Title: "In Time"
Rating:R (I know this story hasn't earned this rating yet but it might so I am playing it safe)
Disclaimer: I wish I owned these characters but I don't (wouldn't mind taking Eli for awhile)
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(Prom night, Jessie is showing off her dress to her dad, Lily, and Zoey.)
Lily* Jessie you look gorgeous (she is wearing a white long dress)
Rick* Definitely
Zoey* I love that dress.
(Grace walks down wearing a long black dress with.)
Jessie* Oh my god Grace you look beautiful.
Grace* Thanks you look amazing too.
Jessie* I know (Sarcastically)
Lily* that can't be my little girl.
Grace* Mommmm
(Eli walks in but pauses and stares at Grace for a moment)
Eli* Wow you guys look great
Jessie/Grace* Thanks
(Doorbell rings Lily gets up to answer it)
Lily* Oh hi Riley come in.
Grace* Hi Riley
Riley* Wow Grace you look amazing
Grace* Thanks
Riley* You ready?
Grace* Yeah, lets go.
Lily* Grace don't stay out late, I'm going to wait up for you.
Grace* Ok mom.
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(Grace and Riley went out to eat and they are now at the prom sitting at one of the tables that is setup)
Riley* You know Grace you really do look gorgeous
Grace* Thanks
Riley* would you like to dance
Grace* Sure.
(Grace and Riley dance for a few songs then Eli and Jessie walk in. Grace is confused so she and Riley walk over.)
Grace* Hey, E what are you doing here
Eli* Jessie's jerk of a date stood her up so I decided to take her.
Grace* That's sweet
Eli* Don't get used to it
Grace* (laughs) I won't
Riley* I am going to the restroom
Grace* ok
Eli* Since your boyfriends gone do you want to dance.
Grace* First he's not my boyfriend second what about Jessie
Eli* (points to Jessie) she seems to be busy (Jessie is dancing with a guy that Eli doesn't recognize)
Grace* Ok, then lets dance.
(They dance to a slow song that had just started. As they were dancing Eli was looking at Grace all of a sudden he just kissed her.)
(Grace didn't pull away she just stood there for a few moments wondering what had happened, then she broke the kiss and quickly walked out)
Eli* Dammit
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(later that night at home, Grace is in her room and Eli is now out side her door)
Eli* (He knocks) We have to talk about this sometime Grace.
(she doesn't answer)
Eli* Grace you in there?
Grace* Go away.
Eli* We have to talk about this.
Grace* I don't want to talk about it.
Eli* You don't have to talk but you could listen to what I have to say.
Grace* (opens the door) Fine
(Eli sits on the bed and she sits in a chair)
Grace* You wanted to talk, so talk
Eli* Grace I don't know what happened tonight, I wish I did know. I didn't plan for that to happen, but it did, and honestly I enjoyed it. Ok, I admit it I liked kissing you Grace.
Grace* (laughs) Good I liked kissing you to.
Eli* Then why did you run off?
Grace* I was confused. I still am.
Eli* Maybe this will help (he leans in and kisses her)
~the end
Ok as always I am open to any suggestions on were this story should go, and like most authors I LOVE feedback. So r/r and if you want email me at mindyg@kc.rr.com
Rating:R (I know this story hasn't earned this rating yet but it might so I am playing it safe)
Disclaimer: I wish I owned these characters but I don't (wouldn't mind taking Eli for awhile)
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(Prom night, Jessie is showing off her dress to her dad, Lily, and Zoey.)
Lily* Jessie you look gorgeous (she is wearing a white long dress)
Rick* Definitely
Zoey* I love that dress.
(Grace walks down wearing a long black dress with.)
Jessie* Oh my god Grace you look beautiful.
Grace* Thanks you look amazing too.
Jessie* I know (Sarcastically)
Lily* that can't be my little girl.
Grace* Mommmm
(Eli walks in but pauses and stares at Grace for a moment)
Eli* Wow you guys look great
Jessie/Grace* Thanks
(Doorbell rings Lily gets up to answer it)
Lily* Oh hi Riley come in.
Grace* Hi Riley
Riley* Wow Grace you look amazing
Grace* Thanks
Riley* You ready?
Grace* Yeah, lets go.
Lily* Grace don't stay out late, I'm going to wait up for you.
Grace* Ok mom.
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(Grace and Riley went out to eat and they are now at the prom sitting at one of the tables that is setup)
Riley* You know Grace you really do look gorgeous
Grace* Thanks
Riley* would you like to dance
Grace* Sure.
(Grace and Riley dance for a few songs then Eli and Jessie walk in. Grace is confused so she and Riley walk over.)
Grace* Hey, E what are you doing here
Eli* Jessie's jerk of a date stood her up so I decided to take her.
Grace* That's sweet
Eli* Don't get used to it
Grace* (laughs) I won't
Riley* I am going to the restroom
Grace* ok
Eli* Since your boyfriends gone do you want to dance.
Grace* First he's not my boyfriend second what about Jessie
Eli* (points to Jessie) she seems to be busy (Jessie is dancing with a guy that Eli doesn't recognize)
Grace* Ok, then lets dance.
(They dance to a slow song that had just started. As they were dancing Eli was looking at Grace all of a sudden he just kissed her.)
(Grace didn't pull away she just stood there for a few moments wondering what had happened, then she broke the kiss and quickly walked out)
Eli* Dammit
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(later that night at home, Grace is in her room and Eli is now out side her door)
Eli* (He knocks) We have to talk about this sometime Grace.
(she doesn't answer)
Eli* Grace you in there?
Grace* Go away.
Eli* We have to talk about this.
Grace* I don't want to talk about it.
Eli* You don't have to talk but you could listen to what I have to say.
Grace* (opens the door) Fine
(Eli sits on the bed and she sits in a chair)
Grace* You wanted to talk, so talk
Eli* Grace I don't know what happened tonight, I wish I did know. I didn't plan for that to happen, but it did, and honestly I enjoyed it. Ok, I admit it I liked kissing you Grace.
Grace* (laughs) Good I liked kissing you to.
Eli* Then why did you run off?
Grace* I was confused. I still am.
Eli* Maybe this will help (he leans in and kisses her)
~the end
Ok as always I am open to any suggestions on were this story should go, and like most authors I LOVE feedback. So r/r and if you want email me at mindyg@kc.rr.com