DISCLAIMER: OH MY GOD I SO WISH I HAD AKIRA TORYAMA'S TALENT TO CREATE A
MASTERPIECE LIKE DBZ! However, i am simply a lowly american writer who
wants to... erm... expound on his work. Many characters and DRAGONBALL Z
from which they were taken are his and Funimation's copyrights.
Note: I wrote this in 7th grade, so I may rewrite it using my more mature writing style, but if you review (and please review) notify me as to wether or not i should redo it. Just take this for what it is, and dont obsess on any discretions with DBZ. Please excuse the short chapters.
Genesis
A Chapter Story by The Weasel
Chapter 6: Infinite Power!
Edmund laid on the strange black table. It was made of an incredibly strong kind of plastic. He was bolted in with restraints of a similar material. A wire that ended in an electrode was placed on each of his fingers and each of his palms. A large plug was placed on his forehead covering his crystal. The room in which he lay was huge and dome shaped. On the wall to his upper right was a window with a red tint, behind which the three alien scientists sat. At the apex of the room hung a giant piece of machinery some twenty feet above his head all the wires were attached to it. It looked much like a spider with thirteen legs.
"Alright, Edmund we will start slowly and then increase every five seconds." Said the soothing female voice of Si'djet, "Are you ready?"
"Okay," Edmund responded, "here goes nothing!"
A low whirring sound came from the machine above him. Edmund felt a strange vibrating feeling in his joints leading up to his brain.
"We are at five ki per second."
The whirring soon kicked up to a buzzing. Tiny tickling sensations danced across his nerves toward his brain. He felt like giggling, but his lungs could only gurgle and resume breathing.
"We are at ten ki per second."
The buzzing rose up an octave, and the tickling became an itching. An invisible force clawed at his tendons. Edmund writhed in an attempt to scratch this eternal itch. Spit dribbled from his mouth.
"The rate is now 50 ki per second. Edmund, are you O.K.?"
It was a rhetorical question. Edmund was now foaming at the mouth. The itching was now like stinging. A million needles pierced his skin as energy flowed through him. The humming was now like a screech of a banshee.
"We'll increase the interval now. You are at 100 ki per second"
The screech was now crescendoing to an incredibly high squeal. Bullets of pain burst through him the spit gurgling from his mouth caught fire and burned his lip and cheek.
"1,000 ki per second."
Edmund's body felt like it was being torn apart. The sizzling saliva paled in comparison to the indescribable pain. The five seconds felt like sixty seconds.
"10,000 ki per second"
All of a sudden, the screech stopped and everything went white, almost like the vision. He was numb and could no longer feel the pain of the energy.
"This is it, everyone, 100,000 ki is as high as it goes."
He felt incredibly strong, like he could just reach out and grab something and crush it. He felt… invincible! He had the infinite power of a god! His enemies would perish by his hand! He was reborn into an angel of destruction!
Now they will all suffer! He thought. They will pay for what they've done to me! The whole world will pay for its cruelty!
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!HAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!" Edmund laughed at the top of his lungs. "I AM A GOD! EDMUND A.K.A. RAGGEDY ANDY OF SATAAN CITY IS NOW OFICIALLY A GOD! I WILL SMITE THEM ALL! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!"
Note: I wrote this in 7th grade, so I may rewrite it using my more mature writing style, but if you review (and please review) notify me as to wether or not i should redo it. Just take this for what it is, and dont obsess on any discretions with DBZ. Please excuse the short chapters.
Genesis
A Chapter Story by The Weasel
Chapter 6: Infinite Power!
Edmund laid on the strange black table. It was made of an incredibly strong kind of plastic. He was bolted in with restraints of a similar material. A wire that ended in an electrode was placed on each of his fingers and each of his palms. A large plug was placed on his forehead covering his crystal. The room in which he lay was huge and dome shaped. On the wall to his upper right was a window with a red tint, behind which the three alien scientists sat. At the apex of the room hung a giant piece of machinery some twenty feet above his head all the wires were attached to it. It looked much like a spider with thirteen legs.
"Alright, Edmund we will start slowly and then increase every five seconds." Said the soothing female voice of Si'djet, "Are you ready?"
"Okay," Edmund responded, "here goes nothing!"
A low whirring sound came from the machine above him. Edmund felt a strange vibrating feeling in his joints leading up to his brain.
"We are at five ki per second."
The whirring soon kicked up to a buzzing. Tiny tickling sensations danced across his nerves toward his brain. He felt like giggling, but his lungs could only gurgle and resume breathing.
"We are at ten ki per second."
The buzzing rose up an octave, and the tickling became an itching. An invisible force clawed at his tendons. Edmund writhed in an attempt to scratch this eternal itch. Spit dribbled from his mouth.
"The rate is now 50 ki per second. Edmund, are you O.K.?"
It was a rhetorical question. Edmund was now foaming at the mouth. The itching was now like stinging. A million needles pierced his skin as energy flowed through him. The humming was now like a screech of a banshee.
"We'll increase the interval now. You are at 100 ki per second"
The screech was now crescendoing to an incredibly high squeal. Bullets of pain burst through him the spit gurgling from his mouth caught fire and burned his lip and cheek.
"1,000 ki per second."
Edmund's body felt like it was being torn apart. The sizzling saliva paled in comparison to the indescribable pain. The five seconds felt like sixty seconds.
"10,000 ki per second"
All of a sudden, the screech stopped and everything went white, almost like the vision. He was numb and could no longer feel the pain of the energy.
"This is it, everyone, 100,000 ki is as high as it goes."
He felt incredibly strong, like he could just reach out and grab something and crush it. He felt… invincible! He had the infinite power of a god! His enemies would perish by his hand! He was reborn into an angel of destruction!
Now they will all suffer! He thought. They will pay for what they've done to me! The whole world will pay for its cruelty!
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!HAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!" Edmund laughed at the top of his lungs. "I AM A GOD! EDMUND A.K.A. RAGGEDY ANDY OF SATAAN CITY IS NOW OFICIALLY A GOD! I WILL SMITE THEM ALL! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!"