Oh wow after saying everyone would get in they all start coming ^_^ well
like I said I will put everyone into my story if you don't get into the
next few chapters than you will get in one I promise.
If you still want to send people go right ahead like I said before they will al get into my story.
I do not own zoids but I wish I did so anyway on with the show
Also today I am using maxindpogster's character I am switching it up a little so I hope you don't mind maxindpogster. He is going to be Dawn's missing brother opps I gave it away srry ^_^
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The star Dust team had been traveling for 2 days straight now but they still weren't at the base. None of them had gotten any sleep for Leena kept pushing them forward.
"Please Leena" Dawn muttered "I haven't gotten any sleep for 2 days now can we please just stop for a little bit and sleep please"
Leena looked at the screen watching Dawns eyes. They seemed to droop lower every second. There were also dark circles under each eye indicating the lack of sleep. She guessed that the whole team looked like this.
"All rights dawn" Leena said with a smile we will stop up here and sleep under the stars k." Leena saw Dawn's whole face light up as a sigh escaped her lips.
The team set up camp by a little stream and cooked a nice meal to recharge their already tired bodies. Everyone was asleep except for dawn. She knew she was the one who had complained for the lack of sleep but something was bothering her.
(What if the dreams come back) she thought. (Leena is the only one who knows about my dreams but if they come back I don't know what I'll do) Dawn looked up at the million's of stars covering the sky. As time flew by more and more of them seemed to fade away. Finally Dawn could not keep awake no more as she feel into a blissful sleep.
*Dream*
Dawn stared up into the sky looking at the stars pass by
"Dawn sweetie come in here it's time for dinner"
"Coming Papa" she shouting, excitement filling her voice.
Dawn entered the house and there sitting at the table was her mother, older brother, and her loving father all waiting for her. As dinner started the usual tension dawn remembered grew and grew until it happened
*Crash*
"DAWN YOU IDIOT THAT WAS MY NEW CHINA!!" Dawn's mother shouted at her smacking Dawn across her back and face as she wept.
"I'm sorry mother it just slipped I'm sorry" Dawn whimpered cowering in a corner
"SORRY, SORRY THIS IS THE THIRD DISH YOU HAVE BROCKEN THIS WEEK, THIS WEEK DAWN." Her mother shouted as she kicked dawn in the gut
"Darling please" Dawn's father whispered "I will buy you another one k?"
"NO CHUCK, SHE NEEDS TO BE TAUGHT A LESSON AND BY GOD SHE IS GOING TO LEARN ONCE AND FOR ALL." Dawn's mother stormed off into the other room
"Sis, sis are you all right?" Dawn looked up into her brother's worried face.
"Yeah Danny I'm all right just a little winded but I will be o.k."
Before Dawn could start up another conversation her mother came storming in with a whip in her right hand ready to fling it at any time.
"THIS WILL TEACH YOU DAWN FOR BEING SUCH A LITTLE FUCKEN BRAT!"
The whip came down hard as Dawn screamed out in agony every time it hit her tender skin.
"STOP IT" screamed her father he looked at his wife with angered eyes. "I"VE HAD ENOUGH BY TOMORROW I WILL BE GONE WAIT BETTER YET BY TONIGHT" and with that he grabbed his suitcase stuffed all of his clothes in it and left the house without another word.
"Dawn how could you." Her mother said with tears in her eyes "ITS ALL YOUR FAULT." And with that she picked up the whip again and started beating Dawn until the sun came up.
After that Dawn's childhood passed by her in one big flash. Her brother leaving to fight the back draft group, him never returning so the assumed him dead. Her mother blaming her for everything. Her mother's last words before she Threw Dawn out of the house onto the cold street to live on he own. Her last words echoed threw Dawns head repeating themselves over and over
"I will find you dawn and when I do you will be mine to torture once again. Nobody can stop me dawn nobody."
*Dream ended*
Dawn flew up from her position banging her head on something quite hard.
"Whoa Dawn" Leena said with a smile "It's all right it was just a dream you don't have to worry anymore." Leena started patting Dawn's back trying to get her to calm down
"Wha where am I Leena this doesn't looking anything like the inside of the Hawk eye." She turned to Leena once again. "And even if it was hawk eye she would never let a stranger pilot it not that you are stranger or anything it's just.."
"Calm down Dawn jeez you remind me of Gina when she sees a cute boy walking by." "O.k. for starters Dawn you didn't wake up this morning so I decided to let you sleep in because I knew about your dreams. I picked you up and put you in the Konigwolf so you wouldn't like mess up the Hawk eye with you flailing" Leena said with a calm cool voice
" Oh well Leena I guess you don't have to ask me what my dream was about sin.." Dawn stopped talking as she saw Leena wasn't paying any attention to her. "Leena what are you looking at?" Dawn questioned
A smile crept on Leena's face as she pointed out towards the horizon.
