The Yule Ball
A/N: YoU GuYs aRe sO cUtE!! 40 rEvIeWs? I'M HonOuRed aNd amazed! I LOVE U GUYS! MWAH! REMEMBER TO REVIEW !!!-Practical Princess
Disclaimer: I own only the plot and title, and Hernia-hahaha! *Triumph* Absolutely EVERYTHING else belongs to the Queen of All Books, Miss JK Rowling. ;) I LOVE U JK ROWLING! Lol, I'm so sad!
Draco was getting ready for the ball. He was making sure his dress robes were ok and then he headed out into the Common Room, hands trembling slightly. 'C'mon Draco, don't tell me your NERVOUS!' he spoke to himself.
He knew he didn't like Hernia anymore. She was going with some other dude in Slytherin. He conjured up some red and white roses and some of the white little flowers that go with it.
He sat down and made himself comfortable and waited for Hermione.
Hermione was in HER bedroom and applying makeup. Her dress complimented her eyes, a dark green. She had refreshing green eyeshadow under her eyes and on her eyelids, her long eyelashes kissing her cheeks that were rosy with excitement.
Her lips? A nice dark red and she was applying 'Anastasia's last for the night Lip gloss' which she had found in Diagon Alley. She had on all the other stuff, for her face and stuff and she had on a dark green emerald on one finger on her right hand, which had a few small diamonds around it and a gold band.
Then she had on a gold necklace which had a dark emerald again and some gold earrings.
Her curls were lightly brushed, as to not disturb them and make them buffy. (A/N: which normally happens to me! -PP) At long last, she was READY.
She gracefully stepped out and descended the stairs. Draco's eyes widened, but he didn't do anything as drastic as gasping or something.
'Hermione,' he kissed her hand. 'You look beautiful.' 'Thank you Draco,' she blushed deeply. 'How very kind of you. You look very nice yourself!' 'Thank you Hermione. Ready for the Yule Ball?' he asked, slipping out of all the formal speaking.
'Ready as ready can ever be!'
'Good.' And they made their way down. Once they were in the festive hall, they took a seat at the Prefect Table where all the other prefects were seated, DUH.
After eating a bit, barely because Hermione wasn't that hungry, Draco asked her for a dance.
'Sure,' she replied and they headed out to the Dancefloor, where Hagrid was dancing with Prof McGonagall, Prof Dumbledore with Prof Trelawny and Prof Snape with Prof Sinistra.
Prof Snape was a laugh to look at, because he looked like a preying mantis, his arms and legs everywhere. Harry was dancing in a corner slowly with Ginny, although it was a fast song.
Draco followed Hermione's gaze to them, just before they started dancing. 'They are such a mushy couple, don't you think?' he whispered into her ear. 'I think it's sweet,' she replied. 'Me too.' Hermione laughed.
'Well, lets start dancing,' and they danced to a muggle song by Sophie Ellis Bextor called Murder On the Dancefloor. Now Hermione wasn't exactly a great dancer, and Draco was, but she just followed his steps and they were great together.
'May I cut in?' asked Harry. 'As long as I can dance with Ginny,' smiled Draco. Why are they on such nice terms? Wondered Hermione.
'Sure,' and seeing the look on Hermione's face they both started to laugh. 'Me and Draco have a truce,' explained Harry. 'Oh,' and she looked between the two. 'Well, you can have Ginny and I can have Hermione!' said Harry.
'Good stuff,' said Draco and he smiled at Hermione and took Ginny's hand. 'My, my Hermione, you look gorgeous tonight you do,' said Harry. Hermione smiled, but did not blush, like she did with Draco. 'Thank you very much Harry,' she said.
He smiled. He bent down. 'What are you doing?' she pushed him off and walked to the other end of the hall and took a seat.
She put her hand on her neck and took a sip of Blackberry Juice. 'What just happened there?' she asked herself. 'Hermione!' Draco came.
'Hey Draco.' she said. 'Wassamatter?' he asked, ignorantly considering her case.
'Harry tried to kiss me!?' she said and giggled and hiccupped 'That's enough of champagne Hermione,' said Draco, concernedly. 'Let's go to our quarters, I have enough of this dance.hehe,' she giggled again. 'Ok. Come on,' and he grabbed her hand and pulled her towards the quarters.
