My finalé. I'm trying to add more actions to it and I hope it will appease
you. ^_^ This is sixth and last chapter of 'Who Is She' done by me
(RieLeonhart a.ka K|ttyhawk)
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"Alex! Look out!" Selphie yelled and Alex spun just in time to see the darkness engulf her face. Then she felt a tug on her arm and she was brought to the end of the room.
Squall ran to get his Gunblade in his room while Zell tried to punch the 'thing' to death. But every time his fist was thrown towards the shadow, it would only go through, making a hole that patched itself up seconds later.
It only stood tall, almost 7 foot tall without the slightest feeling of pain.
Selphie summoned Shiva and the whole room turned to ice and the icicles broke into pieces. But the dark figure still stayed there, not showing the meaning of agony.
Squall came running out of his room, a gunblade in his hand. He charged forward and swung his blade with all his might, only to see Alex shielding it. Her hands were wide apart.
"ALEX!" Zell yelled, trying to pull her arm to safety. But it was too late.
Squall's gunblade scarred Alex's face across her forehead. It was almost identical to the one that Seifer had given to him when the sorceress, Edea, possessed him.
"Oh, my god..." Squall murmured and immediately put down his blade. He tried to run to her but she put out her hand to stop him.
The scar bled till it washed her cheeks. But they didn't see any tears in her eyes. They only saw a grateful smile that crept across her lips.
"Thank you, Squall." She thanked, letting her hands drop to her hips. " Now I get to remember you with this scar..." she turned her head to the dark shadow then to the rest of the party. " This is the one who beat me up last night." She announced. " He came for me after you left yesterday, Squall. He warned me to go back to Memoria before it was too late... but I refused to go back because I never got to spend time with you. So he gave me this warning..." she put her hands on the scars on her shoulders and rubbed it to soothe the pain.
"He is the gatekeeper to Memoria. His name is Aldagio. He was created by a corrupted soul and a death-driven mind. So did the rest of his 'army' in Memoria. Up there, you can say its Hell. Believe me, you will never believe what people think about these days... "
The shadow continued to engulf parts of her body. The party tried to move but the motion in her eyes asked them to stay away, as it was in her own will. " I'm sorry that I couldn't tell you earlier..." she apologized. " I'm so sorry I didn't tell you this sooner. I'm sorry for troubling you in any way." She turned her eyes from the party to Squall. "And I'm sorry to play with your heart."
Squall wanted to cry because she was going back. But he stood tall, trying not to shed a tear.
"And before I go... please think about each other often. I don't want to be the only human there." She said, her voice sounded so far away.
By now the shadow had engulfed her body, only her head was untouched.
" Goodbye..."
With that, the shadow covered her completely and it slowly seeped into the portal until there was no more darkness at that corner of the room. The portal slowly disappeared, leaving no traces it ever appeared there or not.
Squall dug his face in his hands while Rinoa hugged him, trying to let the sad feeling go away. Selphie cried because she was the closest to Alex apart from Squall. She felt like a part of her was missing. Irvine comforted her, giving her support, whispering encouraging words in her ear (Author: Man, he never gives up!) While this, Zell was banging his fist at the wall in agony. Tears streaked down his face.
"Why!" he yelled as he gave a final kick at the wall. He dropped himself next to a sobbing Selphie and dug his face in his hands. Silence fell upon the room for many moments, everyone drowned in grief. A friend they have just met have gone away...
Everyone felt like a part of them was missing. Everyone felt so hollow. Not knowing if Alex will be happy in Memoria. Not knowing weather she'll ever come back.
Not knowing that somewhere in Memoria, a duplicate of Squall is wandering in the high towers of Memoria, searching endlessly for Alex...
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This is the last chapter, sadly. So I want to take this opportunity to thank everyone who reviewed my story. Also, I noticed that I screwed the story a little bit and I am so sorry of any inconveniences that would/should occur during the reading of this story. And finally, I hope everyone out there liked my story. I know I made some mistakes but everyone must know that I'm only human and I cannot keep mistakes from happening. However, I hope fewer mistakes will show up in this final chapter. (Hey, come on lar ppl! It's my first fanfic!!) So, this IS a happy ending! Hmm.. Should I do a sequel? Tell me what you think!
