DISCLAIMER: OH MY GOD I SO WISH I HAD AKIRA TORYAMA'S TALENT TO CREATE A
MASTERPIECE LIKE DBZ! However, i am simply a lowly american writer who
wants to... erm... expound on his work. Many characters and DRAGONBALL Z
from which they were taken are his and Funimation's copyrights.
Note: I wrote this in 7th grade, so I may rewrite it using my more mature writing style, but if you review (and please review) notify me as to wether or not i should redo it. Just take this for what it is, and dont obsess on any discretions with DBZ. Please excuse the short chapters.
Genesis
A Chapter Story by The Weasel
Interlude: Visions of Things to Come
At the sanctuary, Dende let out a muffled gasp and looked to the midnight sky in the direction of the burst of power. "What is it, master?" asked Mr. Po-Po, "Something has arrived just above the earth. Something evil. Weak, but evil." In the afterlife, Goku woke up with a start. That's weird! Saiyajins never wake up in the middle of the night, he thought, man, am I stil lworrying about everybody on earth? Then he noticed the 555,380 Ki flare- up in low earth orbit. Ohh, so that's what woke me up. Well, it's too weak to be Vegeta, Gohan, Goten, Piccolo or Trunks, it could be Yamcha, Tienshinhan, or.no, they can't hold their breaths that long. There's something odd about this signature.oh hell. If something bad happens, I'll know. And he went back to sleep. Meanwhile, Trunks was having a strange dream. He was racing on foot against the kid he'd beat up that day. The other kid was struggling to keep up. He eventually was out of sight. Then, Trunks noticed that the kid was gaining on him. Behind him was a bright light. He was flying! Soon he was next to Trunks. How can this be? Thought Trunks and he began to fly, too, but the kid had already passed him! Trunks flew as fast as he could, but couldn't catch up with him. He was already far ahead. How long is this race? He could now see the finish line, but no matter how far he went, it didn't get closer. He saw the kid (was his hair red?) waiting there for him. "SHIT!!!" He screamed. And flew as hard and fast as he could. He ran out of power almost immediately. He fell to the ground, exhausted. "YOU WIN!!" he screamed, "I GIVE UP!! YOU BASTARD, YOU WIN!!" tears streamed down his face. He looked up and saw the kid with his hand extended and the smile of one who had found a long lost friend. "Who are you?" asked Trunks.
Chapter 7: This Could Be the One
The machine was now off, and Edmund struggled at the bonds that held him down to the table. He pulled and pulled, but they held fast. He grew more and more frustrated, dangerously frustrated. "YEEEEAAAARRRGH!" He screamed, "GET ME OUT OF HERE!!!" The angrier he was, the more energy he could feel swelling within him. He screamed in pain as his brain collected more and more of it and his forehead burned, emulating a high fever. Something was telling him, let go, let go, like a whisper in his mind. With a bit of a push, all Edmund's frustration, all his pain, left him straight through the crystal in his forehead. It felt great, as if a huge burden was lifted from him. A giant flash of light burst out and swirled around the room, completely uncontrolled. It writhed and danced, twisted, inverted, and split, like fire but ten times hotter. After struggling for about five minutes that seemed like an hour, he managed to get it in a relatively straight path and aimed it straight up. The giant machine that hung above him exploded in half and fell right on top of him. Edmund went unconscious.
* * *
Two of the three Khalai watched eagerly as the spectacular light show unfolded. They marveled as he released the energy, and learned to control it. When it was all over they looked at each other. "Incredible!" Said Ren-Tin "Did you see how quickly he learned to control his ki blast?" "Yes! It was amazing!" Answered Si'djet, "And in all of my 470 years on this job
I have never seen an alien's vital signs stay so close to their normal ranges!" "Well, Khi, what do you think. Is he the one?" "Yes, what is your opinion of this boy?" Khi cowered in the corner of the subject observation alcove. "Khi, what are you doing?" Asked Ren-Tin. "Taking cover in case he destroys the room." "You shouldn't worry. These windows are proven to withstand up to a 500,000 ki blast!" "That WAS a 500,000 ki blast!" "Well then we were lucky." Said Si'djet. "Luck does not exist." Retorted Khi. "Well, you missed the whole episode." Said Ren-Tin. "Of course I didn't! I'm not a farseer for nothing!" Khi said sarcastically. "Ah, I forgot that you were 'Omniscient'." Replied Ren-Tin in the same manner. "POLYNISCIENT!" corrected Khi. "SARCASM!" explained Ren-Tin. "Our subject is bleeding." Commented Khi. "I'm on it." said Si'djet. "We know almost nothing about human physiology!" Complained Khi. "Well, I'm not a medical officer for nothing!" Si'djet left the room. "So, what do you think of the boy? Asked Ren-Tin. "Though at first I was skeptical, I am now convinced." Answered Khi, "I will train him, for he is the one."
