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Author's Note: Well, I'm busy doing a lot of things right now, not the least of which is trying to get my column approved for fanfiction.net publication. I'm in the process of writing it, which is taking forever, because I'm searching for a story to do a review on. *Sighs*
We don't really have time to do one of those author's notes thingys. We had one written out but someone *everyone turns to look at Dragontwin* left it at school….so we're going to try to remember this whole thing. It's probably not going to be the same version Shinou has read, but it will be close.
Since we didn't do an Author's Note, I'm going to use this space for a reviewer's corner and thank some very elemental people in keeping me going.
Ren-chan: You were a little late getting started on reading my fic, but reviews are always welcome. Thanks for your encouragement.
Toki: Hmmm, thanks for the "cute" comment. That's what I strive to do with my fanfiction. Get people to squeal at how adorable DBZ can be.
Elevenking: Again, a loyal reviewer who has followed me in all of my wanderings. Thanks for reviewing, if your reviews are a little short.
Chibi_Chichan: Ahh, the one loyal person who tried to get me out of the closet. We're still working on it, but maybe Shinou will let us free someday…
Kei: Thank you for the kind reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed them so much. Look, here's another chapter for you to read!
Kei and Jumper Prime: Thanks for keeping me in line with the King Kai Instant Transmission bit. I'm not real good at remembering facts like that. Besides, I've only been doing this a limited amount of time.
Ed: I don't know if you're still reading my stuff, but I wish you would keep writing yours. You are one of the more promising fanfiction writers out there, and people have a lot to learn from your *very original* ideas.
Love and peace to Tombra and Shinou, my inspiration and motivation to keep writing. Honestly, y'all don't know how close I came to quitting. These two kicked me in the butt. They're always there to tell me if something sucks, and if something totally rocks. I LOVE YOU BOTH!
SORRY EVERYONE! Honestly, I was going to update sooner, it's just that finals and tests and end of school parties are happening and I don't really have a lot of time!
On with the fic! (or is it "off with their heads?.....")
Promises-Chapter 5 Dragontwin/Kat
King Kai materialized on his now restored planet in the Other World, to find Goku waiting for him, somewhat impatiently.
"You can let go of my arm now and open your eyes," he whispered to Chichi who was hanging on for dear life.
"Thank goodness! You do that Instant Transmission thing different than- GOKU!" She laughed like a delighted child, and the two of them ran to each other. Chichi was immediately caught up in a bear hug, and her lips taken over by Goku's. King Kai laughed. He had never seen Goku and Chichi so happy to see each other in his long association with the pair. It was probably the fact that they would never have to say good-bye ever again, unless they wanted to.
Coming up around the bend and over the hill was a group of warriors that had trained with Goku before and after the Other World Tournament. They were coming to meet Chichi, King Kai expected, because Goku had told them a lot about his wife, and how much he anticipated her arrival to the other dimension. It was rare to find such love in the universe, particularly for a warrior. Many of the others had believed that he was making it up, just because they were jealous. King Kai chuckled to himself. Son Chichi was definitely real. No figment of the imagination could have survived that kiss, nor returned it as enthusiastically as she was.
"Hi Goku," a tall blonde warrior called out. "Is this your wife?" The look of disbelief in his eyes was classic. It was almost a Kodak moment. He chuckled to himself.
"Yes indeed. Chichi, this is Ryoth," (A/N: sorry couldn't remember his name. Someone tell me and I'll fix it, promise!) Goku hadn't let Chichi escape from his arms at all. She had turned around very carefully so that she was facing the group, but Goku's arm was still around her waist possessively.
"Pleased to meet you, ma'am," a voice drawled from the back of the group. It was another warrior that had yet to be introduced. Goku grinned. This particular warrior could charm a tree out of its bark. It was going to be interesting to see how Chichi reacted to him. "When Goku told us about you, he said you were pretty, but he didn't fully describe how stunning you were. That wasn't quite fair, ma'am. A fellow should give another warrior at least a head's up about these sorts of things so we're prepared." Chichi laughed. It was a clear, ringing sort of sound, and Goku hadn't heard it in so long the he almost wished that she would keep on laughing and never stop.
"Thank you." She turned to look Goku in the face and searched his eyes inquiringly. "Goku talks about me?" The other warriors laughed, and Goku blushed a shade of red so dark he almost blended in with his gi.
"All the time, ma'am," one of the other warriors called out.
"You're his favorite subject of conversation," another put in. Chichi blushed scarlet and gave Goku a light peck on the cheek, which he returned gratefully.
"For a very good reason," commented a green warrior that stepped out from behind the others.
"Oh, hello Piccon," Goku called out and began to stroke Chichi's hand.
"Goku has told me so much about you," Chichi said. "It's a great honor to meet someone of such obvious strength." As she conversed with Piccon, she leaned back deeper onto Goku's chest, as she was having a hard time supporting herself.
"Thank you Ms. Chichi. I wasn't aware that Goku had told you so much about me," Piccon carefully kept his face straight.
"Anyone," Chichi tilted her head, "who comes that close to defeating Goku is an amazing fighter." Piccon blushed. Well, apparently Goku hadn't told her too much.
King Kai was now very concerned about Chichi. She was very pale, and for a good reason. It is very tiring to die and then have your body retrieved. He was going to say something, but Chichi opened up her mouth first.
"Goku," she whispered into his ear, and that was all the tall Saiyan needed to hear. Nodding his head in farewell to his friends, he picked up Chichi as he would have a small child. Gratefully, Chichi snuggled in closer and was asleep before Goku even got to his cabin.
A/N: Next chapter out sometime soon, I promise!
