Hey kiddes. Hope ya'll have a great weekend. Thank you for all the votes. Made me feel good.
If I seem smooth and passive(or maybe you don't know me well enough yet to be scared) It's the
cd I am listening to Cools me down. I am sorry for any confusion. And
all my reviewers get special treatment(in a way) If you Review is signed, I'll read and
Recommend. Believe it or not, I have connections. Thanks for the E-mail I got, telling me who
should be the 3.
Goldengoddess actually you guessed 2. My 3d is someone who popped up in a book with a small
part. I loved her right away. Now this "3" person will have a ~ behind her name. So you can tell
who's the queen I'll put a ^ behind her name. These ~&^ only account for the first time there
mentioned. So actually WATCH. As you might be able tell my cd went off. Were going to
backtrack just a little. kay?~~~~~~~~ means new person. Thought in * Hermy,...... rock on.
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Thayet, Queen of tortal couldn't help that tear that rolled down her face as she heard that
heart-racking cough. *These people are going to lose her* she thought sadly as she looked at the
blood covered body, so much like her Alanna. She watched as the Queen of wind covered her
eyes with her hands while her slim shoulders shook. Thayet's ears took in 3 blended screams of
horror seeming to come from everywhere.
Without thinking she reached out to take her children's hands. One closed around Roalds
and the other...... Empty space. Her eyes widening she watched as her second child paced
confidently to wards the queen of wind *No. Alesa I believe her name is* she corrected herself.
~Princess Kalsin~ Hugged Alyssa tight, while the girl sobbed. *My daughters one of them.*
Thayet's head screamed.
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King Jonathon head was screaming those exact words, and his eyes never left his first
daughter. In fact it took a bump in the arm to get him to his senses. A bump that came from
someone stumbling out in to the isle. And With rapid speed the person who bumped Jon, ran
towards the front of the hall.
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Zahir (A/N sorry! But remember him form POTS he thought woman should wear veils and stay
home? If not go and search your copy. Sorry again) watched in amusement as Lady Kelderly raced towards the platform *bet she thinks she can save the wretch* he thought in amusement *Woman are too sensitive. Hope The unveiled "queen of the sun" murders the wrench* he thought angerly. He almost called a order out, but caught himself. Veiled or not these woman had power, a couple seconds later he was glad he'd contained himself. *So the 'Lady Knight' is one of the 3 missing. She must be a guardian, no queen would tromp around males like she. Maybe Princess Kalsin is the queen. She'd be perfect.*
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Numair had listened in pride as the story had went on. He'd read it in a book, and had been sure it was true, Even though his Cartak colleagues had laughed and scowled ant the mage, he'd never stopped believing. So caught up in self pride he didn't realize Daine wasn't beside him anymore until he saw her slim, silver robed figure rush down the aisle. What's my sweetling doing? He wondered.
When Daine* stopped in front of Artemis, and took the crystal handed to her by Adam he suddenly knew, why Daine had always seemed like a fairytale princess to him...... she was a fairytale princess
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Pressing the crystal to her chest Daine started murmuring in an dead language
asamao caralira mashecavoo rumaneka
Her whisperings turned into screams,
Alanreaka reanonlataka
Kel yelled at her, "STOP!!!!!!!!! You'll kill yourself! You can't pull all your power into yourself at once! Daine, your body isn't ready!" The crystal erupted.
Daine's body lay on the floor, shattered. No breath rose her chest. A cloud of sparkling, Copper magic hovered above her, as if waiting...... suddenly Daine's body sat up. It was a smooth motion, for no soul possessed that body any more. The magic hung there, almost uncertain.
Her dull, blue gray eyes stared at the magic as she began a spell
Live without, wander within
Magic and human together or not
Stars above me turn your attention down
Magic and human together or not
Entwine the two that seek each other
Magic and human together or not
And bring them together under your light
Magic and human together or not
Threw the window everyone watched as the noon sky was ripped open and stars sparkled threw. The magic lept into Daine's body, circling and covering her. Pouring into her very essence. When Daine had absorbed all her magic the wind blew away the leftover traces, bonding her with nature. Daine rose up, dressed in a blue satin dress embroidered with silver stars.
Opening her hand copper fire boomed and covered Artemis's blood stained body. seeping into the wounds. In seconds the wound healed, And Artemis was lifted up in Jesse's arms where he proceeded to walk her out of the Hall. Everyone froze and watched his retreating back.
"Uh, guys, I don't feel to good" Daine whispered. Adam made it behind her as she fainted. Lifting Daine's limp body in his arms he strode of after Jesse. Quietly the rest of the 7 and 2 guardians followed him out leaving the room to collapse into chao's.
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hey, I AM DONE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!! whoop de do
anyhow THANK YOU for the reviews, I know the ending sounded a little fast but I know what it's like to wait for updates. I have the all famous writers block *all start hating me* ya ya ya I know I know but get ideas to me somehow and it might help...... was reading my Bio and realized that it tells nothing about me, gotta fix that
Plez read A Visions Consequences, me and Hermy r the only ones who reviewed.
And if your reading this right now and haven't reviewed this fic yet DO IT and then read AVC. Make sure you review both 'cause if you cause if you don't know if there good or not.
I am addicted to Reviews so here's the deal for me REVIEWS=Love
for you Review=updates hey hey what can I say? I AM evil... rock on.
