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I decided to write 2 chapters today since I am so bored and since I haven't updated in so long I feel like that I owe it to u all. I added almost all the characters now but I am still working on it so if your character is still not in the story just tell me (don't yell at me) and I will see or I will tell u I am still working in on it
I do not own zoids I only own Lily, Courtney, matt, and dawn the rest are either owned by someone else or they're owned by the zoid company so there not All mine.
U can tell me as many characters as u want and I will try to put them in but I do promise that I will add at least one of your characters into my story. (And if I brake my promise u can yell at me all u want) k well onto the story and if u are just starting to read the story and u wan to add a character or if u want to ad another one here is the info I need.
Age-
Height-
Appearance-
Personality-
Bio-
Hair color-
Eye color-
Good/evil-
Zoid-
Background-
So if u still want to be in the story u better hurry up and send me this information. U can either put it in the review or u can send it to me at Devilish_burnette@hotmail.com and my aim sn is Devil342001 k o.k. I took up 2 much room talking on with the story
Battle Begin
Leena sat watching the battle in front of here. Bit's liger, Brad's shadowfox, and Jamie's rayno's were up against a new team called lotho. (Don't ask)
The liger was up against one of the new zoids out called the Apliasour, which looked like one of the extinct dinosaurs. Brad's shadowfox was up against Rev raptor, while Jamie's raynos's was up against a new zoid called ultra bird.
The battle was going quit smoothly; you could tell that the blitz team had the upper hand. *Crash* the ultra bird came falling down to earth crashing into the ground with a thud. A few minutes after bit's liger took out the apliasour with its strike laser claw, and then brad's shadowfox took out the rev raptor.
BATTLE OVER BATTLE OVER THE WINNER IS THE BLITZ TEAM.
The whole base was in an uproar when the 3 pilots got back.
"That's another win for the blitz team," Bit shouted as he ran and flopped on the couch right next to leena. "Did you watch the battle Leena it was so amazing the way we took out the other team it was such a piece of cake." A smile spread across Leena's face as nodded to bit while he explained every detail about the battle and how it was so easy for him and liger to take out the apliasour.
"Some day we will have to have a duel with you girls and see who wins" Jamie shouted as he walked over to stand next to Dawn.
"Naaaa Jamie we wouldn't have to go threw all that trouble I mean we already know who would come out the victor of that battle." Bit smirked as he looked at stardust team.
"Yea it would be us loud mouth" Courtney stated as she walked over to leena and whispered something into her ear. Leena nodded and walked off into the vid room to take a message.
"Wanna bet on that cheese head." Bit yelled as he tried to grab Courtney and tackle her on the couch.
"Sure thing." She said with a smile as she moved away from the couch and let Bit fall onto the floor face first while everyone in the room started laughing about Bit's position.
~Vid Room~
"So then it is settled than" leena said over the com link as another man nodded. "We will battle in 3 hours outside the back draft base, if we win you shall never bother Dawn again and if we lose u get me and my zoid."
"It will be great to have u on our side again Leena ta ta for now." The com link closed as leena stiffened at his cold voice. "Not if I can help it," she whispered, "not if I can help it.."
As leena walked into the room everyone quieted down to here what she was about to say.
Leena cleared her throat "We have a battle in 3 hours girls, get ready we will be leaving soon." With that said Leena walked out of the room heading towards the room she had been staying in to gather up her stuff.
"Wonder what that was about." Bit said as he got off the floor and watched leena leave the room.
Poor Leena Dawn thought as she watched her go. She holds so much pain inside her "so much" she whispered before she thought about what she said dawn went to the hanger to get her Hawk eye ready to leave.
~3 hours later~
4 zoids stood close to the back draft base waiting for the other team to immerge. The Blitz team had gone to a bar with jack to watch the battle from there.
A few minutes later 5 zoids came walking from the distance
"Oh my god" Courtney muttered as she saw the zoids appear those are some fancy zoids.
Leena nodded as she saw them appear there were 5 zoids a (see chapter 6) rampage, white liger, snipe liger, mecha liger, and a blue raptor. "This is not going to be easy" leena said over the com-link. "Gina u and cyclone take on rampage all right?"
"All right Leena I will do my Best over and out." Gina stated as she moved her cyclone in front of the rampage.
Leena smiled as Gina moved in front of the zoid "Good now Courtney sorry to do this to u but I need u to take on the blue raptor and the snipe liger k."
