Ok so i'm writing this as kind of an abstract fanfic, this is what would happen if, Goku had never been sent to Earth, but a different planet, never bumped his head and turned evil, and never reached his full potential as a super saiyan. hope u guys like it, i've been inspired by some fanfics i've read and i really like this idea so here goes...
A different path - Chapter 1
New beginnings
Silence.
That was all that remained once Frieza's soldiers had pillaged her land. Silence, and the smoke of flames smouldering away her childhood memories. The barbarians, were still loose and she was willing to be captured and killed rather live on in that painful loop of despair, but why give them the satisfaction. The girl tried to find her family her friends, something familiar, in the silent confusion, but to no avail, she stood outside the pile of rubble that was once her home, she tried to sense even the tiniest ki stuggling to survive but there was nothing. She knew then that she was now alone. As she dropped to her knees in defeat, ready to spill her tears, and the blood of the murderers, Dodoria, one of Frieza's right hand men came upon her.
'Well, well, well, what do we have here? seems to me like a perfect little concubine for lord Frieza, eh boys?' the henchmen chuckled with him,
'Kyria het, nan chi don'swe!' She replied bitterly.
Dodoria had not understood what she had said, but she had insulted him. She spat in his face. He wiped the saliva from his face, and yanked her up by her arm, "You'll do well to control that tongue of yours, whore'. He licked her face with his boil-covered tongue,"Mmm, tasty, Frieza will be pleased" she winced, and seeing her reaction, he struck his hand to the side of her face and she crashed to the floor. "Get her on the ship with the others, we haven't time to dwindle." With no warning, the young girl was hoisted away by the soldiers, on to the huge ship located nearby, as Dodoria surveyed his handiwork,
"Kani! Kani!"
"Mmm, perfect", he could see little faces peeking out from behind rocks and rubble, responding to the cries from the girl, and he smiled, levitating into the air, he dropped a slow moving ki-blast down onto the surface of the planet, and as he rose he got a better view of the further destruction he had left. Grinning as he now flew back to the ship, he joined the rest of his crew and set course for Frieza's headquarters, a giant spaceship dominating space.
"Dodoria you're back early, what's the hurry?" Zarbon had asked as Dodoria, made his way towards the centre of the ship where Frieza was.
"I have a gift for our dear Lord, I can see myself receiving a very large bonus for this not to mention, the extra slaves i acquired from the nearby planet we pillaged. Zarbon scowled at Dodoria, he was Frieza's favourite, and to be upstaged by that fat mass of pink infuriated him.
"Well, You had best be going, you don't want to disappoint out lord,"
"I have no intention of doing so, but i'm sure if I did, it would make you very happy, tell me Zarbon, are my ears deceiving me or do i detect a hint of jealousy in your voice?" Dodoria asked innocently.
"I don't get jealous Dodoria, I get what I want" replied Zarbon coldly, "always" he added, narrowing his eyes.
"Dear Zarbon," said Dodoria ignoring his obvious irritation, "You must learn to control that temper of yours, if we're not careful, you'll be transform into that hideous creature again, really you must go and see a doctor about it, it's terribly unsightly... Ta-ta!"
"You'd know all about being unsightly, and being bloody hideous" thought Zarbon angrily.
"Dodoria, I thought i told you to and prepare the planet Tyrinia for sale, why are you still here?" Frieza asked angrily
Dodoria could sense the annoyance in Frieza's voice, but still stood his ground, he decided he would be best off telling Frieza the news he had and getting away as quickly as he could.
"My Lord, i apologise for not explaining my reasons for my early arrival but I assure -"
"Get to the point," Frieza finished impatiently.
"We recovered some useful technology on a nearby planet, the Tryrinians were more susceptible than we had previously expected, leaving us some extra time," Frieza was yawning
"But," Dodoria was starting to panic, "not only did we discover, technology, but also, a planet full of slaves, and one, i think you'll find, very unusual concubine" Frieza perked up in interest.
"Concubine? Dodoria, you know I have no interest in such matters.." blatantly lying.