She collapsed on the floor, just as they were ascending the stairs and were about to reach the portrait. Draco picked her up, and she giggled and blushed. 'Draco!' she laughed and hiccuped, he smirked.
'It's off to bed....wonder what Harry was doing to you I like you,' he added silently.
He carried her up to her bedroom and lo behold, it was spick and span. He laughed as she clambered out of his arms and started to take off her makeup.
'Make a spell to make my drunkness ness-hic-go away,' she hicupped. 'Drunkfussa Endus,' said Draco. Hermione's eyes rolled delicately.
'Hey, are you okay?' he asked. 'Huh? Oh my god, harry tried to kiss me! What are we doing here! Oh yeah.' she said as her memory became normal.
Once her make up was removed, she applied some lip gloss and went down to sit down next to Draco, looking effortlessly elegant.
'You still would have had looked pretty without makeup if you went to the ball,' he mumbled and blushed. 'Aww Draco!' she said, and smiled at him. He grinned awkwardly back. 'Would you like to dance?' he asked.
'But of course!' said Hermione and accepted his hand. He conjured up some music from nowhere and they started to dance. As Hermione spun he caught a whiff of her hair and almost sighed with contentment. The song finished and he walked to the door, reluctantly, and Hermione followed, reluctantly.
'Spa?' he asked. 'Ok.' 'But bathing suits,' he added. 'Yeah ok!' said Hermione. (A/N: Lol, everyone asks for a spa scene, so here goes nothing- PP)
He went to his bedroom and Hermione changed into a bikini that had a white background and blue, hippie flowers. (A/N: How cute!-PP)
Draco came out, showing off his sixpack with knicker sorts. (A/N-LOL That's what guys wear.-PP) That had black hawaiin flowers on a white background. They hopped into the spa. Bubbles filled the room and Hermione and Draco splashed.
Finally, as he caught her, she looked at him and he looked at her, so basically they were looking at each other and the right thing to do was to lean forward and KISS.
After the kiss ended.
'It's late,' said Hermione and got out and dried herself. 'That's the third kiss.Why are we kissing each other?' asked Draco. 'I dunno.' although they both very well knew why.
'Goodnight,' she said and went to her bedroom. 'Goodnight,' he murmered.
A/N: Ahh, the 10th chappie up AT LAST. GIMME GIMME GIMME GIMME GIMME REVIEWS!
Got it? Great! Tara, and THANK YOU SO MUUUUUUUCH TO..
Draco's American Girl- I LOVE COFFEE! Some times, at the disclaimers and the end author notes, you might see me going a lil spazz, its because coffee makes me HIGH. ^^^^^^^^ Thx for reviewing!
Autumn Took-I'm SO checkin out your story! THANK U FOR REVIEWING!
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BLUEBERRY GIRL!- Hehe, your so NICE!
J.A Santiago-JOYCY! YOUR SO COOT! Lol, everyone, she is so sweet!
Celtic Guardian-Your review doesn't affect me much because all the other GOOD reviews out number you. Lol, im a bitch. The point is, this sotry doesn't have a plot, just makin sure u and I both agree on that. The good points are the fatc that PEOPLE like the mush and 'suspense' lol. Thx for the review.
Sophius-Lossa peeps are sweet.YOUR SO SWEET.
Luza-Hehe,wat a cute NAME. Veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy much tanks.
Black Rein-How does this chapter inflate you bubble? Hehe.
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Firey Fairy-Hope this chappie makes it clear that Draco DOESN'T like Hernia Lol.