"No Prob I don't mind at all." Courtney moved her lightning saix xxx in front of the two zoids getting ready to attack when the judge arrived.
"Dawn I need you to."
"Don't worry leena I know I need to go after the white liger right?"
"Right good Luck."
" Thanx u to."
The konig Wolf and the hawk eye move into their places as everyone waited for the judge.
~Bar~
"So Jack I see u have a little crush on that lightning saix xxx pilot out there hmmmm."
Jack blushed as he looked back at the screen watching the lightning saix xxx getting ready. "You never miss a thing do u Bit?"
"It's my Job, o and hey form a reliable source she has a crush on u to." Bit said with a smile on him face.
Once again Jack was caught off guard as a crimson blush once again crossed his face. The bar was in an up roar for 2 things 1 they had seen a weakness in Jack (finally) and 2 the battle was about to start.
Go leena bit thought as he moved his chair into a more comfortable position.
~Battlefield~
A Dark judge landed in the middle of the battlefield
BATTLEFIELD 0999 THE STARDUST TEAM V.S THE BACK DRAFTS ULTRA TEAM. READY! FIGHT!
That's all the teams heard as the battle started.
~Courtney~
Courtney's lightning xxx was put to the full test as she started it up running first for the blue raptor. "Come on lightning we can do it" she put the speed up one more notch as she headed straight for the blue raptor.*bang* something hit the lightning saix xxx as it was rammed into a bolder.
"Courtney are u all right." Leena shouted over the com link while dodging another attack from the mecha liger.
Courtney started rubbing her head but when she pulled her hand back she found blood all over her hand. She turned around and saw that her head had hit something really sharp at the back of her seat "damn" she muttered "Accept for a little blood I am all right Leena."
"K" Leena stated as she started attacking the mecha liger making sure she got at least one hit.
Courtney got her lightning saix xxx right back up and headed once again towards the blue raptor but this time she would be ready. She watched and then finally saw what had happened. The snipe liger had come in front of the blue raptor and protected it. Oh No she thought you won't catch me off guard this time. She put the lightning saix xxx another notch up and rammed into the snipe liger with all the power she had saved up.
"AHHHHHH" screamed the pilot as he was forced into a plateau. System freeze, system freeze flashed across his scream "Shit he shouted as he hit the controls over and over again.
"Ha one down one to go" yelled Courtney as she wiped the blood from her nose. But it was to late for her for right when she turned around the blue raptor was coming at her full power claws extended. Courtney couldn't even get a scream out as her cockpit exploded glass flying everywhere.
The lightning saix xxx was down on the ground in less than a minute.
"Courtney are u there?" screamed Leena "Courtney please answer please." A tear slid down Leena's tear for she knew she would not get a single answer Courtney zoid had been destroyed.
dawn watched as Courtney's zoid blew up. "Courtney she whispered as she flew down a little to see if she could see Courtney in the wreckage.
~Bar~
everyone was silent as they watched Courtney's zoid blow up. Jack was speechless he couldn't believe it he just couldn't believe it. A single tear slide down his face as he hung his head so no one could see the tears fall down his face.
"Jack look" Bit whispered
As jack looked up he couldn't believe his eyes. Coming out of the smoke bleeding and covered with dirt all over her body was Courtney holding her arm slightly she fell to the ground with a sickening thud still breathing but in grave danger.
~Dawn~
Dawn sighed in relieve she flew towards her opponent. The white liger was standing there waiting for her attack. She flew as close as she could and started shooting at him. The liger bounced out of the way and tried to attack her from the mountain. Dawn saw this and did a barrel roll and flew up towards him at maximum speed. He didn't know what hit him until it was to late.
The white liger fell off the cliff and landed at the bottom, his zoid being destroyed.
Dawn smiled and gave a thumbs up when the com link opened to Leena. But before she could say anything something hit the back of her zoid. When she looked back she saw the rampage firing at her madly while the cyclone was trying to get him to stop.
Before she knew what hit her she falling down to earth at an incredible speed. Screaming she tried to hit the escape button but it was jammed so she was stuck in her zoid as it plummeted to earth. I love u Jamie she thought as she crashed into the ground explosion erupting all around her.
~ bar~
the bar was one again silent as they watched the hawk explode into thousands of pieces.
Jamie started crying as he watched the hawk eye go up into flames. No one knew if she had lived or died but everyone sure hoped for Jamie' sake that she had lived threw the incident.
