Hey, super here
Here is a few notes before I move on to the story
1) Microsoft words dose not let you use html codes
2) Gomen, bout them damn grammer errors. I suck at grammer, and my beta, she fell of the face of the earth...I havent talked to her in months.
3) Gomen,for short chapters and few updates, School is a big pain in my ass. And every second, I dont have school I have Band, but that is okay becasue .....the hottest guy in the world is in band.........TYLER!! *blushies* I know what your thinking Mandy, 'There she goses again'
^^ Up there I go again..
Well it is almost 11:00 and DBZ is soon to be on, and while I was waiting I decided to type.
Here it is
Rain: Special 50 reviews
ChIbI TrUnKs DaTiNg SeCrEtS
Dani: *sitting at her computer* lalalalalalala
Mirai Trunks: Hey Dani.
Dani: ^^ Hey Trunks *whispers* isnt he hot?
Mirai Trunks: Pan wanted me to give you this. *holds out peice of papper*
Dani: *takes paper* Where is Pan?
Mirai Trunks: She went on a date with the other Trunks.
Dani: *read paper* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Mirai Trunks: what is it?
Dani: I GOT 68 REVIEWS FOR RAIN!!! -_-;;;
Mirai Trunks: I have a busted eardrum.
Dani: Gomen!! *jumps up and down* I have to do something special for them people.
*crowd of reviewers come running up*
Dani: Reviewers!! YAY! ^-^ I WANT TO DO SOMETHING SPECIAL FOR YOU!!
*Reviewers ignoring Dani* Trunks!! CAN WE HAVE YOUR AUTOGRAPH!!!???
Dani: *grabs Mirai's arm* MinE!!!
*reviwers growl and leave*
Dani: *sniff* they like me for Mirai Trunks.
Mirai Trunks: ..........Why dont you give them something else?
Dani:.....Like what?
Mirai Trunks: Like....food...
Dani: my food will kill them.....Hey, I can introduce them to Ray!!! Ray, is our 'bad guy' but he really isnt that bad.
Ray: *quietly* hey
Dani: what is wrong?
Ray: Why do I always play the bad guy? I am really nice.
Dani: casue while I dont own Dragonball Z I do own you! ^-^
Ray: I feel like a pice of cattle.
Dani: Well we got 68 reviews for the storie I am trying to entertain my reviewers but the are board.
*reviewers yawn*
Ray:they all want me to die dont they?
Dani: *pats Ray's head* It is okay.
Ray reading review: *Sephie
i hate cliffhangers you must continue and if you ask me Trunks (sighs) should kick tha guys a**
Ray: well I feel the love there
gohans gal
make trunks kick his ass and then let pan chop his balls off that freak needs a good ball chop
off!!
Ray: O.o *coughs* It hurts just to think about it...
Dark*Princess*Pan
I hate you!!!! COME ON!!!! ME WANNA SEE TRUNKS KILL THAT GUY!!! HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
Ray: The youth of today are so volient....
Yokiko Pan
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO That guy is going to get beat down by Trunks, I hope.
Ray: That was one of the nicer ones too.....
Dani: *shakes head* In response to your questions about Ray gettinf his @$$ kicked for hurting Pan well.............
Ray: THAT IS IT!! I AM CALLING MY AGENT!! I WANT A STUNT DOUBLE!!!!
Goten: Settle down man!!
Ray: these people have me on the top a hit list!!!
Goten: *shivers*
Dani: .............*yawns* I am sleepy *rubbs eyes* what time is it?
Mirai Trunks: it is 12:12 and you have school tommorow.
Dani: I dont wanna go to school.
Mirai Trunks: *picks Dani up* time for bed
Dani: your not my daddy, your my boyfriend.
Mirai Trunks: *turns of the computer* Thanks to all of you who have reviewed so far.... Your names will be posted.
Dani: *reaches for the computer* must type.... I can see it now
EXCLUSIVE SNEAK PREVIEW OF CHAPER 6~*!*!~*!~*!~*!