"But my lord, i am sure once you see her, your opinion will change"
"Bring her out then," Frieza was trying to sound bored but was having difficulty controlling his excitement. At his command to footsoldiers, hoistered in the struggling young female.
"I think you'll find she is perfectly intact my lord, I made sure she remained untouched until she reached you my lord. Dodoria dropped to one knee and bowed, trying to hide the smile of glee that lit up his face.
"Bring her to me, closer." She was dragged up the steps to Frieza's throne and forced onto her knees in a bow
"She was a little, resistant"
"It is irrelevant, all bow down to Frieza" Frieza lifted up her chin so he could get a good look at her face. She had, long, flowing black hair, with a hint of indigo in it, and her eyes, were big, and glowed a brilliant burning violet, she wore a silver band round her arm, with some kind of jewel in it. Her dress, had once been beautiful, but now after pillaging and capture was more or less destroyed. It had been long and graceful, lilac in colour, and held together at the back by two delicate cords. She had two long white white sashes flowing over shoulders, now ripped, tinted, patched grey and black and stained with blood. There was a necklace aroun her neck, which had the same jewel in as her arm band. There was a mark on her left cheek, a symbol of some sort, most likely a family crest. The girl could not have been older than fourteen or fifteen. But she had to have been of some kind of royalty, no commoner dressed like that
"Are we in the presence of royalty now? He slapped her, there was something in her he could feel, some deep primordial power, something he didn't want near him. He snatched her necklace from around her neck, and examined it.
"This is worthy of a prince" He said, placing it around his neck, "But I am the only prince here. And you, are not worthy of me"
She turned away from him.
"Dodoria, I don't want this filth, your estimations are wildly inaccurate, i can smell her impurity a mile away. Did you honestly expect to decieve me? You shall be punished for your impudence"
"Yes, my lord" Dodoria grunted and at the wave of a hand, and Dodoria left dragging the unusual female with him.
"Give her to the monkey king, he will derive more pleasure from a whore than i can ever be tempted with"
Dodoria cursed Frieza silently and caught the eye of Zarbon, who with a firm grin whispered, "Remember Dodoria, I always get what I want"
"That's right Zarbon, and soon enough, you'll get what you deserve"
Dodoria left with a dignified snort.
The girl could tell from the sound of the conversation that she would not be killed, but she only wished for her nightmare to be over, just to be able to forget that she had been subjected to. She remembered the name the pink warrior had called the lizard, Frieza. She said it to herself that she would take her revenge upon him. She was being taken on a small ship to some other planet but it wasn't far away from Frieza's spaceship. she had long since stopped fighting realising she would save more energy, and she had to, it was the only way she could survive in that pit of lions.
When they arrived on Vegeta, two saiyan soldiers were waiting at the King's palace to recive 'the gift' from Frieza to King Vegeta.
"Do what you will with her, but ensure she gets to the king, you understand the importance?" Asked Dodoria, wondering whether he should just deliver her himself, but he wasn't a common soldier, he was one of Frieza's right handmen.
"Understood, commander Dodoria"
"By the way, she's a bit of a fighter, the king will like her, greetings from Frieza"
"Our scouters say she only has a power level of 35, she's must be a real pussy" and the 3 men laughed with a dirty tone. The saiyans knocked her unconscious with one blow to the back of her skull, so as to make her easier to deal with, and carried her into the throne room where king Vegeta sat on his throne. The girl, amazingly still conscious, played dead, until the time was right for her to move.
"My liege, a 'gift' from Frieza
The king turned his head to the unconscious mass
"A gift, from that beast, he sends me a concubine, after all i have done, this is how I am repaid."
The 'gift' moved, and rose to her senses.
"Bring her to me."
The same two soldiers, dragged her up the stairs to the saiyan king. He looked at her, and examined her.