Also many thanks to.. |GerHPfa |2002|7|Signe| | |-10-| |d | | |04 | | | |coolgirl3 |2002|7|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |04 | | | |I rily loved your storis. I no wat u min about how hard its 2 | |rite a Qudditch match. Please rite some more. u wil b a gr8 | |riter someday. | |star3003 |2002|6|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |04 | | | |hello! | |It is a great story. I absolutely loved it. Please write some | |more!!!! | |sugary33 |2002|4|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |04 | | | |Hiya! I liked that a lot. You are an extremely good writer. | |However, please include more mushy stuff in your stories because| |it is supposed to be a romance story isn't it? | |Susan |2002|1|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |04 | | | |Hi! I really enjoyed that. It was very good. Please contineu | |writing more chpters! | |(Scarlet Tiger102@aol.com) |2002|7|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |02 | | | |Hey this story ROCKS!!! I know you like review's so here's my | |point of view. | |1.It rocks | |2.It's Super | |3.I love the bathtub scene make more like please maybe somthing | |else that include's the Sauna or somthin | | | |I have to go and you probalbly don't like this review anyway so | |bye | | | |~HorseCrazy567~ | |Autumn Took |2002|7|Signed | | |-10-| | | | |02 | | | |Hey there! Still a terrific story, can't wait to read more, and | |that was a great Quidditch Match! | |Dizzy2381 |2002|7|Signed | | |-10-| | | | |02 | | | |Wow this is great keep writing im on the edge of my seat | |blueberry girl |2002|7|Signed | | |-10-| | | | |02 | | | |Great chapter keep it up :) could you read my story? | |Taryn |2002|7|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |02 | | | |you're doing really well so far, only a few mistakes. oliver | |graduared at the end of the trio's third year, so he is no | |longer at hogwarts during thier fifth year, like you have set | |it. secondly, its quidditch cup, not gryffindor cup. | |Light-bulb |2002|7|Signed | | |-10-| | | | |02 | | | |You did great on the chappie! | |brilliant for a quidditch game! | |Light-bulb |2002|1|Signed | | |-10-| | | | |02 | | | |Hi Practical princess, im light-bulb (or in other words Lara) I | |think your story rocks! I love it! | |And its got a really good hook on to it, and its got a wicked | |plot! | |Man your smart! | |Way to go! | |Laterz | |Lara (light-bulb) | |p.s Please send me/ put up the next part! | | |2002|2|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |02 | | | |are you British? dont mean to be nosy but i really want to know | |;)) | |Jessica |2002|6|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |02 | | | |I think it's great so far you should write more. | |I think it's a cool idea. | |MayDancer27 |2002|5|Signed | | |-10-| | | | |01 | | | |Lovely! Really sweet! :-D Add more soon! | |Reviewer |Date|Chapt|Type | | | |er | | |lys |2002|5 |Signed | | |-10-| | | | |01 | | | |This story is really really cool! I especially| |liked the bathtub scene (ok, it was a bit | |fast, but still ;-) ). Keep on writing, you're| |doing a great job! | |Autumn Took |2002|5 |Anonymou| |(AutumnTook@aol.com) |-09-| |s | | |30 | | | |Hey! Great story! Keep it up! I love | |Draco/Hermione fics! | |TFG |2002|2 |Signed | | |-09-| | | | |30 | | | |Still good! | |TFG |2002|1 |Signed | | |-09-| | | | |30 | | | |This is good so far! | |Liz |2002|4 |Anonymou| |(moviegirl407@yahoo.com) |-09-| |s | | |30 | | | |OMG! THIS IS REALLY GOOD CONTINUE CONTINUE | |CONTINUE! HEHEHHE...DRACO IS HOTT! ;) | |Black Rein |2002|4 |Signed | | |-09-| | | | |30 | | | |plez don't consider this a flamer its just | |edvice i give every one. okay any ways if u | |want a good story and a long one at that don't| |go rushing into details cuz then it will seem | |like real life cuz real life dosen't rush into| |details not unless your a very picky person. | | | |black rein | |janiko |2002|4 |Anonymou| | |-09-| |s | | |30 | | | |hey, u no, ur improving a lot, | |keep writing, i wana no waz up nex! | |angelsmelody13 |2002|4 |Anonymou| |(HorseCrazyGirl1315@hotma|-09-| |s | |il.com) |30 | | | |this is going 2 be a very cool story:) | |hannah |2002|3 |Anonymou| | |-09-| |s | | |29 | | | |dear author princess lady- | |i think your story has a lot of potintial. it | |is very good hurry and finish this story | |because i cant wait. | |**hannah** |
Lol, thax SOO much! AND GUEWSS WHAT! MY BIRHTDAY IS TOMORROW! YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! 15/10/02!!! YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY.. I LOVE U GUYS! YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
OK, LOL. BYE
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A/N: YoU GuYs aRe sO cUtE!! 40 rEvIeWs? I'M HonOuRed aNd amazed! I LOVE U GUYS! MWAH! REMEMBER TO REVIEW !!!-Practical Princess
Disclaimer: I own only the plot and title, and Hernia-hahaha! *Triumph* Absolutely EVERYTHING else belongs to the Queen of All Books, Miss JK Rowling. ;) I LOVE U JK ROWLING! Lol, I'm so sad!
