Hi again! I've decided to be nice and give you another chapter. Thank you
Joselyn-Greenleaf for reviewing. Here is the next chapter just for you.
Frodo awoke in the middle of the road, with a thing threatening to bear down on him (A/N it's a car).
He braced himself for the impact, but instead felt hands gently but firmly carrying him away. He opened his eyes and saw Legolas.
"Legolas my friend! I am glad to see you! Thank you for saving me from that monster, though I know not what it was." He cried.
"Nor I," said Legolas thoughtfully, putting Frodo down, "yet it seemed to have 4 sorts of legs. Strange it was. I have not seen the likes of it until now. But first, we need to find the rest of the company. Let us look for them."
About 10 minutes later, they came to a large crowd that were jeering around something. Pushing his way through the mass of bodies, he came to the middle and saw Merry and Pippin. They had their backs to one another and were looking warily around. Pippin spotted Frodo first.
"Frodo! Help! We're trapped!" he whispered.
"Just move towards them with your swords held high. They should leave you alone with those in your hand." Frodo replied. Pippin told Merry and they did as Frodo said. Frodo led them back to where Legolas hid and there was a welcome reunion.
"Legolas, where are we?" Merry asked, but wasn't answered, for at that minute a girl walked past. Pippin sneezed and the girl stopped. She came to the place where the hobbits and elf were hiding. She peered into the gloom (they were in a alleyway) and saw a face. They both screamed at the same time and the girl backed away.
She pulled a torch from her bag and shone it into the alley. This time she gasped, because she saw 3 small figures, and 1 tall one.
"Why don't you guys come out so I can have a look at you." The girl said and the 4 of them shuffled out.
"Wow." The girl shook herself then said "My name is Melissa Redwood."
Okay. That's my second chapter. What do you think? My friend read it and he said it was good so far. Please review!
Frodo awoke in the middle of the road, with a thing threatening to bear down on him (A/N it's a car).
He braced himself for the impact, but instead felt hands gently but firmly carrying him away. He opened his eyes and saw Legolas.
"Legolas my friend! I am glad to see you! Thank you for saving me from that monster, though I know not what it was." He cried.
"Nor I," said Legolas thoughtfully, putting Frodo down, "yet it seemed to have 4 sorts of legs. Strange it was. I have not seen the likes of it until now. But first, we need to find the rest of the company. Let us look for them."
About 10 minutes later, they came to a large crowd that were jeering around something. Pushing his way through the mass of bodies, he came to the middle and saw Merry and Pippin. They had their backs to one another and were looking warily around. Pippin spotted Frodo first.
"Frodo! Help! We're trapped!" he whispered.
"Just move towards them with your swords held high. They should leave you alone with those in your hand." Frodo replied. Pippin told Merry and they did as Frodo said. Frodo led them back to where Legolas hid and there was a welcome reunion.
"Legolas, where are we?" Merry asked, but wasn't answered, for at that minute a girl walked past. Pippin sneezed and the girl stopped. She came to the place where the hobbits and elf were hiding. She peered into the gloom (they were in a alleyway) and saw a face. They both screamed at the same time and the girl backed away.
She pulled a torch from her bag and shone it into the alley. This time she gasped, because she saw 3 small figures, and 1 tall one.
"Why don't you guys come out so I can have a look at you." The girl said and the 4 of them shuffled out.
"Wow." The girl shook herself then said "My name is Melissa Redwood."
Okay. That's my second chapter. What do you think? My friend read it and he said it was good so far. Please review!