There hopes and prayers were answered as a woman with brown hair walked threw the flames and smoke covering her mouth, coughing and sputtering and moment she got. She fell to the ground coughing up blood and trying to grasp as much air as she could.
~Battlefield~
the odds were 3 to 2 and leena saw no hope in winning. She wasn't going to give up she would go down fighting if she had to.
Leena attacked the mecha Liger with her light laser claw. With so much power in that attack the mecha liger didn't stand a chance and was destroyed. The pilot had escaped though cursing all the way.
Leena and Gina stood next to each other while Jett and Lily stood next to each other. Both teams ready for an all out attack.
"Leena u attack rampage while I go after the blue raptor o.k.?" right Leena agreed as they both took there positions.
"Ready" Leena asked as they both faced their opponents."
"Ready" Gina said smiling as she looked back at her screen
"Than lets go." Leena shouted as she pushed on her controls making konig wolf run towards rampage.
"all right cyclone lets show them what we got." She got her cyclone at a run as she headed towards the blue raptor.
~Gina~
Gina watched as the raptor stood still waiting for her to attack something isn't right she thought as she watched her every move. Gina attacked the blue raptor by ramming it into the side pushing it down to make it easier to attack.
This is too easy she thought as she knocked over the zoid something isn't right. Aww well she was about to attack the zoid with an all out attack when she felt something pierce her zoid. She looked down and saw that the blue raptors left claw had pierced her zoid right in the middle
"Gina screamed as the cock pit blew up and left Gina unconscious as it fell over.
"GINA" leena screamed as she watched her friends zoid fall over.
Before Leena could do anything both of the zoids ganged up on her and fired all the ammo they had left. Leena's screams echoed threw the bar like a ghost. When the smoked cleared all you could see were parts of the zoid they had destroyed Leena was nowhere in sight.
"BATTLE OVER BATTLE OVER THE WINNER IS THE BACK DRAFTS ULTRA TEAM."
"NO" Bit screamed as they watched the back draft group take all four zoids and all four girls back to their base.
" I told u Leena" A man whispered behind is desk. I can't wait to see you again hahhahahahahahahhahhaha...
now that was along chapter and tiring I am sweaty from all this typing well I hope u enjoy and please review review review love ya all
devilish_burnette
I decided to write 2 chapters today since I am so bored and since I haven't updated in so long I feel like that I owe it to u all. I added almost all the characters now but I am still working on it so if your character is still not in the story just tell me (don't yell at me) and I will see or I will tell u I am still working in on it
I do not own zoids I only own Lily, Courtney, matt, and dawn the rest are either owned by someone else or they're owned by the zoid company so there not All mine.
U can tell me as many characters as u want and I will try to put them in but I do promise that I will add at least one of your characters into my story. (And if I brake my promise u can yell at me all u want) k well onto the story and if u are just starting to read the story and u wan to add a character or if u want to ad another one here is the info I need.
Age-
Height-
Appearance-
Personality-
Bio-
Hair color-
Eye color-
Good/evil-
Zoid-
Background-
So if u still want to be in the story u better hurry up and send me this information. U can either put it in the review or u can send it to me at Devilish_burnette@hotmail.com and my aim sn is Devil342001 k o.k. I took up 2 much room talking on with the story
Battle Begin
Leena sat watching the battle in front of here. Bit's liger, Brad's shadowfox, and Jamie's rayno's were up against a new team called lotho. (Don't ask)
The liger was up against one of the new zoids out called the Apliasour, which looked like one of the extinct dinosaurs. Brad's shadowfox was up against Rev raptor, while Jamie's raynos's was up against a new zoid called ultra bird.
The battle was going quit smoothly; you could tell that the blitz team had the upper hand. *Crash* the ultra bird came falling down to earth crashing into the ground with a thud. A few minutes after bit's liger took out the apliasour with its strike laser claw, and then brad's shadowfox took out the rev raptor.
BATTLE OVER BATTLE OVER THE WINNER IS THE BLITZ TEAM.
The whole base was in an uproar when the 3 pilots got back.
"That's another win for the blitz team," Bit shouted as he ran and flopped on the couch right next to leena. "Did you watch the battle Leena it was so amazing the way we took out the other team it was such a piece of cake." A smile spread across Leena's face as nodded to bit while he explained every detail about the battle and how it was so easy for him and liger to take out the apliasour.
"Some day we will have to have a duel with you girls and see who wins" Jamie shouted as he walked over to stand next to Dawn.