Draco was getting ready for the ball. He was making sure his dress robes were ok and then he headed out into the Common Room, hands trembling slightly. 'C'mon Draco, don't tell me your NERVOUS!' he spoke to himself.
He knew he didn't like Hernia anymore. She was going with some other dude in Slytherin. He conjured up some red and white roses and some of the white little flowers that go with it.
He sat down and made himself comfortable and waited for Hermione.
Hermione was in HER bedroom and applying makeup. Her dress complimented her eyes, a dark green. She had refreshing green eyeshadow under her eyes and on her eyelids, her long eyelashes kissing her cheeks that were rosy with excitement.
Her lips? A nice dark red and she was applying 'Anastasia's last for the night Lip gloss' which she had found in Diagon Alley. She had on all the other stuff, for her face and stuff and she had on a dark green emerald on one finger on her right hand, which had a few small diamonds around it and a gold band.
Then she had on a gold necklace which had a dark emerald again and some gold earrings.
Her curls were lightly brushed, as to not disturb them and make them buffy. (A/N: which normally happens to me! -PP) At long last, she was READY.
She gracefully stepped out and descended the stairs. Draco's eyes widened, but he didn't do anything as drastic as gasping or something.
'Hermione,' he kissed her hand. 'You look beautiful.' 'Thank you Draco,' she blushed deeply. 'How very kind of you. You look very nice yourself!' 'Thank you Hermione. Ready for the Yule Ball?' he asked, slipping out of all the formal speaking.
'Ready as ready can ever be!'
'Good.' And they made their way down. Once they were in the festive hall, they took a seat at the Prefect Table where all the other prefects were seated, DUH.
After eating a bit, barely because Hermione wasn't that hungry, Draco asked her for a dance.
'Sure,' she replied and they headed out to the Dancefloor, where Hagrid was dancing with Prof McGonagall, Prof Dumbledore with Prof Trelawny and Prof Snape with Prof Sinistra.
Prof Snape was a laugh to look at, because he looked like a preying mantis, his arms and legs everywhere. Harry was dancing in a corner slowly with Ginny, although it was a fast song.
Draco followed Hermione's gaze to them, just before they started dancing. 'They are such a mushy couple, don't you think?' he whispered into her ear. 'I think it's sweet,' she replied. 'Me too.' Hermione laughed.
'Well, lets start dancing,' and they danced to a muggle song by Sophie Ellis Bextor called Murder On the Dancefloor. Now Hermione wasn't exactly a great dancer, and Draco was, but she just followed his steps and they were great together.
'May I cut in?' asked Harry. 'As long as I can dance with Ginny,' smiled Draco. Why are they on such nice terms? Wondered Hermione.
'Sure,' and seeing the look on Hermione's face they both started to laugh. 'Me and Draco have a truce,' explained Harry. 'Oh,' and she looked between the two. 'Well, you can have Ginny and I can have Hermione!' said Harry.
'Good stuff,' said Draco and he smiled at Hermione and took Ginny's hand. 'My, my Hermione, you look gorgeous tonight you do,' said Harry. Hermione smiled, but did not blush, like she did with Draco. 'Thank you very much Harry,' she said.
He smiled. He bent down. 'What are you doing?' she pushed him off and walked to the other end of the hall and took a seat.
She put her hand on her neck and took a sip of Blackberry Juice. 'What just happened there?' she asked herself. 'Hermione!' Draco came.
'Hey Draco.' she said. 'Wassamatter?' he asked, ignorantly considering her case.
'Harry tried to kiss me!?' she said and giggled and hiccupped 'That's enough of champagne Hermione,' said Draco, concernedly. 'Let's go to our quarters, I have enough of this dance.hehe,' she giggled again. 'Ok. Come on,' and he grabbed her hand and pulled her towards the quarters.
She collapsed on the floor, just as they were ascending the stairs and were about to reach the portrait. Draco picked her up, and she giggled and blushed. 'Draco!' she laughed and hiccuped, he smirked.