Questions? Comments? Got a fic you want me to review? Give me a holler.
dragontwin21@yahoo.com
Author's Note: Well, I'm busy doing a lot of things right now, not the least of which is trying to get my column approved for fanfiction.net publication. I'm in the process of writing it, which is taking forever, because I'm searching for a story to do a review on. *Sighs*
We don't really have time to do one of those author's notes thingys. We had one written out but someone *everyone turns to look at Dragontwin* left it at school….so we're going to try to remember this whole thing. It's probably not going to be the same version Shinou has read, but it will be close.
Since we didn't do an Author's Note, I'm going to use this space for a reviewer's corner and thank some very elemental people in keeping me going.
Ren-chan: You were a little late getting started on reading my fic, but reviews are always welcome. Thanks for your encouragement.
Toki: Hmmm, thanks for the "cute" comment. That's what I strive to do with my fanfiction. Get people to squeal at how adorable DBZ can be.
Elevenking: Again, a loyal reviewer who has followed me in all of my wanderings. Thanks for reviewing, if your reviews are a little short.
Chibi_Chichan: Ahh, the one loyal person who tried to get me out of the closet. We're still working on it, but maybe Shinou will let us free someday…
Kei: Thank you for the kind reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed them so much. Look, here's another chapter for you to read!
Kei and Jumper Prime: Thanks for keeping me in line with the King Kai Instant Transmission bit. I'm not real good at remembering facts like that. Besides, I've only been doing this a limited amount of time.
Ed: I don't know if you're still reading my stuff, but I wish you would keep writing yours. You are one of the more promising fanfiction writers out there, and people have a lot to learn from your *very original* ideas.
Love and peace to Tombra and Shinou, my inspiration and motivation to keep writing. Honestly, y'all don't know how close I came to quitting. These two kicked me in the butt. They're always there to tell me if something sucks, and if something totally rocks. I LOVE YOU BOTH!
SORRY EVERYONE! Honestly, I was going to update sooner, it's just that finals and tests and end of school parties are happening and I don't really have a lot of time!
On with the fic! (or is it "off with their heads?.....")
Promises-Chapter 5 Dragontwin/Kat
King Kai materialized on his now restored planet in the Other World, to find Goku waiting for him, somewhat impatiently.
"You can let go of my arm now and open your eyes," he whispered to Chichi who was hanging on for dear life.
"Thank goodness! You do that Instant Transmission thing different than- GOKU!" She laughed like a delighted child, and the two of them ran to each other. Chichi was immediately caught up in a bear hug, and her lips taken over by Goku's. King Kai laughed. He had never seen Goku and Chichi so happy to see each other in his long association with the pair. It was probably the fact that they would never have to say good-bye ever again, unless they wanted to.
Coming up around the bend and over the hill was a group of warriors that had trained with Goku before and after the Other World Tournament. They were coming to meet Chichi, King Kai expected, because Goku had told them a lot about his wife, and how much he anticipated her arrival to the other dimension. It was rare to find such love in the universe, particularly for a warrior. Many of the others had believed that he was making it up, just because they were jealous. King Kai chuckled to himself. Son Chichi was definitely real. No figment of the imagination could have survived that kiss, nor returned it as enthusiastically as she was.
"Hi Goku," a tall blonde warrior called out. "Is this your wife?" The look of disbelief in his eyes was classic. It was almost a Kodak moment. He chuckled to himself.
"Yes indeed. Chichi, this is Ryoth," (A/N: sorry couldn't remember his name. Someone tell me and I'll fix it, promise!) Goku hadn't let Chichi escape from his arms at all. She had turned around very carefully so that she was facing the group, but Goku's arm was still around her waist possessively.
"Pleased to meet you, ma'am," a voice drawled from the back of the group. It was another warrior that had yet to be introduced. Goku grinned. This particular warrior could charm a tree out of its bark. It was going to be interesting to see how Chichi reacted to him. "When Goku told us about you, he said you were pretty, but he didn't fully describe how stunning you were. That wasn't quite fair, ma'am. A fellow should give another warrior at least a head's up about these sorts of things so we're prepared." Chichi laughed. It was a clear, ringing sort of sound, and Goku hadn't heard it in so long the he almost wished that she would keep on laughing and never stop.
"Thank you." She turned to look Goku in the face and searched his eyes inquiringly. "Goku talks about me?" The other warriors laughed, and Goku blushed a shade of red so dark he almost blended in with his gi.
"All the time, ma'am," one of the other warriors called out.
"You're his favorite subject of conversation," another put in. Chichi blushed scarlet and gave Goku a light peck on the cheek, which he returned gratefully.
"For a very good reason," commented a green warrior that stepped out from behind the others.
"Oh, hello Piccon," Goku called out and began to stroke Chichi's hand.
"Goku has told me so much about you," Chichi said. "It's a great honor to meet someone of such obvious strength." As she conversed with Piccon, she leaned back deeper onto Goku's chest, as she was having a hard time supporting herself.
"Thank you Ms. Chichi. I wasn't aware that Goku had told you so much about me," Piccon carefully kept his face straight.
"Anyone," Chichi tilted her head, "who comes that close to defeating Goku is an amazing fighter." Piccon blushed. Well, apparently Goku hadn't told her too much.
King Kai was now very concerned about Chichi. She was very pale, and for a good reason. It is very tiring to die and then have your body retrieved. He was going to say something, but Chichi opened up her mouth first.
"Goku," she whispered into his ear, and that was all the tall Saiyan needed to hear. Nodding his head in farewell to his friends, he picked up Chichi as he would have a small child. Gratefully, Chichi snuggled in closer and was asleep before Goku even got to his cabin.
A/N: Next chapter out sometime soon, I promise!
Questions? Comments? Got a fic you want me to review? Give me a holler.
dragontwin21@yahoo.com