Ok, here it is the second chapter of Mia Sinargin Vala. Thank you for the
reviews.
I own whatever didn't come out of Tolkien's great mind. Maybe I could own
Legolas, please?? No!! What do you mean NO!! *frantic whispers* Fine we
will discuss this later. On to chapter 2..
Pliathon Chapter 2
It was at the moment when Kirralia stopped talking that a horrible screeching sound penetrated the quietness of the forest. The entire group looked around. "It's Pliathon," Kirralia whispered. "What's Pliathon?" asked Legolas, who was standing close enough to hear her. The group looked at Kirralia waiting for her answer. "Pliathon is a Quorathica," said Kirralia. Legolas' eyes widened. "But I thought that Quorathicas were extinct." "There are a few left in the Forests which were not treated by the spell," she replied. "What is a Quorathica?" asked Frodo voicing the question the rest of the fellowship wanted to know. "A Quorathica is a creature that hunts and kills elves. It sucks the very life force out of them. Our aura is swallowed by him. It is a very painful death. Even more painful than death by grief. He uses the aura as fuel. The Elder Elves once cast a spell over the known Quorathica habitats. Obviously they missed this Forest," answered Legolas. "This Quorathica, Pliathon is one of the most dangerous and powerful ones I have ever heard about," added Kirralia, " we must leave right now." "Where are we supposed to go?" asked Aragorn. "There are some caves a couple of miles away. They are on the hill just beyond the stream. Come I'll show you," said Kirralia. With that she turned and started towards the caves. The Fellowship looked at each other and followed.
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"I smell Elven blood," said a silky evil voice, wafting over the trees. Legolas and Kirralia exchanged looks and automatically started walking faster. "Oh little Elves, don't hide from Pliathon, I won't hurt you," the voice came again. CRASH! A tree was knocked over. "RUN!" yelled Legolas. They started sprinting. Samwise and Frodo tried as hard as they could but were unable to keep up. "Hey wait up," called Frodo. They all stopped and Aragorn and Legolas bent to pick up the half-lings. Suddenly the crashing noise which had been following them stopped. All that could be heard was the heavy breathing of the group. "It's too quiet," whispered Gimli. Then a creature came into the clearing. There was no definite shape to it. A mysterious, thick, black mist engulfed the creature. All that could be seen was a trio of glowing red eyes in the middle of the mist. "Ahhh.two elves. What a feast. I have not had any elves for a very long time and I am famished." The group was unconsciously stepping back. The caves were in sight, just beyond a shallow stream. "Don't think of leaving so soon my pretty little elves." At that the mist had surrounded the group preventing them from escaping. "Now what do we do?" asked Aragorn
I am evil, making a chapter and just stopping it there. I will have the next chapter up soon. So please review it. Especially if I have made any major mistakes. I have only seen the movie sorry. (
Pliathon Chapter 2
It was at the moment when Kirralia stopped talking that a horrible screeching sound penetrated the quietness of the forest. The entire group looked around. "It's Pliathon," Kirralia whispered. "What's Pliathon?" asked Legolas, who was standing close enough to hear her. The group looked at Kirralia waiting for her answer. "Pliathon is a Quorathica," said Kirralia. Legolas' eyes widened. "But I thought that Quorathicas were extinct." "There are a few left in the Forests which were not treated by the spell," she replied. "What is a Quorathica?" asked Frodo voicing the question the rest of the fellowship wanted to know. "A Quorathica is a creature that hunts and kills elves. It sucks the very life force out of them. Our aura is swallowed by him. It is a very painful death. Even more painful than death by grief. He uses the aura as fuel. The Elder Elves once cast a spell over the known Quorathica habitats. Obviously they missed this Forest," answered Legolas. "This Quorathica, Pliathon is one of the most dangerous and powerful ones I have ever heard about," added Kirralia, " we must leave right now." "Where are we supposed to go?" asked Aragorn. "There are some caves a couple of miles away. They are on the hill just beyond the stream. Come I'll show you," said Kirralia. With that she turned and started towards the caves. The Fellowship looked at each other and followed.
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"I smell Elven blood," said a silky evil voice, wafting over the trees. Legolas and Kirralia exchanged looks and automatically started walking faster. "Oh little Elves, don't hide from Pliathon, I won't hurt you," the voice came again. CRASH! A tree was knocked over. "RUN!" yelled Legolas. They started sprinting. Samwise and Frodo tried as hard as they could but were unable to keep up. "Hey wait up," called Frodo. They all stopped and Aragorn and Legolas bent to pick up the half-lings. Suddenly the crashing noise which had been following them stopped. All that could be heard was the heavy breathing of the group. "It's too quiet," whispered Gimli. Then a creature came into the clearing. There was no definite shape to it. A mysterious, thick, black mist engulfed the creature. All that could be seen was a trio of glowing red eyes in the middle of the mist. "Ahhh.two elves. What a feast. I have not had any elves for a very long time and I am famished." The group was unconsciously stepping back. The caves were in sight, just beyond a shallow stream. "Don't think of leaving so soon my pretty little elves." At that the mist had surrounded the group preventing them from escaping. "Now what do we do?" asked Aragorn
I am evil, making a chapter and just stopping it there. I will have the next chapter up soon. So please review it. Especially if I have made any major mistakes. I have only seen the movie sorry. (