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don't you?
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Disclaimer: I don't own Deltora Quest and if I did my version wouldn't even get past the publishers. I'm also not making any money out of this. I don't even own the plot 'cause I don't even have one. Who writes a story with no plot? Only me.
Chapter 2.
These beds are so uncomfortable! Jasmine was used to sleeping in the forest and beds, something that everyone especially Leif and Marilyn laughed at, was a foreign word to her.
She puled herself up and made her way into the kitchen.
"Good Morning!" She heard Leif's familiar voice.
"Leif? What are you doing here?" Jasmine said in surprise.
"Well since you asked, Mothers getting ready for tonight and so are the others but knowing you, you at least won't be." Leif said.
"I could be you never now!" Jasmine snapped. She still had her sharp tongue.
"Sorry, so do you plan on getting ready for tonight then?"
"No." Jasmine trailed off.
"I was right. What colour is your gown? I want us to match." Leif asked.
"Hmph! You haven't even asked me yet and it's red." Jasmine snapped again.
"Fine. Do you want to be my partner for tonight?"
Jasmine sighed. Leif was too predictable.
"Alright. Can you cook breakfast? I can't cook." Jasmine asked Leif. She hated sounding helpless and if she was back in forest she could easily get food for the trees but the last time she tired to cook she melted the stove to the ground.
"You want me to cook?! I have a better idea. Follow me." Leif beckoned Jasmine to follow.
They walked out of the forge and began walking. Jasmine could see they were walking towards the palace. As she said, Leif was predictable.
"The palace cooks are more than happy to cook, so why don't let them." Leif said.
Leif took Jasmine's hand and silently walked down one of the majestic corridors of the palace.
"We don't want Mother to find us, she probably force us to help design her gown. I can really see the former Queen coming out in her." Leif joked.
"You should see Marilyn." Jasmine whispered.
"Yes. I sometimes feel sorry for Ranesh, he doesn't have a chance." Leif said sarcastically. [Does being sarcastic work with these characters??]
"I'm starting to feel sorry myself too, unless." Jasmine said mockingly. [What about mockingly?? I'll stop interrupting now ^_^]
"Unless. Well, I'll just have to see about." Leif said bringing Jasmine close to his chest.
"Leif! Jasmine! I've been looking for you both everywhere." Marilyn came from the door behind them followed by Ranesh. Jasmine pulled apart for Leif.
"The banquet is starting in five hours and we haven't even started to get ready yet! I know I'm overreacting but I am Toran." Marilyn said.
"Yes and Sharn wants to meet us Leif." Ranesh said slowly.
"Look I'll see you two tonight. " With a slight wave with his hand Leif followed Ranesh down the corridor.
"Let's get ready!" Marilyn said.
Ta Da!! Two chapters finished. I think the characters are a bit OOC, maybe more. But I'll try and work on it and the imaginary plot. I'm embarrassed, this chapter is only 551 words and my first was only about 600 something. Lazy.
***Oblivion*** ^_^
Disclaimer: I don't own Deltora Quest and if I did my version wouldn't even get past the publishers. I'm also not making any money out of this. I don't even own the plot 'cause I don't even have one. Who writes a story with no plot? Only me.
Chapter 2.
These beds are so uncomfortable! Jasmine was used to sleeping in the forest and beds, something that everyone especially Leif and Marilyn laughed at, was a foreign word to her.
She puled herself up and made her way into the kitchen.
"Good Morning!" She heard Leif's familiar voice.
"Leif? What are you doing here?" Jasmine said in surprise.
"Well since you asked, Mothers getting ready for tonight and so are the others but knowing you, you at least won't be." Leif said.
"I could be you never now!" Jasmine snapped. She still had her sharp tongue.
"Sorry, so do you plan on getting ready for tonight then?"
"No." Jasmine trailed off.
"I was right. What colour is your gown? I want us to match." Leif asked.
"Hmph! You haven't even asked me yet and it's red." Jasmine snapped again.
"Fine. Do you want to be my partner for tonight?"
Jasmine sighed. Leif was too predictable.
"Alright. Can you cook breakfast? I can't cook." Jasmine asked Leif. She hated sounding helpless and if she was back in forest she could easily get food for the trees but the last time she tired to cook she melted the stove to the ground.
"You want me to cook?! I have a better idea. Follow me." Leif beckoned Jasmine to follow.
They walked out of the forge and began walking. Jasmine could see they were walking towards the palace. As she said, Leif was predictable.
"The palace cooks are more than happy to cook, so why don't let them." Leif said.
Leif took Jasmine's hand and silently walked down one of the majestic corridors of the palace.
"We don't want Mother to find us, she probably force us to help design her gown. I can really see the former Queen coming out in her." Leif joked.
"You should see Marilyn." Jasmine whispered.
"Yes. I sometimes feel sorry for Ranesh, he doesn't have a chance." Leif said sarcastically. [Does being sarcastic work with these characters??]
"I'm starting to feel sorry myself too, unless." Jasmine said mockingly. [What about mockingly?? I'll stop interrupting now ^_^]
"Unless. Well, I'll just have to see about." Leif said bringing Jasmine close to his chest.
"Leif! Jasmine! I've been looking for you both everywhere." Marilyn came from the door behind them followed by Ranesh. Jasmine pulled apart for Leif.
"The banquet is starting in five hours and we haven't even started to get ready yet! I know I'm overreacting but I am Toran." Marilyn said.
"Yes and Sharn wants to meet us Leif." Ranesh said slowly.
"Look I'll see you two tonight. " With a slight wave with his hand Leif followed Ranesh down the corridor.
"Let's get ready!" Marilyn said.
Ta Da!! Two chapters finished. I think the characters are a bit OOC, maybe more. But I'll try and work on it and the imaginary plot. I'm embarrassed, this chapter is only 551 words and my first was only about 600 something. Lazy.
***Oblivion*** ^_^