'It's off to bed....wonder what Harry was doing to you I like you,' he added silently.
He carried her up to her bedroom and lo behold, it was spick and span. He laughed as she clambered out of his arms and started to take off her makeup.
'Make a spell to make my drunkness ness-hic-go away,' she hicupped. 'Drunkfussa Endus,' said Draco. Hermione's eyes rolled delicately.
'Hey, are you okay?' he asked. 'Huh? Oh my god, harry tried to kiss me! What are we doing here! Oh yeah.' she said as her memory became normal.
Once her make up was removed, she applied some lip gloss and went down to sit down next to Draco, looking effortlessly elegant.
'You still would have had looked pretty without makeup if you went to the ball,' he mumbled and blushed. 'Aww Draco!' she said, and smiled at him. He grinned awkwardly back. 'Would you like to dance?' he asked.
'But of course!' said Hermione and accepted his hand. He conjured up some music from nowhere and they started to dance. As Hermione spun he caught a whiff of her hair and almost sighed with contentment. The song finished and he walked to the door, reluctantly, and Hermione followed, reluctantly.
'Spa?' he asked. 'Ok.' 'But bathing suits,' he added. 'Yeah ok!' said Hermione. (A/N: Lol, everyone asks for a spa scene, so here goes nothing- PP)
He went to his bedroom and Hermione changed into a bikini that had a white background and blue, hippie flowers. (A/N: How cute!-PP)
Draco came out, showing off his sixpack with knicker sorts. (A/N-LOL That's what guys wear.-PP) That had black hawaiin flowers on a white background. They hopped into the spa. Bubbles filled the room and Hermione and Draco splashed.
Finally, as he caught her, she looked at him and he looked at her, so basically they were looking at each other and the right thing to do was to lean forward and KISS.
After the kiss ended.
'It's late,' said Hermione and got out and dried herself. 'That's the third kiss.Why are we kissing each other?' asked Draco. 'I dunno.' although they both very well knew why.
'Goodnight,' she said and went to her bedroom. 'Goodnight,' he murmered.
A/N: Ahh, the 10th chappie up AT LAST. GIMME GIMME GIMME GIMME GIMME REVIEWS!
Got it? Great! Tara, and THANK YOU SO MUUUUUUUCH TO..
Draco's American Girl- I LOVE COFFEE! Some times, at the disclaimers and the end author notes, you might see me going a lil spazz, its because coffee makes me HIGH. ^^^^^^^^ Thx for reviewing!
Autumn Took-I'm SO checkin out your story! THANK U FOR REVIEWING!
Sophiebabe-You the second horny person to review. Lol, jk! Thanks for the review!
Dizzy2381-Hehe, your cute.
Janiko*-My shining moon! :P ThAnK U FoR ReViEwInG!
BLUEBERRY GIRL!- Hehe, your so NICE!
J.A Santiago-JOYCY! YOUR SO COOT! Lol, everyone, she is so sweet!
Celtic Guardian-Your review doesn't affect me much because all the other GOOD reviews out number you. Lol, im a bitch. The point is, this sotry doesn't have a plot, just makin sure u and I both agree on that. The good points are the fatc that PEOPLE like the mush and 'suspense' lol. Thx for the review.
Sophius-Lossa peeps are sweet.YOUR SO SWEET.
Luza-Hehe,wat a cute NAME. Veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy much tanks.
Black Rein-How does this chapter inflate you bubble? Hehe.
Slytherin Devil-Lol! Your review made me laugh!
Lilpinkbunny-Lol, so cute.
Firey Fairy-Hope this chappie makes it clear that Draco DOESN'T like Hernia Lol.
