One More Chance
Chapter 5
December 25th, 2001
Yuriko*
Authors note: I'm sorry I have not written a chapter for a few months but I have been kind of stumped on what to do next. Well someone wrote a review a while ago asking some questions I should have tried to clear up. So here is what the reviewer wrote and my response. By the way if you are unsure of what is going on by all means send me a message at rina_qt_chan@hotmail.com.
yuriko*,
I can't believe what had just happened in the first chapter. Tell me you made
this up. Because I know for a fact that Mamoru and the Sailor Senshi would
never attempt to kill Usagi. Something just isn't right. So I have these 5
questions to give you at this time. 1. What will the plot of this fanfic be?
2. What happened to Usagi after the ground started to rumble and with that
creature? 3. How will Usagi be brought back? 4. Where will she end up? 5.
What was going on in that dream like state she was in? Be sure to answer
these. I will have a few more later on, probably as this fanfic starts to
progress some more.
Nick Johnson
NICK190843@AOL.COM
Reply
1.This is a fan fiction and usually the author just writes down the beginning of a story on a thought she/ he had been harboring for a while. In this case what was going through my mind was what was happening during the first chapter of this fic. (
2. The creature was an elemental created by the scouts. The scouts must have put a lot of time into mastering and controlling that creature for it to listen to them and not turn on it's mistresses. The ground rumbling was a result of all of the energy that was being harbored by the scouts.
3. I'm not sure what you mean by "Will Usagi be brought back?" If you mean will she be alive by the end of this fic. I hope so she is the main character. But if you mean will she go back to the world she came from I doubt it.
The dream like states she goes into periodically in this fic is her remembering things from her past incarnations.
Well I hope I helped you out by telling you this. Hope to hear from you another time.
- Yuriko*
Thank you now let's move onto the story.
*~* Usagi's Point of View*~*
I moaned, I felt as if something had split my brain in half. But I could not remember what exactly had happened. I sighed, "Just my luck." I muttered to myself. "Getting knocked out my unseen forces, I must have accidentally cursed myself by eating those offerings that Rei had put on her great grandmother's grave." Shaking my head with a sad and amused smile on my face just thinking about how my stupidity had gotten me trouble with creatures of higher position. Sighing again I realized that I was still on the clean pearl white tiled floor of the room 'if it could be called a room' I had resided in for a few months.
Stretching my body in a very cat like way I managed to get out all of the kinks that took foot when I had napped on the floor. 'The tiling is an obvious work of art but it was not made to be slept on.' I thought to myself as I slowly massaged my neck. 'Well let's see if the all forbidding door will finally let me out.'
*~* Kami*~*
Slowly because of the muscle injuries the blonde haired angel girl had attained she made her way to her destination. Her destination was the mahogany gateway which to the outside world, the world of Gaea. Little did she know that after she had walked out of the door she would be taking a tremendous step to her new life. There she abandoned the quite, peaceful carefree room for the adventurous lively world that was just beyond my lookout.
*~* 6 months later*~*
"Just because that pathetic excuse for a god asked for you to stay here does not mean you don't have to earn your keep. How you are going to earn it is sparring with me everyday and not just whenever the hell you decide to. So stop sniffling about that scratch on your hand and get down here." Vegeta barked.
'Vegeta was not to happy with me in the least. I think it was because last week he had figured out I was going to pull a prank on him. So if I trained with him everyday he figured he would be able to keep an eye on me.' I chuckled quietly to myself. 'Little did he know that my mischief making would be done tonight.' With an evil smirk I walked back into the gravity chamber with Vegeta trailing behind me.
"Now let's get back to training." Vegeta said half muffled due to the explosion caused by him unleashing a ki blast. I smiled, this was not going to be hard at all, due to the 9 plus months I spend in what I now know is the Hyperbolic Time Chamber. Immediately I took a defensive stance to eliminate some off the force of one of Vegeta's routines, which consisted screw kick, flip, Big Bang Attack, and powering up. I had given this the name half done because after he always did this he left himself open. Off I went with a flip my spiral fist attack landed strait in the middle of his abdominal muscles. Vegeta gave me an evil glare as to say now your dead. 'Wups, is it to late to take back that attack.' I thought to myself as I saw the huge world-renowned Kamehameha blast come toward me.
And on the battle raged only to end in a stalemate. Snores could be heard softly in the distance as both of the little warriors had fallen asleep in exhaustion in the gravity room. Both wore almost none existent blue training suits. Even though what remained of them was scorched with burn marks the two were barely even marred. The winner of this battle will have to be decided another day.
Author's Note: I promise the next chapter will be longer.