Weasel: And i'll leave you guys(& gals) with that! Stay tuned for more episodes of GENESIS!
Note: I wrote this in 7th grade, so I may rewrite it using my more mature writing style, but if you review (and please review) notify me as to wether or not i should redo it. Just take this for what it is, and dont obsess on any discretions with DBZ. Please excuse the short chapters.
Genesis
A Chapter Story by The Weasel
Interlude: Visions of Things to Come
At the sanctuary, Dende let out a muffled gasp and looked to the midnight sky in the direction of the burst of power. "What is it, master?" asked Mr. Po-Po, "Something has arrived just above the earth. Something evil. Weak, but evil." In the afterlife, Goku woke up with a start. That's weird! Saiyajins never wake up in the middle of the night, he thought, man, am I stil lworrying about everybody on earth? Then he noticed the 555,380 Ki flare- up in low earth orbit. Ohh, so that's what woke me up. Well, it's too weak to be Vegeta, Gohan, Goten, Piccolo or Trunks, it could be Yamcha, Tienshinhan, or.no, they can't hold their breaths that long. There's something odd about this signature.oh hell. If something bad happens, I'll know. And he went back to sleep. Meanwhile, Trunks was having a strange dream. He was racing on foot against the kid he'd beat up that day. The other kid was struggling to keep up. He eventually was out of sight. Then, Trunks noticed that the kid was gaining on him. Behind him was a bright light. He was flying! Soon he was next to Trunks. How can this be? Thought Trunks and he began to fly, too, but the kid had already passed him! Trunks flew as fast as he could, but couldn't catch up with him. He was already far ahead. How long is this race? He could now see the finish line, but no matter how far he went, it didn't get closer. He saw the kid (was his hair red?) waiting there for him. "SHIT!!!" He screamed. And flew as hard and fast as he could. He ran out of power almost immediately. He fell to the ground, exhausted. "YOU WIN!!" he screamed, "I GIVE UP!! YOU BASTARD, YOU WIN!!" tears streamed down his face. He looked up and saw the kid with his hand extended and the smile of one who had found a long lost friend. "Who are you?" asked Trunks.
Chapter 7: This Could Be the One
The machine was now off, and Edmund struggled at the bonds that held him down to the table. He pulled and pulled, but they held fast. He grew more and more frustrated, dangerously frustrated. "YEEEEAAAARRRGH!" He screamed, "GET ME OUT OF HERE!!!" The angrier he was, the more energy he could feel swelling within him. He screamed in pain as his brain collected more and more of it and his forehead burned, emulating a high fever. Something was telling him, let go, let go, like a whisper in his mind. With a bit of a push, all Edmund's frustration, all his pain, left him straight through the crystal in his forehead. It felt great, as if a huge burden was lifted from him. A giant flash of light burst out and swirled around the room, completely uncontrolled. It writhed and danced, twisted, inverted, and split, like fire but ten times hotter. After struggling for about five minutes that seemed like an hour, he managed to get it in a relatively straight path and aimed it straight up. The giant machine that hung above him exploded in half and fell right on top of him. Edmund went unconscious.
* * *
Two of the three Khalai watched eagerly as the spectacular light show unfolded. They marveled as he released the energy, and learned to control it. When it was all over they looked at each other. "Incredible!" Said Ren-Tin "Did you see how quickly he learned to control his ki blast?" "Yes! It was amazing!" Answered Si'djet, "And in all of my 470 years on this job
I have never seen an alien's vital signs stay so close to their normal ranges!" "Well, Khi, what do you think. Is he the one?" "Yes, what is your opinion of this boy?" Khi cowered in the corner of the subject observation alcove. "Khi, what are you doing?" Asked Ren-Tin. "Taking cover in case he destroys the room." "You shouldn't worry. These windows are proven to withstand up to a 500,000 ki blast!" "That WAS a 500,000 ki blast!" "Well then we were lucky." Said Si'djet. "Luck does not exist." Retorted Khi. "Well, you missed the whole episode." Said Ren-Tin. "Of course I didn't! I'm not a farseer for nothing!" Khi said sarcastically. "Ah, I forgot that you were 'Omniscient'." Replied Ren-Tin in the same manner. "POLYNISCIENT!" corrected Khi. "SARCASM!" explained Ren-Tin. "Our subject is bleeding." Commented Khi. "I'm on it." said Si'djet. "We know almost nothing about human physiology!" Complained Khi. "Well, I'm not a medical officer for nothing!" Si'djet left the room. "So, what do you think of the boy? Asked Ren-Tin. "Though at first I was skeptical, I am now convinced." Answered Khi, "I will train him, for he is the one."
Weasel: And i'll leave you guys(& gals) with that! Stay tuned for more episodes of GENESIS!