Dawn turned around to get a better look. Her eyes lit up as she saw what was there. There stood the hover cargo. Leena had described it in so much detail that Dawn knew right away that this is what they had been traveling to see.
"Dawn" Leena whispered "Welcome to the Blitz team base."
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oh my god I loved this chapter it made me so happy when I wrote or should I say typed this chapter.^_^ it was so sad though when I had to write about Dawn's past. Isn't it so sad tear tear o.k. Anyway sorry if you didn't want your character to be evil it's just some I have to change around since I promised to put you all into the story. O.k. the people I am turning evil will not be in the next chapter. They may be in the 5th or 6th chapter so I am really sorry I have to get typing ^_^. O.k. the people's characters that I will be using in those chapters will be
Syren and S.W- Jett Zanders
Ashitaka-Cloud Strife
Hocykid45-Evan Katrin
My little brother- Matt Kettson
Me-Lily Forehand
These 4 people (sorry if they don't turn out the way you want them to) will become members of the back draft group in the middle of the story but I got an idea that they would get betrayed so they will leave the back draft group and help the star dust team and the blitz team I hope you all enjoyed because I really enjoyed typing this chapter cya
Oh and I forgot to add if yall are wondering who I am pairing up in this story well it will be
Jack sisco/Courtney Kurtus
Bit Cloud/Leena Taurus
Jamie/Dawn summers
Gina Ikuri/ Jett Zanders
Naomi/Brad
Hope yall like and if yall still want to be in it well than put it in my review or email me k
After reading my reviews I saw that hocykid45 wanted to be paired up with a girl in this story, really badly so I will have one more pair and one more person (right now) added in the story
Lily Forehand/Evan Katrin
If you don't like that Hocykid45 just tell me k and I will change it. The only real character that I know that I could pair you up with would be pierce but that's it so just email me a Devilish_burnette@hotmail.com if you don't like it. And anyone else who doesn't like what there character is doing in my story just contact me tell me the problem and say what you want them to do k I will try really hard to change them. Oh and maxindpogster yes you will see a lot more of your character. She was just having a flash back or should I say a dream at the time k well I hope everyone enjoyed buhbye
If you still want to send people go right ahead like I said before they will al get into my story.
I do not own zoids but I wish I did so anyway on with the show
Also today I am using maxindpogster's character I am switching it up a little so I hope you don't mind maxindpogster. He is going to be Dawn's missing brother opps I gave it away srry ^_^
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The star Dust team had been traveling for 2 days straight now but they still weren't at the base. None of them had gotten any sleep for Leena kept pushing them forward.
"Please Leena" Dawn muttered "I haven't gotten any sleep for 2 days now can we please just stop for a little bit and sleep please"
Leena looked at the screen watching Dawns eyes. They seemed to droop lower every second. There were also dark circles under each eye indicating the lack of sleep. She guessed that the whole team looked like this.
"All rights dawn" Leena said with a smile we will stop up here and sleep under the stars k." Leena saw Dawn's whole face light up as a sigh escaped her lips.
The team set up camp by a little stream and cooked a nice meal to recharge their already tired bodies. Everyone was asleep except for dawn. She knew she was the one who had complained for the lack of sleep but something was bothering her.
(What if the dreams come back) she thought. (Leena is the only one who knows about my dreams but if they come back I don't know what I'll do) Dawn looked up at the million's of stars covering the sky. As time flew by more and more of them seemed to fade away. Finally Dawn could not keep awake no more as she feel into a blissful sleep.
*Dream*
Dawn stared up into the sky looking at the stars pass by
"Dawn sweetie come in here it's time for dinner"
"Coming Papa" she shouting, excitement filling her voice.
Dawn entered the house and there sitting at the table was her mother, older brother, and her loving father all waiting for her. As dinner started the usual tension dawn remembered grew and grew until it happened
*Crash*
"DAWN YOU IDIOT THAT WAS MY NEW CHINA!!" Dawn's mother shouted at her smacking Dawn across her back and face as she wept.
"I'm sorry mother it just slipped I'm sorry" Dawn whimpered cowering in a corner
"SORRY, SORRY THIS IS THE THIRD DISH YOU HAVE BROCKEN THIS WEEK, THIS WEEK DAWN." Her mother shouted as she kicked dawn in the gut
"Darling please" Dawn's father whispered "I will buy you another one k?"