"She is beautiful, i can't imagine why Frieza would reject her, her looks, very uncommon, and," he added, as he looked closely at her cheek,
"Which planet is she from?" Vegeta asked with a hint of concern in his voice
"A small planet in the delta-5 quadrant, on the outrskirts of Lord Frieza's territory sire"
"This mark" he said as he smoothed his thumb across her cheek, she blinked away a tear, knowing that he understood the seriousness of what had occurred, "I know this mark, he wouldn't, not if he knew the implications of his actions..."
"It was not Frieza himself who carried out the attack on the planet, but rather, Commander Dodoria."
"So that overweight idiot was looking for Brownie points. I understand. Take her to work in the fields with the rest of the slaves, I must delve into this matter further, and I will deal with her in time"
"But sire, she is a concubine, from Lord Frieza, if he were to find out..."
"She is mine to use as and when I please, and your life is mine to take as and when I please, are we understood?"
"A thousand apologies highness, my life is yours to do with as you please"
"Keep that in mind next time you challenge my authority"
"Yes highness
Vegeta, turned serious once he was sure she was gone.
"RYTAK!" Vegeta bellowed over the din., "I must speak with you. The rest of you leave us." The other members of his court, filtered out of the throne room with a clamour of gossip about the mystery concubine.
"This cannot be allowed to continue friend, does she speak?"
"Not in any tongue our translators can understand, she could have been anyone"
"No, Frieza rejected her for a reason, but what? She must have posed some kind of a threat to him" Vegeta began to pace, "she had to have been royal, look at the way she is dressed"
"But sire, no mere child, especially a female, could possibly pose a threat to Lord Frieza with his unfathomable power, no matter how extraordinairy she looks, or who she may have been. With all due respect sire, to rely on her as our saviour is pure suicide."
"Child? Am I not barely older than her? If you trust a child to be your king, then surely you can trust that same child to avenge your race. Don't think I'm stepping into this foolhardily, I was a boy when my father was snatched from my grasp and Frieza placed me on the throne as what he thought was his loyal drone. I cannot simply stand by and become a puppet, you must understand that Rytak, you of all people should understand. i know you must hate me, and I know the throne belongs to you brother, but trust me to do this"
"I would trust you with my life Vegeta, as Ihave done before in battle, you have my complete support"
"Thank you brother." He arose from his throne and headed towards his chamber, pondering the situation further.
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A different path - Chapter 1
New beginnings
Silence.
That was all that remained once Frieza's soldiers had pillaged her land. Silence, and the smoke of flames smouldering away her childhood memories. The barbarians, were still loose and she was willing to be captured and killed rather live on in that painful loop of despair, but why give them the satisfaction. The girl tried to find her family her friends, something familiar, in the silent confusion, but to no avail, she stood outside the pile of rubble that was once her home, she tried to sense even the tiniest ki stuggling to survive but there was nothing. She knew then that she was now alone. As she dropped to her knees in defeat, ready to spill her tears, and the blood of the murderers, Dodoria, one of Frieza's right hand men came upon her.
'Well, well, well, what do we have here? seems to me like a perfect little concubine for lord Frieza, eh boys?' the henchmen chuckled with him,
'Kyria het, nan chi don'swe!' She replied bitterly.
Dodoria had not understood what she had said, but she had insulted him. She spat in his face. He wiped the saliva from his face, and yanked her up by her arm, "You'll do well to control that tongue of yours, whore'. He licked her face with his boil-covered tongue,"Mmm, tasty, Frieza will be pleased" she winced, and seeing her reaction, he struck his hand to the side of her face and she crashed to the floor. "Get her on the ship with the others, we haven't time to dwindle." With no warning, the young girl was hoisted away by the soldiers, on to the huge ship located nearby, as Dodoria surveyed his handiwork,
"Kani! Kani!"
"Mmm, perfect", he could see little faces peeking out from behind rocks and rubble, responding to the cries from the girl, and he smiled, levitating into the air, he dropped a slow moving ki-blast down onto the surface of the planet, and as he rose he got a better view of the further destruction he had left. Grinning as he now flew back to the ship, he joined the rest of his crew and set course for Frieza's headquarters, a giant spaceship dominating space.