Also many thanks to.. |GerHPfa |2002|7|Signe| | |-10-| |d | | |04 | | | |coolgirl3 |2002|7|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |04 | | | |I rily loved your storis. I no wat u min about how hard its 2 | |rite a Qudditch match. Please rite some more. u wil b a gr8 | |riter someday. | |star3003 |2002|6|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |04 | | | |hello! | |It is a great story. I absolutely loved it. Please write some | |more!!!! | |sugary33 |2002|4|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |04 | | | |Hiya! I liked that a lot. You are an extremely good writer. | |However, please include more mushy stuff in your stories because| |it is supposed to be a romance story isn't it? | |Susan |2002|1|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |04 | | | |Hi! I really enjoyed that. It was very good. Please contineu | |writing more chpters! | |(Scarlet Tiger102@aol.com) |2002|7|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |02 | | | |Hey this story ROCKS!!! I know you like review's so here's my | |point of view. | |1.It rocks | |2.It's Super | |3.I love the bathtub scene make more like please maybe somthing | |else that include's the Sauna or somthin | | | |I have to go and you probalbly don't like this review anyway so | |bye | | | |~HorseCrazy567~ | |Autumn Took |2002|7|Signed | | |-10-| | | | |02 | | | |Hey there! Still a terrific story, can't wait to read more, and | |that was a great Quidditch Match! | |Dizzy2381 |2002|7|Signed | | |-10-| | | | |02 | | | |Wow this is great keep writing im on the edge of my seat | |blueberry girl |2002|7|Signed | | |-10-| | | | |02 | | | |Great chapter keep it up :) could you read my story? | |Taryn |2002|7|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |02 | | | |you're doing really well so far, only a few mistakes. oliver | |graduared at the end of the trio's third year, so he is no | |longer at hogwarts during thier fifth year, like you have set | |it. secondly, its quidditch cup, not gryffindor cup. | |Light-bulb |2002|7|Signed | | |-10-| | | | |02 | | | |You did great on the chappie! | |brilliant for a quidditch game! | |Light-bulb |2002|1|Signed | | |-10-| | | | |02 | | | |Hi Practical princess, im light-bulb (or in other words Lara) I | |think your story rocks! I love it! | |And its got a really good hook on to it, and its got a wicked | |plot! | |Man your smart! | |Way to go! | |Laterz | |Lara (light-bulb) | |p.s Please send me/ put up the next part! | | |2002|2|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |02 | | | |are you British? dont mean to be nosy but i really want to know | |;)) | |Jessica |2002|6|Anonymou| | |-10-| |s | | |02 | | | |I think it's great so far you should write more. | |I think it's a cool idea. | |MayDancer27 |2002|5|Signed | | |-10-| | | | |01 | | | |Lovely! Really sweet! :-D Add more soon! | |Reviewer |Date|Chapt|Type | | | |er | | |lys |2002|5 |Signed | | |-10-| | | | |01 | | | |This story is really really cool! I especially| |liked the bathtub scene (ok, it was a bit | |fast, but still ;-) ). Keep on writing, you're| |doing a great job! | |Autumn Took |2002|5 |Anonymou| |(AutumnTook@aol.com) |-09-| |s | | |30 | | | |Hey! Great story! Keep it up! I love | |Draco/Hermione fics! | |TFG |2002|2 |Signed | | |-09-| | | | |30 | | | |Still good! | |TFG |2002|1 |Signed | | |-09-| | | | |30 | | | |This is good so far! | |Liz |2002|4 |Anonymou| |(moviegirl407@yahoo.com) |-09-| |s | | |30 | | | |OMG! THIS IS REALLY GOOD CONTINUE CONTINUE | |CONTINUE! HEHEHHE...DRACO IS HOTT! ;) | |Black Rein |2002|4 |Signed | | |-09-| | | | |30 | | | |plez don't consider this a flamer its just | |edvice i give every one. okay any ways if u | |want a good story and a long one at that don't| |go rushing into details cuz then it will seem | |like real life cuz real life dosen't rush into| |details not unless your a very picky person. | | | |black rein | |janiko |2002|4 |Anonymou| | |-09-| |s | | |30 | | | |hey, u no, ur improving a lot, | |keep writing, i wana no waz up nex! | |angelsmelody13 |2002|4 |Anonymou| |(HorseCrazyGirl1315@hotma|-09-| |s | |il.com) |30 | | | |this is going 2 be a very cool story:) | |hannah |2002|3 |Anonymou| | |-09-| |s | | |29 | | | |dear author princess lady- | |i think your story has a lot of potintial. it | |is very good hurry and finish this story | |because i cant wait. | |**hannah** |
Lol, thax SOO much! AND GUEWSS WHAT! MY BIRHTDAY IS TOMORROW! YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! 15/10/02!!! YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY.. I LOVE U GUYS! YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
OK, LOL. BYE
-Practical Princess-[pic]