Wow! Fantastic! I didn't expect to get so many reviews this fast! I'm am so glad you all liked it! But, in order to fix some of the problems I need a little clarification, such as an example, for this one:

Quite good I should say. Your dialogue grammar bothered me a bit though. Only names are capitalized after end parentheses.

Otherwise quite good.

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"A Sheikah?" Ruto exclaimed loudly, her voice echoing about the Chamber of Sages. She and Saria were discussing the boy's sudden appearance.

"That's what he said."

"Who?"

"Link, he spoke to me through the Ocarina yesterday afternoon..." she whispered sadly. She wanted so badly to be with him. Being a Sage had given her a new outlook on life, she had seen people love together. Cry together...she wanted to be one of those people...

"What does the old man think?" The water princess asked, referring to the Sage of Light.

"He said we are to watch and wait." Ruto pondered this for a while.

"Have you told Nabooru? She'll be interested."

"Yes, she was, and Darunia spoke to Impa and between the two of them said it was best Impa go back to protect the Princess." A downcast look came to Saria's eyes.

"And we were instructed to stay in the Chamber?" The Sage of the Forest nodded.

"Along with Darunia and Nabooru, the others are finishing what there is left to do in Hyrule. Something bad is coming Ruto, I have felt it for weeks, ever since Gannondorf was locked away...I fear, I fear he is still among us..."

"How is that possible?" Ruto shrieked. "We locked him in the sacred realm! There is no way he could...What will happen to Link? Will he have need to fight again?"

"I don't know..."

Link walked Epona across the vast grassy expanse of Hyrule Field at a slow pace as the sun began it's slow descent painting the sky brilliant colors. Koi was wrapped securely in a warm wool blanket and was held in front of the warrior by a strong arm. Navi and Tanej were still sleeping in Link's collar so for the most part he was left alone to ponder Koi's very existence.

Another disguise? He thought dismissing it with a deft shake of his head. Couldn't be. He mentally slapped himself. He had just been at the castle, why hadn't he asked Impa...?

"Because she wouldn't know..." he whispered softly. This boy's appearance would be just as strange to her as it was to himself. Another thought struck him; the boy was in the Lost Woods, had the Great Deku Tree known it? A Skullkid turned Sheikah perhaps? Impossible...What if there were others in the Lost Woods? It wouldn't be that hard to hide from the only two that ever went in there. He would ask the Deku Tree tomorrow.

Epona whinnied, jarring Link from his thoughts. As he looked up he patted her side in apology and dismounted. She tossed her beautiful mane and nuzzled the burden in the Hero's arms, seeming to notice for the first time. Her big eyes sparkled in the moonlight as she looked at him oddly. Finally the mare tossed her head, snorted and cantered back over the field to wherever she went when Link wasn't riding her. Link yawned and walked over the bridge to his forest home. Zelda had told him to watch the boy carefully over the next few days to make sure he was all right.

The forest was quiet as he entered the sacred place. The fireflies twinkled in the darkness bathing small patches of bark in an eerie yellow light. The child in his arms quivered in his sleep, snuggling closer to Link's body. The warrior paused as an unaccustomed feeling spread from his chest out to his fingertips and a small smile graced his lips. He looked down at the pale face pulling back the blanket to see him more clearly.

"Koi..." it was now that Link understood.

"Why was the hero here?" Impa, protector of the Princess, thought to be last of the Sheikah tribe, asked quietly as she emerged from the shadows seemingly unnoticed.

"A boy...he brought a dying boy..." Zelda turned to face her guardian. "Something is very wrong with this land Impa, I am, I am afraid for Link and for the rest of my people." Her eyes began to tear. "I feel that boy will play an important role in the coming events."

"How so?"

"Last night I dreamed..." The delicate young woman paused.

"Of what, Princess Zelda?" The Sheikah urged.

"It began with the boy...he held the Master Sword in his hand. He was older...but with that scar on his neck, that is how I knew it to be him..." The tears began to fall, rolling down her cheeks to be caught in the satin folds of her lapel. "He...he..."

"He what? Zelda?" Impa sat beside her young charge and wrapped a strong arm about her shuddering shoulders.

"The Hero of Time...will fall..."

Wow...this chapter started bad and ended worse...Sorry guys, I'll try harder next time. Don't hate me too much...Ja!