Two Princes 4
This is not a poem. I went back to story format. I still cannot decide who she should marry. I recived exactly one suggestion. Thax for reviewing!
they put:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! she HAS to marry Inuyasha! She CAN'T marry that other guy!!
So thanx for the suggestion. o course, this was from before the last chapter, when u find out why she won't marry him. So now that u r informed, please give me an INFORMED opinion. thanx!!!
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Kyuketsuki was at her bedroom door before too long. He knocked politly. "Can I come in?" He heard only sobbing in reply. So he opened the door.
It was dark in her room. She had candles burning. She was sobbing on her bed, but she tried to hide it when he came in. "What are you doing here?"
"I live here."
"not in my room, you don't!"
"I heard crying..."
he walked into the room. He looked about. She had a picture in a frame on her bedside table she had been looking at. He went and picked it up.
"Who is this?"
She pushed the pictre face-down. "nobody."
He picked it up. "Is this Inuyasha? You're old boyfriend?" It was a picture of a man, with white hair, and dog ears. They were most likly fake, he looked as though he was wearing a costume.
"yes. Now leave."
He ignored her. "Is this what you were crying over? Did he hurt you again? I know you go stay with him when you leave here. I know he brakes your heart each time. I know it was him, that time you came home with your face all scratched up. Nobody in town knows where he lives or works, so he must live far away. What did he do to you? did he have some sort of nail contraption?"
"He... " it was too late to deny it. "I do go to him. I have to. he... has something of mine..."
"Blackmail?"
"no... well..."
"I'll kill him for you."
"no!"
What could she do? Inuyasha would always come between them. Unless...
"Come with me."
"Where are we going?"
"to see Inuyasha."
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She took him out to the well, on the family property her parents still owned. "hold on to me, or you might not arrive.... I can go, but few others. But if you are touching me..."
He looked at her with pity. Had she lost her mind? Or was there some secret tunnel under the well... that must be it. Some secret passage... Inuyasha must be involved in some rather bad things.
They went into the well, and came out again. "Are you there? Kyuketsuki?"
"I'm here." but they were in the sunlight! And who were those people? And where had the house gone? "Where IS here?"
She giggled a little. "more like When. We have gone back in time to Fudal Japan. Come, meet my friends."
They went to go see Keade, whose house had become sort of a meeting place. On the way, they ran into Sango and Miroku. Shippu was at Keade's house.
"This is Sango and Miroku and Shippu."
"A kitsune!"
"yes. Oh! there's Inuyasha!"
"Where?"
"he just left... he looks mad..."
"I'm gonna strangle him now."
"No! don't! I'll go talk to him. You stay here." and she kissed him quickly and ran off after Inuyasha.
there was a pause.
"so.. you are the lucky guy that stole Kagome?" asked Miroku
"well... she still hasn't answered me yet. Why is Inuyasha so mad? Why does she go to him? Why does he hurt her? Why does he break her heart? I need some answers, here!"
"Oh... she hasn't told you?" asked Sango
"Told me...."
"It's a long story..."
"I have time."
"Well, for starters, she is the guardian of the Shikon no Tama."
"What? since when?"
"Since Kikyo died."
"Tell me everything."
And she did. She told Inuyasha and Kikyo's story, told of the freeing of Inuyasha, told of the breaking of the jewl. "So you see,that is why she comes back. She has to, to find all the shards. As for the other questions, they are all tied in to each other. Inuyasha... i think he loves her. But his nature is to be gruff and mean. So when she goes home, he wants her to stay. So he insults her. And she loves him, too. That is why he is sworn against you. To him, you stole his beautiful Kagome. But he never physically hurt her... it was always Shippu he kicked about."
"There is where you are wrong. She came home, once, with deep, bloody scratches across her face. She had been gone a week or two. I knew... or thought I knew... she had gone back to her old boyfriend to stay with a while. I thought... and I was right. Inuyasha did that to her. It must have been him. He is the only one with claws! Except Sessumaru, of course... but did any of you see her get raked across the face by him? I thought not. And now that I've met him, and heard you all tell of him, I will do anything to prevent my Kagome from being hurt him."
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"Inuyasha! INUYASHA! INU... yasha."
"I heard you the first time, bitch. Come to tell me the 'happy news'? I hope you know I could care less."
"Inuyasha...."
He turned to face her. "Is that ALL you can say!?! My fuckin name?!?!?!"
"I... no, I... I wanted you to know..."
"Feh! Whatever it is, it obviously isn't important. Kikyo never stuttered like that. Now THERE'S a girl who could speak her mind!"
She looked hurt, wounded. "Is that all I am to you, Inuyasha? A Kikyo replacement?" she whispered.
"Feh. Like you care how I feel about you." and with that, he flipped into the treetops and was gone.
Still struggling with the ending. Next chap will be another song fic, provided I can find the stupid lyrics!!!
