Disclaimer: CCS is not mine.
WARNING: OOC. Mushy!!!
I want to thank to the Reviewers (is that a real word?): Chibisana12, toril moon, m@ve!, Mistocean, Ranka, Sailor Star Sakura and specially to Tomoyo-chan
(Who review all the chapters, I was touched by that)
I want you to forgive me about all chapters spelling mistakes (including this one).
----- Chapter VIII: I Can Do It -----
Tomoyo's POV =========
so after cry my eyes out and practically wash Sakura's shirt (she said it was ok) I admitted I like Eriol more than just a bit, I truly care about him maybe even love (but it's too soon for this stuff). But what could I do? Yes he also like me but he is determinate to not let this feeling grow maybe I should be direct to him and tell all the truth...maybe not.
Eriol's POV ===========
And what I do now? she is heart broken, I'm heart broken, I did a big mistake asking for another potion and I still love her...hey wait a moment, she gave me another potion and I still love her...something is wrong in this picture
Tomoyo's POV =========
I was sitting all by my self during the lunch when a hand, a male hand beat on the table. I recognized Eriol's hand and felt lonelier "Something is wrong!" he said, I just stare to my own food "Something is wrong!" he repeated and I looked up to him. With all my feelings mixed (bravure, anger, love) but he didn't change his expression, no expressing better saying.
Eriol's POV ===========
got all my courage together and went to talk with Tomoyo, I really didn't knew what to say until I said, first she didn't answer I said again, she looked up to me her face was scary but I kept mine "You have nothing wrong, never!" she said my mouth dropped to the floor "You have never ate the first potion, that's why the potion I gave you don't work it was fake, just to make you pleased!" she grabbed her food and walked away, I sat there and look her leaving... So I did never eat the love potion and what I feel for her is the real thing, and she knows it. Now the questions are does she feel the same? Will she forgive me?
Tomoyo's POV =========
After I told him all the truth I grabbed my things and went to the back of the school sitting on the first step of the stairs, I couldn't eat anymore so I was just looking for the florest when someone came and sat by my side. I turned to see who it was. Again Eriol. I can't describe his face - a mix of thousand of emotions - I was not understanding when he leaned and kissed me. My first kiss. I was happy and mad at the same time, after all he did hurt me too much and I didn't want that feeling again. When he started to talk.
No one's POV ===========
-I like you very, very much, Tomoyo.
-You love me?
-I like you very much.
-So guess I'm going.
-Wait and if I had told I love you?
-We'll never know, you just like me a lot.
- ...
- Bye, see you!
-Tomoyo, come here! I love you.
(a/n: ok this part was ooc even for this fic)
Eriol's POV ===========
She turned to me "Repeat that" I said again I loved her and this time I also said I would never regret that. she looked so happy she came back running and throwed herself in my arms, we almost rolled down the stairs "I like you a lot!" she said smiling I couldn't believe I told her I loved her, my pride went to a alternative universe and she just answer 'I like you a lot' so I demanded her to say the right words and she kept saying "I like you a lot" until she finally, laughing from my tickles said what I wanted to hear "I love you, Eriol"
----- FIM -----
Kiwi's (your author) POV
I think that this no one pov I had written after the first chapter, tha's a long time! This final pov was the mushiest thing I ever wrote. And that was a brutal change.
Did you love? did you hate?
Question: Do you want a next after-final chapter (I forgot what we name those)?
It was Extreme Magic.
+_+| ^_^ | *_* | -_- | IT'S OVER | -.- | *.* | ^.^ | +.+
WARNING: OOC. Mushy!!!
I want to thank to the Reviewers (is that a real word?): Chibisana12, toril moon, m@ve!, Mistocean, Ranka, Sailor Star Sakura and specially to Tomoyo-chan
(Who review all the chapters, I was touched by that)
I want you to forgive me about all chapters spelling mistakes (including this one).
----- Chapter VIII: I Can Do It -----
Tomoyo's POV =========
so after cry my eyes out and practically wash Sakura's shirt (she said it was ok) I admitted I like Eriol more than just a bit, I truly care about him maybe even love (but it's too soon for this stuff). But what could I do? Yes he also like me but he is determinate to not let this feeling grow maybe I should be direct to him and tell all the truth...maybe not.
Eriol's POV ===========
And what I do now? she is heart broken, I'm heart broken, I did a big mistake asking for another potion and I still love her...hey wait a moment, she gave me another potion and I still love her...something is wrong in this picture
Tomoyo's POV =========
I was sitting all by my self during the lunch when a hand, a male hand beat on the table. I recognized Eriol's hand and felt lonelier "Something is wrong!" he said, I just stare to my own food "Something is wrong!" he repeated and I looked up to him. With all my feelings mixed (bravure, anger, love) but he didn't change his expression, no expressing better saying.
Eriol's POV ===========
got all my courage together and went to talk with Tomoyo, I really didn't knew what to say until I said, first she didn't answer I said again, she looked up to me her face was scary but I kept mine "You have nothing wrong, never!" she said my mouth dropped to the floor "You have never ate the first potion, that's why the potion I gave you don't work it was fake, just to make you pleased!" she grabbed her food and walked away, I sat there and look her leaving... So I did never eat the love potion and what I feel for her is the real thing, and she knows it. Now the questions are does she feel the same? Will she forgive me?
Tomoyo's POV =========
After I told him all the truth I grabbed my things and went to the back of the school sitting on the first step of the stairs, I couldn't eat anymore so I was just looking for the florest when someone came and sat by my side. I turned to see who it was. Again Eriol. I can't describe his face - a mix of thousand of emotions - I was not understanding when he leaned and kissed me. My first kiss. I was happy and mad at the same time, after all he did hurt me too much and I didn't want that feeling again. When he started to talk.
No one's POV ===========
-I like you very, very much, Tomoyo.
-You love me?
-I like you very much.
-So guess I'm going.
-Wait and if I had told I love you?
-We'll never know, you just like me a lot.
- ...
- Bye, see you!
-Tomoyo, come here! I love you.
(a/n: ok this part was ooc even for this fic)
Eriol's POV ===========
She turned to me "Repeat that" I said again I loved her and this time I also said I would never regret that. she looked so happy she came back running and throwed herself in my arms, we almost rolled down the stairs "I like you a lot!" she said smiling I couldn't believe I told her I loved her, my pride went to a alternative universe and she just answer 'I like you a lot' so I demanded her to say the right words and she kept saying "I like you a lot" until she finally, laughing from my tickles said what I wanted to hear "I love you, Eriol"
----- FIM -----
Kiwi's (your author) POV
I think that this no one pov I had written after the first chapter, tha's a long time! This final pov was the mushiest thing I ever wrote. And that was a brutal change.
Did you love? did you hate?
Question: Do you want a next after-final chapter (I forgot what we name those)?
It was Extreme Magic.
+_+| ^_^ | *_* | -_- | IT'S OVER | -.- | *.* | ^.^ | +.+