"Dodoria you're back early, what's the hurry?" Zarbon had asked as Dodoria, made his way towards the centre of the ship where Frieza was.
"I have a gift for our dear Lord, I can see myself receiving a very large bonus for this not to mention, the extra slaves i acquired from the nearby planet we pillaged. Zarbon scowled at Dodoria, he was Frieza's favourite, and to be upstaged by that fat mass of pink infuriated him.
"Well, You had best be going, you don't want to disappoint out lord,"
"I have no intention of doing so, but i'm sure if I did, it would make you very happy, tell me Zarbon, are my ears deceiving me or do i detect a hint of jealousy in your voice?" Dodoria asked innocently.
"I don't get jealous Dodoria, I get what I want" replied Zarbon coldly, "always" he added, narrowing his eyes.
"Dear Zarbon," said Dodoria ignoring his obvious irritation, "You must learn to control that temper of yours, if we're not careful, you'll be transform into that hideous creature again, really you must go and see a doctor about it, it's terribly unsightly... Ta-ta!"
"You'd know all about being unsightly, and being bloody hideous" thought Zarbon angrily.
"Dodoria, I thought i told you to and prepare the planet Tyrinia for sale, why are you still here?" Frieza asked angrily
Dodoria could sense the annoyance in Frieza's voice, but still stood his ground, he decided he would be best off telling Frieza the news he had and getting away as quickly as he could.
"My Lord, i apologise for not explaining my reasons for my early arrival but I assure -"
"Get to the point," Frieza finished impatiently.
"We recovered some useful technology on a nearby planet, the Tryrinians were more susceptible than we had previously expected, leaving us some extra time," Frieza was yawning
"But," Dodoria was starting to panic, "not only did we discover, technology, but also, a planet full of slaves, and one, i think you'll find, very unusual concubine" Frieza perked up in interest.
"Concubine? Dodoria, you know I have no interest in such matters.." blatantly lying.
"But my lord, i am sure once you see her, your opinion will change"
"Bring her out then," Frieza was trying to sound bored but was having difficulty controlling his excitement. At his command to footsoldiers, hoistered in the struggling young female.
"I think you'll find she is perfectly intact my lord, I made sure she remained untouched until she reached you my lord. Dodoria dropped to one knee and bowed, trying to hide the smile of glee that lit up his face.
"Bring her to me, closer." She was dragged up the steps to Frieza's throne and forced onto her knees in a bow
"She was a little, resistant"
"It is irrelevant, all bow down to Frieza" Frieza lifted up her chin so he could get a good look at her face. She had, long, flowing black hair, with a hint of indigo in it, and her eyes, were big, and glowed a brilliant burning violet, she wore a silver band round her arm, with some kind of jewel in it. Her dress, had once been beautiful, but now after pillaging and capture was more or less destroyed. It had been long and graceful, lilac in colour, and held together at the back by two delicate cords. She had two long white white sashes flowing over shoulders, now ripped, tinted, patched grey and black and stained with blood. There was a necklace aroun her neck, which had the same jewel in as her arm band. There was a mark on her left cheek, a symbol of some sort, most likely a family crest. The girl could not have been older than fourteen or fifteen. But she had to have been of some kind of royalty, no commoner dressed like that
"Are we in the presence of royalty now? He slapped her, there was something in her he could feel, some deep primordial power, something he didn't want near him. He snatched her necklace from around her neck, and examined it.
"This is worthy of a prince" He said, placing it around his neck, "But I am the only prince here. And you, are not worthy of me"
She turned away from him.
"Dodoria, I don't want this filth, your estimations are wildly inaccurate, i can smell her impurity a mile away. Did you honestly expect to decieve me? You shall be punished for your impudence"
"Yes, my lord" Dodoria grunted and at the wave of a hand, and Dodoria left dragging the unusual female with him.
"Give her to the monkey king, he will derive more pleasure from a whore than i can ever be tempted with"
Dodoria cursed Frieza silently and caught the eye of Zarbon, who with a firm grin whispered, "Remember Dodoria, I always get what I want"
"That's right Zarbon, and soon enough, you'll get what you deserve"
Dodoria left with a dignified snort.
