Thanx for the review again Sora. Too bad I can't seem to see it in
the reviews page. I got it in the e-mail though.
Yes, you are correct. Technically, Chibodee shouldn't be a shuffle alliance member yet, but I hate making things too similar to the actual storyline. So, any minor change I can make I'll add. Anyway, on with the next chapter.
Stalker: Muteki has already received his first defeat, at the hands of Domon Kasshu. Waiting for the repair of his gundam, he will travel to Gannya once again to continue his training; however, it is not the same country he left months ago to start his journey. What surprises await Muteki back in his home, and can he handle them? READY, GO!!!!!!!!!!
Chapter 4: Crisis Strikes, a Wandering Warrior
Muteki stood at the side of his scrapped gundam. 'Damn, Domon really did a number on it. Those repairs could take forever,' he thought to himself. He stared off into the distance, Domon had already left and given him a real hard time about the fight. He was just waiting for Gyoutou now, so he could pick him and the gundam up to have it repaired back in Neo Gannya. As if on cue, a ship lowered to the ground about 20 feet away and a ramp lowered out the back. A long truck drove out from the back, it stopped with the back facing the standing Expert Gundam. The back lifted up vertically and it backed into the gundam then the back lowered with the gundam sprawled on it. The driver drove back into the ship.
A door opened on the side and Gyoutou motioned for Muteki to get in. He did so, and the ship took off for Gannya. Muteki was thinking on the way there. He wasn't exactly angry about his loss, it only strengthened his resolve. He had to continue becoming a better fighter, so he could repay Domon Kasshu for that loss.
Before he knew it, they were landing at the docks of Gannya. Muteki stepped off the ship as the truck left once again and headed for the garage. Muteki looked around, the place was unusually quiet. He jumped out onto the dock and stood in the breeze, there was something strange about this place. It seemed to be drenched in that same presence he felt before he fell from the dock ten years ago and awakened in Gannya. He didn't like this feeling, something wasn't right.
"We have been developing our technology while you were gone. We have created a way to quickly repair your gundam via the use of standardized parts," said one of the mechanics.
"Doesn't that mean the gundam could easily be reproduced? Are you sure that's a good idea?" asked Muteki skeptically.
"What could happen? This factory is the possession of Neo Gannya, no one can get the parts and system needed to create the gundam. Anyway, your gundam should be repaired in about an hour," said the mechanic as he left to get to work. This only made Muteki feel worse.
Muteki spent the next hour walking around Gannya, trying to put his finger on what was bothering him. Before he knew it, it was time to check on the gundam. He arrived at the garage and suddenly the island shook, concrete was cracking everywhere and the ocean roared and crashed onto the streets and receded back only to return shortly after.
"What the hell is this?!" shouted Muteki as he dashed for his gundam. The mechanic had slipped and been knocked unconscious when the water rushed in, but the gundam looked fine. Suddenly, he looked behind him and gundams rose up everywhere, but they weren't full gundams. They were only the heads of them with long snaking bodies. He jumped in his gundam without hesitation.
He rushed into the body suit so he could quickly getting moving, fearing that these strange gundams might rush to attack. "Whoever you guys are, you picked the wrong guy to mess with!" he shouted as he drew his sword and boosted through the roof of the garage and tore through the nearest Gundam Head. He boosted forward tearing through everything in his path, explosions following in his wake. Suddenly, he was hit from behind by rockets, the explosion knocked him through the closest building and into the ground.
He got up slowly and looked around to find he was being fired at from the water. He reeled his arm back, "Hurricane Punch!" he shouted and a twister tore into the water and hurled the attackers high up into the air. He flew up to them and sliced through them before they could fall. He turned then to see a monstrous form rising over a mountain overlooking the city. His eyes widened.
It was a large gundam, it's torso was the head of a gundam and it was held up by what seemed to wires reaching deep into the earth. On it's shoulder stood a man who looked to be nearly thirty, he was smirking as he nodded his head and a large blast engulfed most of the city, reducing it to rubble. The explosion stopped short of Muteki but knocked him backward at least fifty feet. "That thing..it's so powerful! How is that possible?!" he shouted out to no one in particular. Then what happened really sunk in.
"What...all those people, you killed every last one of them?!" he asked in disbelief. The man standing on top of his gundam merely snickered and chuckled to himself. "Why you..try laughing about this!" he shouted as he boosted at full speed towards his gigantic foe. He was moving so quickly he could barely make out the things around him, but he could see his enemy clearly. "ERAAAAHHHHHH!!!!" he cried out as he thrust the blade deep into the torso of the gundam.
He smiled, but the smile quickly faded as the gigantic fist crashed into his gundam and he connected with the pavement and slid along it, no through it for about another hundred feet. He got up slowly, his body telling him to stop but his rage urging him forward.
"The time has come, the demon has awakened. Now is not the time to fight, you must become stronger. Yet, even then you could not defeat it. You cannot fight alone," echoed a voice in his head. It was so familiar, and for some reason he listened to it. His gundam was beaten up pretty badly, but his boosters and wings were functioning fine. He turned and flew away at full speed, he heard the laugh of his foe echoing towards him, it slowly faded away as he crossed the sea at full speed. He turned, but continued in his direction and spoke, "I promise you this, I will return and you shall pay!"
He flew full speed for what seemed like hours. At least he was conscious enough to tell time, because that's exactly how long it had been. Suddenly, he could see land in the distance. He sped up and landed his gundam on the shore. He stepped out, barely able to move. He fell from the gundam and drifted into a deep sleep on the beach.
Alright, now we're getting somewhere. Tell me what you guys think, about here the story is going to stray pretty far from the actually G Gundam storyline.
