NOTE: this is Eriol-kun point of view.
Something in You
There's something in your eyes no one can see, Yet, I can and these really what bothers me. I've asked you if you're all right, you just nod and smile but I know behind those smiles were anguish of cry. How come no one can see the bitter your bringing inside your hearts and I'm curse to see and feel what's that heaviness you're carrying now. So much for your pretense, I could sense what nobody can. What's the reason for all these, how come I know, how come I feel, how come I see? Are all those people blind? Can't they see the pain behind your smile. What deceit you've put in your face, everyone thought you're happy and content as you get. And what kind of magic bile you've spell, and it comes as though I'm exempted above everyone else. But it seems you don't know that I know so you keep telling me to go. But I'm sorry I can't, because everytime you shed a tear my heart cries out in pain and everytime you felt pain, you shattered my soul into unbreaking spell. Then tell me now, how can I go and let you be when I know I'm a part of your soul where nobody will ever know..
-owari-
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hello readers. I was just wondering if you could check out one of my fic entitled Thank you. I posted it on HxH.well, Tomoyo-chan is one of the main character there. It's Killua + Tomoyo story, but if you don't like those two, well, just don't review. I'm just wondering anyway if you could give me a comment about my writing, not the story. I would appreciate it very much. Thank you! ^^
Something in You
There's something in your eyes no one can see, Yet, I can and these really what bothers me. I've asked you if you're all right, you just nod and smile but I know behind those smiles were anguish of cry. How come no one can see the bitter your bringing inside your hearts and I'm curse to see and feel what's that heaviness you're carrying now. So much for your pretense, I could sense what nobody can. What's the reason for all these, how come I know, how come I feel, how come I see? Are all those people blind? Can't they see the pain behind your smile. What deceit you've put in your face, everyone thought you're happy and content as you get. And what kind of magic bile you've spell, and it comes as though I'm exempted above everyone else. But it seems you don't know that I know so you keep telling me to go. But I'm sorry I can't, because everytime you shed a tear my heart cries out in pain and everytime you felt pain, you shattered my soul into unbreaking spell. Then tell me now, how can I go and let you be when I know I'm a part of your soul where nobody will ever know..
-owari-
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hello readers. I was just wondering if you could check out one of my fic entitled Thank you. I posted it on HxH.well, Tomoyo-chan is one of the main character there. It's Killua + Tomoyo story, but if you don't like those two, well, just don't review. I'm just wondering anyway if you could give me a comment about my writing, not the story. I would appreciate it very much. Thank you! ^^