Chapter 5
December 25th, 2001
Yuriko*
Authors note: I'm sorry I have not written a chapter for a few months but I have been kind of stumped on what to do next. Well someone wrote a review a while ago asking some questions I should have tried to clear up. So here is what the reviewer wrote and my response. By the way if you are unsure of what is going on by all means send me a message at rina_qt_chan@hotmail.com.
yuriko*,
I can't believe what had just happened in the first chapter. Tell me you made
this up. Because I know for a fact that Mamoru and the Sailor Senshi would
never attempt to kill Usagi. Something just isn't right. So I have these 5
questions to give you at this time. 1. What will the plot of this fanfic be?
2. What happened to Usagi after the ground started to rumble and with that
creature? 3. How will Usagi be brought back? 4. Where will she end up? 5.
What was going on in that dream like state she was in? Be sure to answer
these. I will have a few more later on, probably as this fanfic starts to
progress some more.
Nick Johnson
NICK190843@AOL.COM
Reply
1.This is a fan fiction and usually the author just writes down the beginning of a story on a thought she/ he had been harboring for a while. In this case what was going through my mind was what was happening during the first chapter of this fic. (
2. The creature was an elemental created by the scouts. The scouts must have put a lot of time into mastering and controlling that creature for it to listen to them and not turn on it's mistresses. The ground rumbling was a result of all of the energy that was being harbored by the scouts.
3. I'm not sure what you mean by "Will Usagi be brought back?" If you mean will she be alive by the end of this fic. I hope so she is the main character. But if you mean will she go back to the world she came from I doubt it.
The dream like states she goes into periodically in this fic is her remembering things from her past incarnations.
Well I hope I helped you out by telling you this. Hope to hear from you another time.
- Yuriko*
Thank you now let's move onto the story.
*~* Usagi's Point of View*~*
I moaned, I felt as if something had split my brain in half. But I could not remember what exactly had happened. I sighed, "Just my luck." I muttered to myself. "Getting knocked out my unseen forces, I must have accidentally cursed myself by eating those offerings that Rei had put on her great grandmother's grave." Shaking my head with a sad and amused smile on my face just thinking about how my stupidity had gotten me trouble with creatures of higher position. Sighing again I realized that I was still on the clean pearl white tiled floor of the room 'if it could be called a room' I had resided in for a few months.
Stretching my body in a very cat like way I managed to get out all of the kinks that took foot when I had napped on the floor. 'The tiling is an obvious work of art but it was not made to be slept on.' I thought to myself as I slowly massaged my neck. 'Well let's see if the all forbidding door will finally let me out.'
*~* Kami*~*
Slowly because of the muscle injuries the blonde haired angel girl had attained she made her way to her destination. Her destination was the mahogany gateway which to the outside world, the world of Gaea. Little did she know that after she had walked out of the door she would be taking a tremendous step to her new life. There she abandoned the quite, peaceful carefree room for the adventurous lively world that was just beyond my lookout.
*~* 6 months later*~*
"Just because that pathetic excuse for a god asked for you to stay here does not mean you don't have to earn your keep. How you are going to earn it is sparring with me everyday and not just whenever the hell you decide to. So stop sniffling about that scratch on your hand and get down here." Vegeta barked.
'Vegeta was not to happy with me in the least. I think it was because last week he had figured out I was going to pull a prank on him. So if I trained with him everyday he figured he would be able to keep an eye on me.' I chuckled quietly to myself. 'Little did he know that my mischief making would be done tonight.' With an evil smirk I walked back into the gravity chamber with Vegeta trailing behind me.
"Now let's get back to training." Vegeta said half muffled due to the explosion caused by him unleashing a ki blast. I smiled, this was not going to be hard at all, due to the 9 plus months I spend in what I now know is the Hyperbolic Time Chamber. Immediately I took a defensive stance to eliminate some off the force of one of Vegeta's routines, which consisted screw kick, flip, Big Bang Attack, and powering up. I had given this the name half done because after he always did this he left himself open. Off I went with a flip my spiral fist attack landed strait in the middle of his abdominal muscles. Vegeta gave me an evil glare as to say now your dead. 'Wups, is it to late to take back that attack.' I thought to myself as I saw the huge world-renowned Kamehameha blast come toward me.
And on the battle raged only to end in a stalemate. Snores could be heard softly in the distance as both of the little warriors had fallen asleep in exhaustion in the gravity room. Both wore almost none existent blue training suits. Even though what remained of them was scorched with burn marks the two were barely even marred. The winner of this battle will have to be decided another day.
Author's Note: I promise the next chapter will be longer.