No, this isn't another chapter.. although I did think about writing one. Maybe a quick summary where Shigure has a conversation with Hatori afterwards. However, I'm pretty much making myself resist writing anymore. I actually wrote this in order to try out an anti-climax, but I'm glad that people liked it. Although, I see that there were some confusing aspects, so I figured that I'll discuss them a little bit here. I'll just go through the reviews, and if there are other questions after this then I'll add to this page.



Ohimesama-

Apparently, we share a favorite quote. ^_^


drizzle-

It was rather confusing, wasn't it? What I was going for with Shigure's character is kind of a double personality. As if there's more to him than what he shows most people. I made him a little more open around Hatori because I noticed that he acts more serious (in the anime) when they're alone together.


ColbyWolf-

I made the ending abrupt for the anti-climacic effect. You know how in a story, when some character is going through all these fantastic things and you're just dying to find out what's happening next.. and then they wake up? That's sort of the effect I was trying to go for, but I agree.. it could have used more explaination.


Vadrozsa-

She's a fragment of Shigure's overactive imagination. ^_^ Us writers are a bit crazy sometimes.


Thank you everyone for the feedback! I appreciate it. Also, if it's just a quick question you can try me on AIM: TiggersPB