Let's cry together:
I don't like this fic anymore. Tell me childish, but I find it, after a serious reading, very plot less and without a sense or serious writing at all. It seems, and I did, that it was written without thinking... Improvising. I do that in most of my stories, but I do have a kind of twisted idea of what do with them. And I have an ending for this one... Is just that... It's awful.
At first, I did have a nice, well done plot. And I have to admit that the first and the second chapters are my favorite. But then, with the brother stuff that popped in my head... I really, really don't like it. More like hate it.
The potion plot was used, as I found out not too long ago, tons of times already. The idea of personality change has suffered of sexual harassment over and over again and my ending is not that original either. And that's my telling... Originality. Really, I can't bare the fact of use an abused plot with little, small and almost invisible changes. As an example we have... Oh yeah: Digidestined not seeing each other for so long and now that they come back it's all like 'oh! Look how much she/he changed! Now that I see she/he again I remember how much I love her'. Tell me that wasn't used over one thousand times and I'll kick you (Authors which did this... Don't take me wrong, we all love that kind of stuff).
Now that I'll be free of 'In Need' I'll be able to develop my other fics and even add a funny/lusty one (If you're wondering, yes. I do have a pervert mind. Not like I'll go and write a lemon since I don't like very explicit description of sex... It goes from being something pleasant to something disgusting. But lime I may add to it) in a medievil enviroment since... Everyone has to make a medievil one.
Anyway, I hope you get my point for not continuing this... Besides...Is anyone still reading this fic?
I'm gonna miss my first story, but it's all for the better, isn't it?
nUMb
Ps: Well, since this is not going to be updated, don't you think you could go and take a look at my others fic? They're not that bad you know...
I don't like this fic anymore. Tell me childish, but I find it, after a serious reading, very plot less and without a sense or serious writing at all. It seems, and I did, that it was written without thinking... Improvising. I do that in most of my stories, but I do have a kind of twisted idea of what do with them. And I have an ending for this one... Is just that... It's awful.
At first, I did have a nice, well done plot. And I have to admit that the first and the second chapters are my favorite. But then, with the brother stuff that popped in my head... I really, really don't like it. More like hate it.
The potion plot was used, as I found out not too long ago, tons of times already. The idea of personality change has suffered of sexual harassment over and over again and my ending is not that original either. And that's my telling... Originality. Really, I can't bare the fact of use an abused plot with little, small and almost invisible changes. As an example we have... Oh yeah: Digidestined not seeing each other for so long and now that they come back it's all like 'oh! Look how much she/he changed! Now that I see she/he again I remember how much I love her'. Tell me that wasn't used over one thousand times and I'll kick you (Authors which did this... Don't take me wrong, we all love that kind of stuff).
Now that I'll be free of 'In Need' I'll be able to develop my other fics and even add a funny/lusty one (If you're wondering, yes. I do have a pervert mind. Not like I'll go and write a lemon since I don't like very explicit description of sex... It goes from being something pleasant to something disgusting. But lime I may add to it) in a medievil enviroment since... Everyone has to make a medievil one.
Anyway, I hope you get my point for not continuing this... Besides...Is anyone still reading this fic?
I'm gonna miss my first story, but it's all for the better, isn't it?
nUMb
Ps: Well, since this is not going to be updated, don't you think you could go and take a look at my others fic? They're not that bad you know...