Trunks walked in. "pan, I....."
he saw Pan traped by the man. He knew in an isntant who this guy was. The one that had raped Pan.
"Dont you dare touch Pan" he said ina dandgerious voice.
Ray smirked. "I have already done more than that.....much more...."
Trunks couldnt contain his anger any longer. He charged Ray.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Dani: must type.
Mirai Trunks: later. *waves* see you guys soon.
*dani curls up in Trunks' arms* I want some french fries and pickles...
Mirai Trunks: ooooooookkkkkkkaaaayyyy...... Nighty-Night.
Author's
I hope you liked the preview and I hope this was longer, and I hope that it entertained you. .....Well I really have to go to sleep. SO I will see you latter. Thanks for all the people that reviewed.
Super
REVIEWERS FOR CHAPETER 5
Pannychan (hey sorry about all the gramer mistakes, but I mean I have no spelling ablities, and I have a 75 in English mostly from grammer)
Yokiko Pan
Dark*Princess*Pan (hehe hicha! What is up?)
Amatsu Mikaboshi
Hanamaru825
ann
Lady Tomboy
gohans gal (painful way for Ray to be taken down, turning him from a rooster to a hen)
Anonymous
Gotens Angel
Trunks_gal0
Anonymous
Dark Saiyan Lady
kk
cece lady midnight
Galdrix ( I would love to cancel what I was doing and do nothin but write, but I am gorunded and I have band, to perious to pass up w/ the hottest guy in the world there ^-^)
mandy (hiya!! What is up! I reconigzed you!! Now your famous!! see reading my story had good rewards see you in band!)
Sai (them cliffies are evil ^-^ Death to cliffies, Wait no!! hehe they are cool too)
Sephie (yeah Trunks should, but I have to make it ineresting right?)
princessbra
THANKS ALL!! YOU DESERVE GREAT HONORS!! BUT THIS IS ALL I CAN GIVE!!
Here is a few notes before I move on to the story
1) Microsoft words dose not let you use html codes
2) Gomen, bout them damn grammer errors. I suck at grammer, and my beta, she fell of the face of the earth...I havent talked to her in months.
3) Gomen,for short chapters and few updates, School is a big pain in my ass. And every second, I dont have school I have Band, but that is okay becasue .....the hottest guy in the world is in band.........TYLER!! *blushies* I know what your thinking Mandy, 'There she goses again'
^^ Up there I go again..
Well it is almost 11:00 and DBZ is soon to be on, and while I was waiting I decided to type.
Here it is
Rain: Special 50 reviews
ChIbI TrUnKs DaTiNg SeCrEtS
Dani: *sitting at her computer* lalalalalalala
Mirai Trunks: Hey Dani.
Dani: ^^ Hey Trunks *whispers* isnt he hot?
Mirai Trunks: Pan wanted me to give you this. *holds out peice of papper*
Dani: *takes paper* Where is Pan?
Mirai Trunks: She went on a date with the other Trunks.
Dani: *read paper* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Mirai Trunks: what is it?
Dani: I GOT 68 REVIEWS FOR RAIN!!! -_-;;;
Mirai Trunks: I have a busted eardrum.
Dani: Gomen!! *jumps up and down* I have to do something special for them people.
*crowd of reviewers come running up*
Dani: Reviewers!! YAY! ^-^ I WANT TO DO SOMETHING SPECIAL FOR YOU!!
*Reviewers ignoring Dani* Trunks!! CAN WE HAVE YOUR AUTOGRAPH!!!???
Dani: *grabs Mirai's arm* MinE!!!
*reviwers growl and leave*
Dani: *sniff* they like me for Mirai Trunks.
Mirai Trunks: ..........Why dont you give them something else?
Dani:.....Like what?
Mirai Trunks: Like....food...
Dani: my food will kill them.....Hey, I can introduce them to Ray!!! Ray, is our 'bad guy' but he really isnt that bad.
