Suboshi talks to Tamahome as everything happens that made them enemies. High rating because of his hate-filled thoughts. He hardens toward Tamahome as it progresses.
I don't own him. I don't own Tamahome. I own my manga. And my terrible writing.
Once Upon a Long Time Ago
Run...run...
I have so far to run...
How hard can this be? I just want
To do something to show that I
Cannot take his death lying down.
I never
Could take anything
Lying down.
I'm gonna fight back, even if
It kills me
I'm gonna teach you to hurt me.
That kid you killed without thinking about it
Was my brother
Hey Tamahome
I don't take things
Lying down
I'm gonna hurt you for that
I'm gonna make it so you never forget
I'm gonna hurt your heart
The way mine aches at night.
There is no way to forgive you and I
Don't want to
You'll never get away from me. I'll hunt you forever
You don't deserve a painless death
His wasn't
Look what you've done to me. I wasn't like this before.
But now
Now I'm living off my hate. Tamahome
You've got it coming.
Tamahome. Don't rest easy. I'll never leave you,
I'll always be there
When you turn around. I'll be there. I'll be there.
You can't get away. You'll never
Get away.
Aniki, aniki, can you forgive me? Here I am, killing five people who
Never did me harm.
But their brother
Is a different story. He deserves to have them torn from
Him the way you
Were torn from me.
Once upon a long time ago. I was a nice person. I never thought about hurting
Anybody. I was like
You, aniki. You. Look what everything is
Doing to me.
Tamahome, stand ready. They are dead, you are next. Prepare
Yourself. Even if I lose, I'll still haunt you. But
I'll never, ever forgive you. Never, ever leave you
Be ready.
Tamahome, look now. That kid you saw once, blood-spattered, holding his brother's flute
Screaming at you with hate because of
What you'd done to him is
Back.
Now I hate you more.
Look at that girl. Her eyes are streaming tears. She's miserable, Tamahome. And you
Are responsible. Now I've got more reasons for you to die
Can you see what you've done to the girl I love? Tamahome.
You will die.
Look, I'm still following you. I'm still behind you. I'm still going to get you.
Now look. I followed you even when you escaped the book.
I'm still here.
Crowded street, people yelling, I don't care.
I'm going to have my revenge.
Follow him, ryuuseisui; follow him until his body is filled with holes.
Wait.
What are you doing?
But...you can't
No.
Tamahome.
You've killed me. I can't breathe.
Tamahome.
Look, now you've killed my brother, torn my love's heart, and now I'm dying because of you.
Damn you Tamahome.
You've killed me. I can't come back
I'm dying.
I'm dying.
Where is anything? I'm not able to see. I'm not able to hear.
I'm only aware of myself.
Blood, everywhere. Like the day I killed his family.
But now it's my own.
Yui-sama
Aniki.
Once upon a long time ago. This would never have happened.
Owari ~ End
**shoots herself** Whoa. When did I start writing like that? **KoK bashes Korin over the head with a large blunt instrument** Why did you bother to do that when I was already dead from the shotgun?
KoK: You deserved it. You need to get a life. And quit writing stuff like this!!
Korin: So, my own writing partner hates this piece. Review and tell me what you think.
I don't own him. I don't own Tamahome. I own my manga. And my terrible writing.
Once Upon a Long Time Ago
Run...run...
I have so far to run...
How hard can this be? I just want
To do something to show that I
Cannot take his death lying down.
I never
Could take anything
Lying down.
I'm gonna fight back, even if
It kills me
I'm gonna teach you to hurt me.
That kid you killed without thinking about it
Was my brother
Hey Tamahome
I don't take things
Lying down
I'm gonna hurt you for that
I'm gonna make it so you never forget
I'm gonna hurt your heart
The way mine aches at night.
There is no way to forgive you and I
Don't want to
You'll never get away from me. I'll hunt you forever
You don't deserve a painless death
His wasn't
Look what you've done to me. I wasn't like this before.
But now
Now I'm living off my hate. Tamahome
You've got it coming.
Tamahome. Don't rest easy. I'll never leave you,
I'll always be there
When you turn around. I'll be there. I'll be there.
You can't get away. You'll never
Get away.
Aniki, aniki, can you forgive me? Here I am, killing five people who
Never did me harm.
But their brother
Is a different story. He deserves to have them torn from
Him the way you
Were torn from me.
Once upon a long time ago. I was a nice person. I never thought about hurting
Anybody. I was like
You, aniki. You. Look what everything is
Doing to me.
Tamahome, stand ready. They are dead, you are next. Prepare
Yourself. Even if I lose, I'll still haunt you. But
I'll never, ever forgive you. Never, ever leave you
Be ready.
Tamahome, look now. That kid you saw once, blood-spattered, holding his brother's flute
Screaming at you with hate because of
What you'd done to him is
Back.
Now I hate you more.
Look at that girl. Her eyes are streaming tears. She's miserable, Tamahome. And you
Are responsible. Now I've got more reasons for you to die
Can you see what you've done to the girl I love? Tamahome.
You will die.
Look, I'm still following you. I'm still behind you. I'm still going to get you.
Now look. I followed you even when you escaped the book.
I'm still here.
Crowded street, people yelling, I don't care.
I'm going to have my revenge.
Follow him, ryuuseisui; follow him until his body is filled with holes.
Wait.
What are you doing?
But...you can't
No.
Tamahome.
You've killed me. I can't breathe.
Tamahome.
Look, now you've killed my brother, torn my love's heart, and now I'm dying because of you.
Damn you Tamahome.
You've killed me. I can't come back
I'm dying.
I'm dying.
Where is anything? I'm not able to see. I'm not able to hear.
I'm only aware of myself.
Blood, everywhere. Like the day I killed his family.
But now it's my own.
Yui-sama
Aniki.
Once upon a long time ago. This would never have happened.
Owari ~ End
**shoots herself** Whoa. When did I start writing like that? **KoK bashes Korin over the head with a large blunt instrument** Why did you bother to do that when I was already dead from the shotgun?
KoK: You deserved it. You need to get a life. And quit writing stuff like this!!
Korin: So, my own writing partner hates this piece. Review and tell me what you think.