"NO CHUCK, SHE NEEDS TO BE TAUGHT A LESSON AND BY GOD SHE IS GOING TO LEARN ONCE AND FOR ALL." Dawn's mother stormed off into the other room
"Sis, sis are you all right?" Dawn looked up into her brother's worried face.
"Yeah Danny I'm all right just a little winded but I will be o.k."
Before Dawn could start up another conversation her mother came storming in with a whip in her right hand ready to fling it at any time.
"THIS WILL TEACH YOU DAWN FOR BEING SUCH A LITTLE FUCKEN BRAT!"
The whip came down hard as Dawn screamed out in agony every time it hit her tender skin.
"STOP IT" screamed her father he looked at his wife with angered eyes. "I"VE HAD ENOUGH BY TOMORROW I WILL BE GONE WAIT BETTER YET BY TONIGHT" and with that he grabbed his suitcase stuffed all of his clothes in it and left the house without another word.
"Dawn how could you." Her mother said with tears in her eyes "ITS ALL YOUR FAULT." And with that she picked up the whip again and started beating Dawn until the sun came up.
After that Dawn's childhood passed by her in one big flash. Her brother leaving to fight the back draft group, him never returning so the assumed him dead. Her mother blaming her for everything. Her mother's last words before she Threw Dawn out of the house onto the cold street to live on he own. Her last words echoed threw Dawns head repeating themselves over and over
"I will find you dawn and when I do you will be mine to torture once again. Nobody can stop me dawn nobody."
*Dream ended*
Dawn flew up from her position banging her head on something quite hard.
"Whoa Dawn" Leena said with a smile "It's all right it was just a dream you don't have to worry anymore." Leena started patting Dawn's back trying to get her to calm down
"Wha where am I Leena this doesn't looking anything like the inside of the Hawk eye." She turned to Leena once again. "And even if it was hawk eye she would never let a stranger pilot it not that you are stranger or anything it's just.."
"Calm down Dawn jeez you remind me of Gina when she sees a cute boy walking by." "O.k. for starters Dawn you didn't wake up this morning so I decided to let you sleep in because I knew about your dreams. I picked you up and put you in the Konigwolf so you wouldn't like mess up the Hawk eye with you flailing" Leena said with a calm cool voice
" Oh well Leena I guess you don't have to ask me what my dream was about sin.." Dawn stopped talking as she saw Leena wasn't paying any attention to her. "Leena what are you looking at?" Dawn questioned
A smile crept on Leena's face as she pointed out towards the horizon.
Dawn turned around to get a better look. Her eyes lit up as she saw what was there. There stood the hover cargo. Leena had described it in so much detail that Dawn knew right away that this is what they had been traveling to see.
"Dawn" Leena whispered "Welcome to the Blitz team base."
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oh my god I loved this chapter it made me so happy when I wrote or should I say typed this chapter.^_^ it was so sad though when I had to write about Dawn's past. Isn't it so sad tear tear o.k. Anyway sorry if you didn't want your character to be evil it's just some I have to change around since I promised to put you all into the story. O.k. the people I am turning evil will not be in the next chapter. They may be in the 5th or 6th chapter so I am really sorry I have to get typing ^_^. O.k. the people's characters that I will be using in those chapters will be
Syren and S.W- Jett Zanders
Ashitaka-Cloud Strife
Hocykid45-Evan Katrin
My little brother- Matt Kettson
Me-Lily Forehand
These 4 people (sorry if they don't turn out the way you want them to) will become members of the back draft group in the middle of the story but I got an idea that they would get betrayed so they will leave the back draft group and help the star dust team and the blitz team I hope you all enjoyed because I really enjoyed typing this chapter cya
Oh and I forgot to add if yall are wondering who I am pairing up in this story well it will be
Jack sisco/Courtney Kurtus
Bit Cloud/Leena Taurus
Jamie/Dawn summers
Gina Ikuri/ Jett Zanders
Naomi/Brad
Hope yall like and if yall still want to be in it well than put it in my review or email me k
After reading my reviews I saw that hocykid45 wanted to be paired up with a girl in this story, really badly so I will have one more pair and one more person (right now) added in the story
Lily Forehand/Evan Katrin
If you don't like that Hocykid45 just tell me k and I will change it. The only real character that I know that I could pair you up with would be pierce but that's it so just email me a Devilish_burnette@hotmail.com if you don't like it. And anyone else who doesn't like what there character is doing in my story just contact me tell me the problem and say what you want them to do k I will try really hard to change them. Oh and maxindpogster yes you will see a lot more of your character. She was just having a flash back or should I say a dream at the time k well I hope everyone enjoyed buhbye