"Naaaa Jamie we wouldn't have to go threw all that trouble I mean we already know who would come out the victor of that battle." Bit smirked as he looked at stardust team.
"Yea it would be us loud mouth" Courtney stated as she walked over to leena and whispered something into her ear. Leena nodded and walked off into the vid room to take a message.
"Wanna bet on that cheese head." Bit yelled as he tried to grab Courtney and tackle her on the couch.
"Sure thing." She said with a smile as she moved away from the couch and let Bit fall onto the floor face first while everyone in the room started laughing about Bit's position.
~Vid Room~
"So then it is settled than" leena said over the com link as another man nodded. "We will battle in 3 hours outside the back draft base, if we win you shall never bother Dawn again and if we lose u get me and my zoid."
"It will be great to have u on our side again Leena ta ta for now." The com link closed as leena stiffened at his cold voice. "Not if I can help it," she whispered, "not if I can help it.."
As leena walked into the room everyone quieted down to here what she was about to say.
Leena cleared her throat "We have a battle in 3 hours girls, get ready we will be leaving soon." With that said Leena walked out of the room heading towards the room she had been staying in to gather up her stuff.
"Wonder what that was about." Bit said as he got off the floor and watched leena leave the room.
Poor Leena Dawn thought as she watched her go. She holds so much pain inside her "so much" she whispered before she thought about what she said dawn went to the hanger to get her Hawk eye ready to leave.
~3 hours later~
4 zoids stood close to the back draft base waiting for the other team to immerge. The Blitz team had gone to a bar with jack to watch the battle from there.
A few minutes later 5 zoids came walking from the distance
"Oh my god" Courtney muttered as she saw the zoids appear those are some fancy zoids.
Leena nodded as she saw them appear there were 5 zoids a (see chapter 6) rampage, white liger, snipe liger, mecha liger, and a blue raptor. "This is not going to be easy" leena said over the com-link. "Gina u and cyclone take on rampage all right?"
"All right Leena I will do my Best over and out." Gina stated as she moved her cyclone in front of the rampage.
Leena smiled as Gina moved in front of the zoid "Good now Courtney sorry to do this to u but I need u to take on the blue raptor and the snipe liger k."
"No Prob I don't mind at all." Courtney moved her lightning saix xxx in front of the two zoids getting ready to attack when the judge arrived.
"Dawn I need you to."
"Don't worry leena I know I need to go after the white liger right?"
"Right good Luck."
" Thanx u to."
The konig Wolf and the hawk eye move into their places as everyone waited for the judge.
~Bar~
"So Jack I see u have a little crush on that lightning saix xxx pilot out there hmmmm."
Jack blushed as he looked back at the screen watching the lightning saix xxx getting ready. "You never miss a thing do u Bit?"
"It's my Job, o and hey form a reliable source she has a crush on u to." Bit said with a smile on him face.
Once again Jack was caught off guard as a crimson blush once again crossed his face. The bar was in an up roar for 2 things 1 they had seen a weakness in Jack (finally) and 2 the battle was about to start.
Go leena bit thought as he moved his chair into a more comfortable position.
~Battlefield~
A Dark judge landed in the middle of the battlefield
BATTLEFIELD 0999 THE STARDUST TEAM V.S THE BACK DRAFTS ULTRA TEAM. READY! FIGHT!
That's all the teams heard as the battle started.
~Courtney~
Courtney's lightning xxx was put to the full test as she started it up running first for the blue raptor. "Come on lightning we can do it" she put the speed up one more notch as she headed straight for the blue raptor.*bang* something hit the lightning saix xxx as it was rammed into a bolder.
"Courtney are u all right." Leena shouted over the com link while dodging another attack from the mecha liger.
Courtney started rubbing her head but when she pulled her hand back she found blood all over her hand. She turned around and saw that her head had hit something really sharp at the back of her seat "damn" she muttered "Accept for a little blood I am all right Leena."
"K" Leena stated as she started attacking the mecha liger making sure she got at least one hit.
Courtney got her lightning saix xxx right back up and headed once again towards the blue raptor but this time she would be ready. She watched and then finally saw what had happened. The snipe liger had come in front of the blue raptor and protected it. Oh No she thought you won't catch me off guard this time. She put the lightning saix xxx another notch up and rammed into the snipe liger with all the power she had saved up.
"AHHHHHH" screamed the pilot as he was forced into a plateau. System freeze, system freeze flashed across his scream "Shit he shouted as he hit the controls over and over again.
