Hi all, I know it's been awhile, I've been tring to get this next part out, it's taken awhile mind you, but I think it's good. I promise i'll try and have the next part out soon, but real life is interfearing lately. Thank you all for your suggestions. I used part of Bessa's suggestions, thank you they actually lead me to a few more idea's. And thank you to Jonna G who actually emailed me and reminded me that I was slacking with this story. magickal: Thanks for your support, and I think this end is a bit better than the other clif hangers. scattycat: I'm glad you like it, thank you, and I like your idea, it has potential for some more angst. Saphrin: Thanks for the idea, glad you like it. Thank you. Ariel: I'll have the next on out soon.. Hopefully. Riddick's Mistress: I'm glad you like it, and that you can get a feel of Riddick from this. Thank you. ames: Now, I do plan on Riddick loosing up a bit. When is a bit part of the question, but I promise you he will! Thank you! Okay, now I know that is not everyone who reviewed, But i'm very bad at these things, so I just wanted to say thank you to everyone, and that I appreaciate the reviews. Thank you Lexie