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Disclaimer : Vegeta's told me to expect the dragon radar tomorrow I can hardly wait.
Repentance Chapter 15 : The Saiyan-jins arrive.
Vegeta, Vanessa and Videl walked across to the center of the lookout to wait for the Son's to arrive. Seeing them out of the chamber Bulma and Trunks had joined them as they had slept in the library. (Trunks hadn't been able to prise Bulma away from such a store of knowledge.)
20 minutes passed and Vegeta was getting visibly annoyed he had wanted to talk to Kakarrot before the Saiyan-jins showed up so they could at least get their alibi's sorted out ie. Why they hadn't wished their race back? Vegeta was getting worried that some one was going to ask that question and he didn't really have a suitable answer besides the 'umm I forgot'. He really didn't think that would wash with his father. While the scowl of deep thinking was still etched across his face he detected a high ki approaching the lookout. "Kakkarot better hope for his sake that that is him coming" Vegeta snarled but the scowl of a few moments earlier had been replaced by one of sheer desperation and hopefulness.
"Sorry to disappoint you Vegeta but your ki sensing seems to have dropped of, that's Gohan coming besides wouldn't Goku just teleport here." Videl added destroying vegeta's hopeful look. The desperation on his face was now pitiful to behold.
"I'm doomed no Kakkarot's brat can help me he must." Vegeta was starting to clutch at straws now.
Gohan landed besides the group and seeing Vegeta's expression took a big step back. "umm hi"
"Gohan you've got to help me where's Kakkarot I need him so we can formulate our alibi's." Vegeta begged desperately.
"Umm there's a minor problem there you see. I was quick enough to escape unfortunately mum's in one of her moods, she's got dad and Goten both locked in the basement and if they move at all she whacks them over the head with her frypan. To make matter's worse dad can't teleport from inside the house the ability gets canceled out somehow." Gohan relayed sheepishly.
"No that means I'm doomed" Vegeta looked desperate.
"It sure does." Videl said as she pointed upwards at the red contrails that were starting to form across the sky.
Vegeta looked like the sky had fallen on him for a second then composed himself " well it's too late now, let's go meet them" and turning was about to blast after the contrails when.
"Wait I can tell you Vegeta where they're going to land Gohan's Trigonometry lessons have done at least some good." The look of horror on Videl's face was belied by her calm words.
"They're going to land on the outskirts of Satan city."
Bulma and Vanessa's words echoed across the lookout "OOOOHHHHH SHIIIITTTT"
"To right, well we've no time to waste if we want to stop an intergalatic war between the saiyan-jins and that afro-ed fool." With that Vegeta grabbed Bulma and blasted off in the direction of Satan City.
"He right after him" Vanessa followed suit with the rest following behind.
The four saiyan-jin space pods crashed into ground activating the door releases. Slowly, cramped after there flight they come out but not to the welcome they expected.
"Invaders of earth I Hercule it's greatest warrior will stop you. In four days I will hold a tournament and there you will be defeated YEAH." With his customarily premature victory salute Hercule did indeed look a sight, a very stupid one.
Looking from one to the other all six simultaneously did the same thing "HAHAHAHHAHA"
They cacked themselves laughing.
"A tournament ehh why what do you expect us to do ginyu force poses? Even those could beat you." Radditz was having a had time staying on his feat he really had a strong desire to roll around laughing his brains out.
"Who do you think your mocking I'm the world champion I can defeat anyone" Hercule's customary ego though had taken a serious hit nobody mocked him like this.
"Okay then hit me right here on the head hard as you can" Radditz walked forward to within a metre a Hercule before stopping and pointing to his head still stuggling to contain his laughter.
Finally a free hit Hercule knew he had this made "Satan mega punch." he launched with all his might.
Radditz never moved "what that's all, my little nephew could hit harder than that when he was 4 I thought you said you were strong"
"Thanks for the compliment uncle, don't worry about afro head he's just the people champion they don't know about us" Gohan landed and behind the rest of the group did the same.
"AHH it's that demon kid that's going out with my daughter and your his uncle right tournament four days see you there RUN AWAY RUN AWAY." Hercule finished relaying to Radditz before sprinting off in a speed even Gohan found hard to follow.
"Yep still the same, runs at the first sign of danger. Running away must be his only successful technique." Gohan related.
"Demon kid what the story there Gohan." Radditz enquired.
"He took credit for one of my victories as I was unconscious after the fight and he's worried I'll tell the world he's a liar otherwise long story" Gohan answered managing to avoid relating the cell games account again.
"Right you'll have to tell me some time, anyway introduce us to who we don't know and everyone this is my nephew, Kakkarot son, Gohan in case you missed that earlier." Radditz said to his fellow travelers.
"Our grandson" Bardock and Celera started forward and hugged Gohan.
"Can't breathe need air" Gohan managed to get out under the smothering of his grandparents.
"Sorry so who is everyone" Bardock and Celera repeated Radditz request after releasing their grip on Gohan.
"Okay well Vegeta you know, the tall woman next to him is his sister Vanessa, on Vegeta's other side is his mate Bulma and his son Trunks. That leaves my girlfriend Videl Vanessa's daughter. My dad and younger brother Goten are at home because mom's in of her moods at the moment." Gohan finished introducing everyone.
"Her moods" Radditz Questioned.
"Yeah she just wants to belt anything that moves I was lucky enough to escape in time before she managed to trap dad and Goten in the basement." Gohan grimaced as he thought just how close his escape had been.
"Oh nasty so now what" Radditz too grimaced he knew how strong his nephew and brother had been, anyone that put fear into them like that couldn't be good especially not when the person in question was your sister in law.
Okay that will do for now next chapter Vegeta/Vanessa/Videl interaction with their parents/grandparents. Anyway tell me what you think R&R