This is not a poem. I went back to story format. I still cannot decide who she should marry. I recived exactly one suggestion. Thax for reviewing!
they put:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! she HAS to marry Inuyasha! She CAN'T marry that other guy!!
So thanx for the suggestion. o course, this was from before the last chapter, when u find out why she won't marry him. So now that u r informed, please give me an INFORMED opinion. thanx!!!
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Kyuketsuki was at her bedroom door before too long. He knocked politly. "Can I come in?" He heard only sobbing in reply. So he opened the door.
It was dark in her room. She had candles burning. She was sobbing on her bed, but she tried to hide it when he came in. "What are you doing here?"
"I live here."
"not in my room, you don't!"
"I heard crying..."
he walked into the room. He looked about. She had a picture in a frame on her bedside table she had been looking at. He went and picked it up.
"Who is this?"
She pushed the pictre face-down. "nobody."
He picked it up. "Is this Inuyasha? You're old boyfriend?" It was a picture of a man, with white hair, and dog ears. They were most likly fake, he looked as though he was wearing a costume.
"yes. Now leave."
He ignored her. "Is this what you were crying over? Did he hurt you again? I know you go stay with him when you leave here. I know he brakes your heart each time. I know it was him, that time you came home with your face all scratched up. Nobody in town knows where he lives or works, so he must live far away. What did he do to you? did he have some sort of nail contraption?"
"He... " it was too late to deny it. "I do go to him. I have to. he... has something of mine..."
"Blackmail?"
"no... well..."
"I'll kill him for you."
"no!"
What could she do? Inuyasha would always come between them. Unless...
"Come with me."
"Where are we going?"
"to see Inuyasha."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
She took him out to the well, on the family property her parents still owned. "hold on to me, or you might not arrive.... I can go, but few others. But if you are touching me..."
He looked at her with pity. Had she lost her mind? Or was there some secret tunnel under the well... that must be it. Some secret passage... Inuyasha must be involved in some rather bad things.
They went into the well, and came out again. "Are you there? Kyuketsuki?"
"I'm here." but they were in the sunlight! And who were those people? And where had the house gone? "Where IS here?"
She giggled a little. "more like When. We have gone back in time to Fudal Japan. Come, meet my friends."
They went to go see Keade, whose house had become sort of a meeting place. On the way, they ran into Sango and Miroku. Shippu was at Keade's house.
"This is Sango and Miroku and Shippu."
"A kitsune!"
"yes. Oh! there's Inuyasha!"
"Where?"
"he just left... he looks mad..."
"I'm gonna strangle him now."
"No! don't! I'll go talk to him. You stay here." and she kissed him quickly and ran off after Inuyasha.
there was a pause.
"so.. you are the lucky guy that stole Kagome?" asked Miroku
"well... she still hasn't answered me yet. Why is Inuyasha so mad? Why does she go to him? Why does he hurt her? Why does he break her heart? I need some answers, here!"
"Oh... she hasn't told you?" asked Sango
"Told me...."
"It's a long story..."
"I have time."
"Well, for starters, she is the guardian of the Shikon no Tama."
"What? since when?"
"Since Kikyo died."
"Tell me everything."
And she did. She told Inuyasha and Kikyo's story, told of the freeing of Inuyasha, told of the breaking of the jewl. "So you see,that is why she comes back. She has to, to find all the shards. As for the other questions, they are all tied in to each other. Inuyasha... i think he loves her. But his nature is to be gruff and mean. So when she goes home, he wants her to stay. So he insults her. And she loves him, too. That is why he is sworn against you. To him, you stole his beautiful Kagome. But he never physically hurt her... it was always Shippu he kicked about."
"There is where you are wrong. She came home, once, with deep, bloody scratches across her face. She had been gone a week or two. I knew... or thought I knew... she had gone back to her old boyfriend to stay with a while. I thought... and I was right. Inuyasha did that to her. It must have been him. He is the only one with claws! Except Sessumaru, of course... but did any of you see her get raked across the face by him? I thought not. And now that I've met him, and heard you all tell of him, I will do anything to prevent my Kagome from being hurt him."
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"Inuyasha! INUYASHA! INU... yasha."
"I heard you the first time, bitch. Come to tell me the 'happy news'? I hope you know I could care less."
"Inuyasha...."
He turned to face her. "Is that ALL you can say!?! My fuckin name?!?!?!"
"I... no, I... I wanted you to know..."
"Feh! Whatever it is, it obviously isn't important. Kikyo never stuttered like that. Now THERE'S a girl who could speak her mind!"
She looked hurt, wounded. "Is that all I am to you, Inuyasha? A Kikyo replacement?" she whispered.
"Feh. Like you care how I feel about you." and with that, he flipped into the treetops and was gone.
Still struggling with the ending. Next chap will be another song fic, provided I can find the stupid lyrics!!!