Ray: *quietly* hey
Dani: what is wrong?
Ray: Why do I always play the bad guy? I am really nice.
Dani: casue while I dont own Dragonball Z I do own you! ^-^
Ray: I feel like a pice of cattle.
Dani: Well we got 68 reviews for the storie I am trying to entertain my reviewers but the are board.
*reviewers yawn*
Ray:they all want me to die dont they?
Dani: *pats Ray's head* It is okay.
Ray reading review: *Sephie
i hate cliffhangers you must continue and if you ask me Trunks (sighs) should kick tha guys a**
Ray: well I feel the love there
gohans gal
make trunks kick his ass and then let pan chop his balls off that freak needs a good ball chop
off!!
Ray: O.o *coughs* It hurts just to think about it...
Dark*Princess*Pan
I hate you!!!! COME ON!!!! ME WANNA SEE TRUNKS KILL THAT GUY!!! HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
Ray: The youth of today are so volient....
Yokiko Pan
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO That guy is going to get beat down by Trunks, I hope.
Ray: That was one of the nicer ones too.....
Dani: *shakes head* In response to your questions about Ray gettinf his @$$ kicked for hurting Pan well.............
Ray: THAT IS IT!! I AM CALLING MY AGENT!! I WANT A STUNT DOUBLE!!!!
Goten: Settle down man!!
Ray: these people have me on the top a hit list!!!
Goten: *shivers*
Dani: .............*yawns* I am sleepy *rubbs eyes* what time is it?
Mirai Trunks: it is 12:12 and you have school tommorow.
Dani: I dont wanna go to school.
Mirai Trunks: *picks Dani up* time for bed
Dani: your not my daddy, your my boyfriend.
Mirai Trunks: *turns of the computer* Thanks to all of you who have reviewed so far.... Your names will be posted.
Dani: *reaches for the computer* must type.... I can see it now
EXCLUSIVE SNEAK PREVIEW OF CHAPER 6~*!*!~*!~*!~*!
Trunks walked in. "pan, I....."
he saw Pan traped by the man. He knew in an isntant who this guy was. The one that had raped Pan.
"Dont you dare touch Pan" he said ina dandgerious voice.
Ray smirked. "I have already done more than that.....much more...."
Trunks couldnt contain his anger any longer. He charged Ray.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Dani: must type.
Mirai Trunks: later. *waves* see you guys soon.
*dani curls up in Trunks' arms* I want some french fries and pickles...
Mirai Trunks: ooooooookkkkkkkaaaayyyy...... Nighty-Night.
Author's
I hope you liked the preview and I hope this was longer, and I hope that it entertained you. .....Well I really have to go to sleep. SO I will see you latter. Thanks for all the people that reviewed.
Super
REVIEWERS FOR CHAPETER 5
Pannychan (hey sorry about all the gramer mistakes, but I mean I have no spelling ablities, and I have a 75 in English mostly from grammer)
Yokiko Pan
Dark*Princess*Pan (hehe hicha! What is up?)
Amatsu Mikaboshi
Hanamaru825
ann
Lady Tomboy
gohans gal (painful way for Ray to be taken down, turning him from a rooster to a hen)
Anonymous
Gotens Angel
Trunks_gal0
Anonymous
Dark Saiyan Lady
kk
cece lady midnight
Galdrix ( I would love to cancel what I was doing and do nothin but write, but I am gorunded and I have band, to perious to pass up w/ the hottest guy in the world there ^-^)
mandy (hiya!! What is up! I reconigzed you!! Now your famous!! see reading my story had good rewards see you in band!)
Sai (them cliffies are evil ^-^ Death to cliffies, Wait no!! hehe they are cool too)
Sephie (yeah Trunks should, but I have to make it ineresting right?)
princessbra
THANKS ALL!! YOU DESERVE GREAT HONORS!! BUT THIS IS ALL I CAN GIVE!!