Yes, you are correct. Technically, Chibodee shouldn't be a shuffle alliance member yet, but I hate making things too similar to the actual storyline. So, any minor change I can make I'll add. Anyway, on with the next chapter.
Stalker: Muteki has already received his first defeat, at the hands of Domon Kasshu. Waiting for the repair of his gundam, he will travel to Gannya once again to continue his training; however, it is not the same country he left months ago to start his journey. What surprises await Muteki back in his home, and can he handle them? READY, GO!!!!!!!!!!
Chapter 4: Crisis Strikes, a Wandering Warrior
Muteki stood at the side of his scrapped gundam. 'Damn, Domon really did a number on it. Those repairs could take forever,' he thought to himself. He stared off into the distance, Domon had already left and given him a real hard time about the fight. He was just waiting for Gyoutou now, so he could pick him and the gundam up to have it repaired back in Neo Gannya. As if on cue, a ship lowered to the ground about 20 feet away and a ramp lowered out the back. A long truck drove out from the back, it stopped with the back facing the standing Expert Gundam. The back lifted up vertically and it backed into the gundam then the back lowered with the gundam sprawled on it. The driver drove back into the ship.
A door opened on the side and Gyoutou motioned for Muteki to get in. He did so, and the ship took off for Gannya. Muteki was thinking on the way there. He wasn't exactly angry about his loss, it only strengthened his resolve. He had to continue becoming a better fighter, so he could repay Domon Kasshu for that loss.
Before he knew it, they were landing at the docks of Gannya. Muteki stepped off the ship as the truck left once again and headed for the garage. Muteki looked around, the place was unusually quiet. He jumped out onto the dock and stood in the breeze, there was something strange about this place. It seemed to be drenched in that same presence he felt before he fell from the dock ten years ago and awakened in Gannya. He didn't like this feeling, something wasn't right.
"We have been developing our technology while you were gone. We have created a way to quickly repair your gundam via the use of standardized parts," said one of the mechanics.
"Doesn't that mean the gundam could easily be reproduced? Are you sure that's a good idea?" asked Muteki skeptically.
"What could happen? This factory is the possession of Neo Gannya, no one can get the parts and system needed to create the gundam. Anyway, your gundam should be repaired in about an hour," said the mechanic as he left to get to work. This only made Muteki feel worse.
Muteki spent the next hour walking around Gannya, trying to put his finger on what was bothering him. Before he knew it, it was time to check on the gundam. He arrived at the garage and suddenly the island shook, concrete was cracking everywhere and the ocean roared and crashed onto the streets and receded back only to return shortly after.
"What the hell is this?!" shouted Muteki as he dashed for his gundam. The mechanic had slipped and been knocked unconscious when the water rushed in, but the gundam looked fine. Suddenly, he looked behind him and gundams rose up everywhere, but they weren't full gundams. They were only the heads of them with long snaking bodies. He jumped in his gundam without hesitation.
He rushed into the body suit so he could quickly getting moving, fearing that these strange gundams might rush to attack. "Whoever you guys are, you picked the wrong guy to mess with!" he shouted as he drew his sword and boosted through the roof of the garage and tore through the nearest Gundam Head. He boosted forward tearing through everything in his path, explosions following in his wake. Suddenly, he was hit from behind by rockets, the explosion knocked him through the closest building and into the ground.
He got up slowly and looked around to find he was being fired at from the water. He reeled his arm back, "Hurricane Punch!" he shouted and a twister tore into the water and hurled the attackers high up into the air. He flew up to them and sliced through them before they could fall. He turned then to see a monstrous form rising over a mountain overlooking the city. His eyes widened.
It was a large gundam, it's torso was the head of a gundam and it was held up by what seemed to wires reaching deep into the earth. On it's shoulder stood a man who looked to be nearly thirty, he was smirking as he nodded his head and a large blast engulfed most of the city, reducing it to rubble. The explosion stopped short of Muteki but knocked him backward at least fifty feet. "That thing..it's so powerful! How is that possible?!" he shouted out to no one in particular. Then what happened really sunk in.
"What...all those people, you killed every last one of them?!" he asked in disbelief. The man standing on top of his gundam merely snickered and chuckled to himself. "Why you..try laughing about this!" he shouted as he boosted at full speed towards his gigantic foe. He was moving so quickly he could barely make out the things around him, but he could see his enemy clearly. "ERAAAAHHHHHH!!!!" he cried out as he thrust the blade deep into the torso of the gundam.
He smiled, but the smile quickly faded as the gigantic fist crashed into his gundam and he connected with the pavement and slid along it, no through it for about another hundred feet. He got up slowly, his body telling him to stop but his rage urging him forward.
"The time has come, the demon has awakened. Now is not the time to fight, you must become stronger. Yet, even then you could not defeat it. You cannot fight alone," echoed a voice in his head. It was so familiar, and for some reason he listened to it. His gundam was beaten up pretty badly, but his boosters and wings were functioning fine. He turned and flew away at full speed, he heard the laugh of his foe echoing towards him, it slowly faded away as he crossed the sea at full speed. He turned, but continued in his direction and spoke, "I promise you this, I will return and you shall pay!"
He flew full speed for what seemed like hours. At least he was conscious enough to tell time, because that's exactly how long it had been. Suddenly, he could see land in the distance. He sped up and landed his gundam on the shore. He stepped out, barely able to move. He fell from the gundam and drifted into a deep sleep on the beach.
Alright, now we're getting somewhere. Tell me what you guys think, about here the story is going to stray pretty far from the actually G Gundam storyline.