The girl could tell from the sound of the conversation that she would not be killed, but she only wished for her nightmare to be over, just to be able to forget that she had been subjected to. She remembered the name the pink warrior had called the lizard, Frieza. She said it to herself that she would take her revenge upon him. She was being taken on a small ship to some other planet but it wasn't far away from Frieza's spaceship. she had long since stopped fighting realising she would save more energy, and she had to, it was the only way she could survive in that pit of lions.
When they arrived on Vegeta, two saiyan soldiers were waiting at the King's palace to recive 'the gift' from Frieza to King Vegeta.
"Do what you will with her, but ensure she gets to the king, you understand the importance?" Asked Dodoria, wondering whether he should just deliver her himself, but he wasn't a common soldier, he was one of Frieza's right handmen.
"Understood, commander Dodoria"
"By the way, she's a bit of a fighter, the king will like her, greetings from Frieza"
"Our scouters say she only has a power level of 35, she's must be a real pussy" and the 3 men laughed with a dirty tone. The saiyans knocked her unconscious with one blow to the back of her skull, so as to make her easier to deal with, and carried her into the throne room where king Vegeta sat on his throne. The girl, amazingly still conscious, played dead, until the time was right for her to move.
"My liege, a 'gift' from Frieza
The king turned his head to the unconscious mass
"A gift, from that beast, he sends me a concubine, after all i have done, this is how I am repaid."
The 'gift' moved, and rose to her senses.
"Bring her to me."
The same two soldiers, dragged her up the stairs to the saiyan king. He looked at her, and examined her.
"She is beautiful, i can't imagine why Frieza would reject her, her looks, very uncommon, and," he added, as he looked closely at her cheek,
"Which planet is she from?" Vegeta asked with a hint of concern in his voice
"A small planet in the delta-5 quadrant, on the outrskirts of Lord Frieza's territory sire"
"This mark" he said as he smoothed his thumb across her cheek, she blinked away a tear, knowing that he understood the seriousness of what had occurred, "I know this mark, he wouldn't, not if he knew the implications of his actions..."
"It was not Frieza himself who carried out the attack on the planet, but rather, Commander Dodoria."
"So that overweight idiot was looking for Brownie points. I understand. Take her to work in the fields with the rest of the slaves, I must delve into this matter further, and I will deal with her in time"
"But sire, she is a concubine, from Lord Frieza, if he were to find out..."
"She is mine to use as and when I please, and your life is mine to take as and when I please, are we understood?"
"A thousand apologies highness, my life is yours to do with as you please"
"Keep that in mind next time you challenge my authority"
"Yes highness
Vegeta, turned serious once he was sure she was gone.
"RYTAK!" Vegeta bellowed over the din., "I must speak with you. The rest of you leave us." The other members of his court, filtered out of the throne room with a clamour of gossip about the mystery concubine.
"This cannot be allowed to continue friend, does she speak?"
"Not in any tongue our translators can understand, she could have been anyone"
"No, Frieza rejected her for a reason, but what? She must have posed some kind of a threat to him" Vegeta began to pace, "she had to have been royal, look at the way she is dressed"
"But sire, no mere child, especially a female, could possibly pose a threat to Lord Frieza with his unfathomable power, no matter how extraordinairy she looks, or who she may have been. With all due respect sire, to rely on her as our saviour is pure suicide."
"Child? Am I not barely older than her? If you trust a child to be your king, then surely you can trust that same child to avenge your race. Don't think I'm stepping into this foolhardily, I was a boy when my father was snatched from my grasp and Frieza placed me on the throne as what he thought was his loyal drone. I cannot simply stand by and become a puppet, you must understand that Rytak, you of all people should understand. i know you must hate me, and I know the throne belongs to you brother, but trust me to do this"
"I would trust you with my life Vegeta, as Ihave done before in battle, you have my complete support"
"Thank you brother." He arose from his throne and headed towards his chamber, pondering the situation further.
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