set us up the pendulum room so I can do some training with my sister and niece"
"(shocked) umm sure Vegeta how intense"
"The purpose is to test them not me i'm only there to supervise"
"Right well step this way then"
Phew 4 hours must stop mum dragging me away from the computer
Right next time training for Vanessa and Videl in the pendulum room with Vegeta I'll see if lynx is around to do the fight scenes so I can give you an idea of what he's like however this may delay post time until late afternoon so until then tell me what you think R&R