"Ha one down one to go" yelled Courtney as she wiped the blood from her nose. But it was to late for her for right when she turned around the blue raptor was coming at her full power claws extended. Courtney couldn't even get a scream out as her cockpit exploded glass flying everywhere.
The lightning saix xxx was down on the ground in less than a minute.
"Courtney are u there?" screamed Leena "Courtney please answer please." A tear slid down Leena's tear for she knew she would not get a single answer Courtney zoid had been destroyed.
dawn watched as Courtney's zoid blew up. "Courtney she whispered as she flew down a little to see if she could see Courtney in the wreckage.
~Bar~
everyone was silent as they watched Courtney's zoid blow up. Jack was speechless he couldn't believe it he just couldn't believe it. A single tear slide down his face as he hung his head so no one could see the tears fall down his face.
"Jack look" Bit whispered
As jack looked up he couldn't believe his eyes. Coming out of the smoke bleeding and covered with dirt all over her body was Courtney holding her arm slightly she fell to the ground with a sickening thud still breathing but in grave danger.
~Dawn~
Dawn sighed in relieve she flew towards her opponent. The white liger was standing there waiting for her attack. She flew as close as she could and started shooting at him. The liger bounced out of the way and tried to attack her from the mountain. Dawn saw this and did a barrel roll and flew up towards him at maximum speed. He didn't know what hit him until it was to late.
The white liger fell off the cliff and landed at the bottom, his zoid being destroyed.
Dawn smiled and gave a thumbs up when the com link opened to Leena. But before she could say anything something hit the back of her zoid. When she looked back she saw the rampage firing at her madly while the cyclone was trying to get him to stop.
Before she knew what hit her she falling down to earth at an incredible speed. Screaming she tried to hit the escape button but it was jammed so she was stuck in her zoid as it plummeted to earth. I love u Jamie she thought as she crashed into the ground explosion erupting all around her.
~ bar~
the bar was one again silent as they watched the hawk explode into thousands of pieces.
Jamie started crying as he watched the hawk eye go up into flames. No one knew if she had lived or died but everyone sure hoped for Jamie' sake that she had lived threw the incident.
There hopes and prayers were answered as a woman with brown hair walked threw the flames and smoke covering her mouth, coughing and sputtering and moment she got. She fell to the ground coughing up blood and trying to grasp as much air as she could.
~Battlefield~
the odds were 3 to 2 and leena saw no hope in winning. She wasn't going to give up she would go down fighting if she had to.
Leena attacked the mecha Liger with her light laser claw. With so much power in that attack the mecha liger didn't stand a chance and was destroyed. The pilot had escaped though cursing all the way.
Leena and Gina stood next to each other while Jett and Lily stood next to each other. Both teams ready for an all out attack.
"Leena u attack rampage while I go after the blue raptor o.k.?" right Leena agreed as they both took there positions.
"Ready" Leena asked as they both faced their opponents."
"Ready" Gina said smiling as she looked back at her screen
"Than lets go." Leena shouted as she pushed on her controls making konig wolf run towards rampage.
"all right cyclone lets show them what we got." She got her cyclone at a run as she headed towards the blue raptor.
~Gina~
Gina watched as the raptor stood still waiting for her to attack something isn't right she thought as she watched her every move. Gina attacked the blue raptor by ramming it into the side pushing it down to make it easier to attack.
This is too easy she thought as she knocked over the zoid something isn't right. Aww well she was about to attack the zoid with an all out attack when she felt something pierce her zoid. She looked down and saw that the blue raptors left claw had pierced her zoid right in the middle
"Gina screamed as the cock pit blew up and left Gina unconscious as it fell over.
"GINA" leena screamed as she watched her friends zoid fall over.
Before Leena could do anything both of the zoids ganged up on her and fired all the ammo they had left. Leena's screams echoed threw the bar like a ghost. When the smoked cleared all you could see were parts of the zoid they had destroyed Leena was nowhere in sight.
"BATTLE OVER BATTLE OVER THE WINNER IS THE BACK DRAFTS ULTRA TEAM."
"NO" Bit screamed as they watched the back draft group take all four zoids and all four girls back to their base.
" I told u Leena" A man whispered behind is desk. I can't wait to see you again hahhahahahahahahhahhaha...
now that was along chapter and tiring I am sweaty from all this typing well I hope u enjoy and please review review review love ya all
devilish_burnette