If I seem smooth and passive(or maybe you don't know me well enough yet to be scared) It's the
cd I am listening to Cools me down. I am sorry for any confusion. And
all my reviewers get special treatment(in a way) If you Review is signed, I'll read and
Recommend. Believe it or not, I have connections. Thanks for the E-mail I got, telling me who
should be the 3.
Goldengoddess actually you guessed 2. My 3d is someone who popped up in a book with a small
part. I loved her right away. Now this "3" person will have a ~ behind her name. So you can tell
who's the queen I'll put a ^ behind her name. These ~&^ only account for the first time there
mentioned. So actually WATCH. As you might be able tell my cd went off. Were going to
backtrack just a little. kay?~~~~~~~~ means new person. Thought in * Hermy,...... rock on.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Thayet, Queen of tortal couldn't help that tear that rolled down her face as she heard that
heart-racking cough. *These people are going to lose her* she thought sadly as she looked at the
blood covered body, so much like her Alanna. She watched as the Queen of wind covered her
eyes with her hands while her slim shoulders shook. Thayet's ears took in 3 blended screams of
horror seeming to come from everywhere.
Without thinking she reached out to take her children's hands. One closed around Roalds
and the other...... Empty space. Her eyes widening she watched as her second child paced
confidently to wards the queen of wind *No. Alesa I believe her name is* she corrected herself.
~Princess Kalsin~ Hugged Alyssa tight, while the girl sobbed. *My daughters one of them.*
Thayet's head screamed.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
King Jonathon head was screaming those exact words, and his eyes never left his first
daughter. In fact it took a bump in the arm to get him to his senses. A bump that came from
someone stumbling out in to the isle. And With rapid speed the person who bumped Jon, ran
towards the front of the hall.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Zahir (A/N sorry! But remember him form POTS he thought woman should wear veils and stay
home? If not go and search your copy. Sorry again) watched in amusement as Lady Kelderly raced towards the platform *bet she thinks she can save the wretch* he thought in amusement *Woman are too sensitive. Hope The unveiled "queen of the sun" murders the wrench* he thought angerly. He almost called a order out, but caught himself. Veiled or not these woman had power, a couple seconds later he was glad he'd contained himself. *So the 'Lady Knight' is one of the 3 missing. She must be a guardian, no queen would tromp around males like she. Maybe Princess Kalsin is the queen. She'd be perfect.*
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Numair had listened in pride as the story had went on. He'd read it in a book, and had been sure it was true, Even though his Cartak colleagues had laughed and scowled ant the mage, he'd never stopped believing. So caught up in self pride he didn't realize Daine wasn't beside him anymore until he saw her slim, silver robed figure rush down the aisle. What's my sweetling doing? He wondered.
When Daine* stopped in front of Artemis, and took the crystal handed to her by Adam he suddenly knew, why Daine had always seemed like a fairytale princess to him...... she was a fairytale princess
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Pressing the crystal to her chest Daine started murmuring in an dead language
asamao caralira mashecavoo rumaneka
Her whisperings turned into screams,
Alanreaka reanonlataka
Kel yelled at her, "STOP!!!!!!!!! You'll kill yourself! You can't pull all your power into yourself at once! Daine, your body isn't ready!" The crystal erupted.
Daine's body lay on the floor, shattered. No breath rose her chest. A cloud of sparkling, Copper magic hovered above her, as if waiting...... suddenly Daine's body sat up. It was a smooth motion, for no soul possessed that body any more. The magic hung there, almost uncertain.
Her dull, blue gray eyes stared at the magic as she began a spell
Live without, wander within
Magic and human together or not
Stars above me turn your attention down
Magic and human together or not
Entwine the two that seek each other
Magic and human together or not
And bring them together under your light
Magic and human together or not
Threw the window everyone watched as the noon sky was ripped open and stars sparkled threw. The magic lept into Daine's body, circling and covering her. Pouring into her very essence. When Daine had absorbed all her magic the wind blew away the leftover traces, bonding her with nature. Daine rose up, dressed in a blue satin dress embroidered with silver stars.
Opening her hand copper fire boomed and covered Artemis's blood stained body. seeping into the wounds. In seconds the wound healed, And Artemis was lifted up in Jesse's arms where he proceeded to walk her out of the Hall. Everyone froze and watched his retreating back.
"Uh, guys, I don't feel to good" Daine whispered. Adam made it behind her as she fainted. Lifting Daine's limp body in his arms he strode of after Jesse. Quietly the rest of the 7 and 2 guardians followed him out leaving the room to collapse into chao's.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
******************************************************************************
Hey, I AM DONE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!! whoop de do
anyhow THANK YOU for the reviews, I know the ending sounded a little fast but I know what it's like to wait for updates. I have the all famous writers block *all start hating me* ya ya ya I know I know but get ideas to me somehow and it might help...... was reading my Bio and realized that it tells nothing about me, gotta fix that
Plez read A Visions Consequences, me and Hermy r the only ones who reviewed.
And if your reading this right now and haven't reviewed this fic yet DO IT and then read AVC. Make sure you review both 'cause if you cause if you don't know if there good or not.
I am addicted to Reviews so here's the deal for me REVIEWS=Love
for you Review=updates hey hey what can I say? I AM evil... rock on.