Arigato gozaimasu, minna. ^_^ Thank you, everyone. =)
-Rie a.k.a K|ttyhawk-
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~*oOo*~
"Alex! Look out!" Selphie yelled and Alex spun just in time to see the darkness engulf her face. Then she felt a tug on her arm and she was brought to the end of the room.
Squall ran to get his Gunblade in his room while Zell tried to punch the 'thing' to death. But every time his fist was thrown towards the shadow, it would only go through, making a hole that patched itself up seconds later.
It only stood tall, almost 7 foot tall without the slightest feeling of pain.
Selphie summoned Shiva and the whole room turned to ice and the icicles broke into pieces. But the dark figure still stayed there, not showing the meaning of agony.
Squall came running out of his room, a gunblade in his hand. He charged forward and swung his blade with all his might, only to see Alex shielding it. Her hands were wide apart.
"ALEX!" Zell yelled, trying to pull her arm to safety. But it was too late.
Squall's gunblade scarred Alex's face across her forehead. It was almost identical to the one that Seifer had given to him when the sorceress, Edea, possessed him.
"Oh, my god..." Squall murmured and immediately put down his blade. He tried to run to her but she put out her hand to stop him.
The scar bled till it washed her cheeks. But they didn't see any tears in her eyes. They only saw a grateful smile that crept across her lips.
"Thank you, Squall." She thanked, letting her hands drop to her hips. " Now I get to remember you with this scar..." she turned her head to the dark shadow then to the rest of the party. " This is the one who beat me up last night." She announced. " He came for me after you left yesterday, Squall. He warned me to go back to Memoria before it was too late... but I refused to go back because I never got to spend time with you. So he gave me this warning..." she put her hands on the scars on her shoulders and rubbed it to soothe the pain.
"He is the gatekeeper to Memoria. His name is Aldagio. He was created by a corrupted soul and a death-driven mind. So did the rest of his 'army' in Memoria. Up there, you can say its Hell. Believe me, you will never believe what people think about these days... "
The shadow continued to engulf parts of her body. The party tried to move but the motion in her eyes asked them to stay away, as it was in her own will. " I'm sorry that I couldn't tell you earlier..." she apologized. " I'm so sorry I didn't tell you this sooner. I'm sorry for troubling you in any way." She turned her eyes from the party to Squall. "And I'm sorry to play with your heart."
Squall wanted to cry because she was going back. But he stood tall, trying not to shed a tear.
"And before I go... please think about each other often. I don't want to be the only human there." She said, her voice sounded so far away.
By now the shadow had engulfed her body, only her head was untouched.
" Goodbye..."
With that, the shadow covered her completely and it slowly seeped into the portal until there was no more darkness at that corner of the room. The portal slowly disappeared, leaving no traces it ever appeared there or not.
Squall dug his face in his hands while Rinoa hugged him, trying to let the sad feeling go away. Selphie cried because she was the closest to Alex apart from Squall. She felt like a part of her was missing. Irvine comforted her, giving her support, whispering encouraging words in her ear (Author: Man, he never gives up!) While this, Zell was banging his fist at the wall in agony. Tears streaked down his face.
"Why!" he yelled as he gave a final kick at the wall. He dropped himself next to a sobbing Selphie and dug his face in his hands. Silence fell upon the room for many moments, everyone drowned in grief. A friend they have just met have gone away...
Everyone felt like a part of them was missing. Everyone felt so hollow. Not knowing if Alex will be happy in Memoria. Not knowing weather she'll ever come back.
Not knowing that somewhere in Memoria, a duplicate of Squall is wandering in the high towers of Memoria, searching endlessly for Alex...
~*oOo*~
This is the last chapter, sadly. So I want to take this opportunity to thank everyone who reviewed my story. Also, I noticed that I screwed the story a little bit and I am so sorry of any inconveniences that would/should occur during the reading of this story. And finally, I hope everyone out there liked my story. I know I made some mistakes but everyone must know that I'm only human and I cannot keep mistakes from happening. However, I hope fewer mistakes will show up in this final chapter. (Hey, come on lar ppl! It's my first fanfic!!) So, this IS a happy ending! Hmm.. Should I do a sequel? Tell me what you think!
Arigato gozaimasu, minna. ^_^ Thank you, everyone. =)
-Rie a.k.a K|ttyhawk-
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