Author's Note: Thank you to those kind enough to review my "I'm Back"
note. I am slightly disappointed since it seems that less than 8 people
want me to keep writing. *shakes her head* anyway. There were two
responses that were highly uncalled for and just down right rude. Those
were from Seito no Senshi and Cloe.
Far be it for me to sound bitchy/rude, but in my opinion you're abusing the word 'Koibito' just as numerous authors on ff.net have abused the word 'Aishiteru.' (Myself included). Going a bit off topic here, but in Japan, 'Aishiteru' is a very serious way of saying 'I Love you.' Japanese people make it a habit *not* to say it. Just like that, you're using the word 'koibito' (obviously meaning lover). Why are you calling Yaten-Muse that? It's not as if you actually go out on dates etc. And unless I'm much mistaken, you two live more then half a country apart. Not to mention the fact that it was quite inappropriate. It has absolutely nothing to do with your stories. Suddenly coming out with that? Please.
Also- Unless I am much mistaken, Yaten-Muse wasn't the first person to come up with the Seiya/Yaten or Taiki/Yaten fanfictions. As far as I am concerned, The Mad Hattress was (for the Yaten/Taiki) and Amykins for Seiya/Yaten. Calling Yaten-Muse that ('The Seiya/Yaten or Yaten/Taiki writer') implies that she is the only writer of those two pairings on ff.net.
*Finally*- less exclamation marks (etc) and 'pretty faces-' it makes it rather difficult to read what you wrote.
~Seito no Senshi
In response to this Seito-san, I have a few things to say. One, get off your high horse and stop being a little self appointed fan fiction censor. Don't think you're all high and mighty just because you call yourself a 'Japanese Student.' I normally don't get this upset at anyone, as those of you who know me, know quite well. However, Seito-san you have crossed the line. Do not underestimate me. Or insult me or Cris. Alright? Further, I will use whatever faces and numbers of exclamation points I want. And if something I say 'implies' something else that what I mean, you know me enough to be able to figure out what I was saying. So just shut up and stop being the little Fanfiction.net police dog like 'Fido'.
I'm hoping there are still people who want me to write, such as Lottio. In response to Lottio's request, for being kind enough to review, sure, I'll write a Seiya/Mamoru for you ^~. But I have to finish a few more stories first, okay? ^_^
Now in response to Cloe.
I'll believe it when I see it, it's one thing to say you're going to finish your fics and quite another thing to actually DO it. Don't you think this LOVELY introductory that you just babbled about would have been better as an author note at the beginning of a new fic or a new chapter to one of those MANY fics you claim to be going to finish?
No offense or anything but I'm rather pissed you just wasted my time reading this and if you wanted to put yourself out on a limb and reveal to your 'readers' what you've been doing, the better suggestion would have been to privately e-mail them. So, in short, quit the small talk and posting pointless rants about yourself (this isn't a blog) and write a complete fic. Do not presume that I'm trying to yell at you (though I probably should be for wasting this resource) but when you do put something personal (no matter how pointless) out for the public eye, you're asking for this sort of criticism.
[bows out]
Look. Don't you dare tell me ~I~ wasted your time. If you didn't like reading it, ~you~ wasted your own time, sweetie. And because of your snide remark I can't wait until all of my stories are done, then you'll be eating your words. I'm not ranting, and the heck do you mean 'wasting this resource'? Its YOU who are wasting the resource, hun. So don't even THINK about insulting me. Flames are one thing, but this is something totally different.
What was a simple gesture to let people, whom I ~thought~ still wanted me to write, is NOTHING to flame about. If you don't like it, don't read it.
Seito-san, one last word. I respect you as a writer of decent fan fiction, but I'm afraid I've lost all respect for you as a person.
Now, minna. I ask you to read and review this chapter so that I know people still want me to write and that I'm to writing for air. That's the only reason I write, to bring stories to you that you enjoy. There is no author without readers.
If Only I Could Turn Back Time... Chapter 11: Darkness
Wolf glared at the floor as she walked. How could Kaela have said such a thing?! She could be so...so...infuriating sometimes!! The young Wild Senshi had reverted to her younger form and had lost Grim. "Once I get everyone out of here I'm just going to leave," she muttered. "gonna go back to the future. Let Chibi-usa-baka stay in the past forever for all I care! Her, Kaela, and everyone! I don't need anyone!" She stopped to lean against the wall. "I don't need anyone... Taikichan... Yatenchan... Kaoran... Locke... Julia... They're all gone...why? Why?! People care about them! They had a reasons to live! I should have been the one... "Poor little lost senshi... you want to join your friends?!" an intense voice hissed. Wolf looked up and didn't get a chance to scream before darkness swept over her.
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Grim ran down the corridor franticly. He had sensed a great evil power eminating from where Wolf had run off to. He knew Olivia. She would kill Keiko in a second, for two reasons. One, she was a senshi, a starlight to be exact. And two, she was the future offspring of Seiya and Usagi. Though Seiya had rejected her, she was still jealous of the moon child that had claimed the Starlight's heart. As he was thinking these things, Grim wondered how he was running so fast. He had even outrun the infamous Cheetah and Liam, both were very fast runners. "How? This speed...where is it coming from? My heart...its beating so fast...I'm scared for her...I'm worried, concerned...I'm...in love?" A loud scream broke into Grim's thoughts. "Keiko!"
Grim skidded to a stop in front of a doorway and all the color drained out of his face. Keiko was on her knees in the middle of a dark room, a aura of darkness eminating from her. Her eyes were hazy and uncomprehending and her skin was very pale. A large dark shadow was towering above her. Grim run forward even as the shadow vanished with an evil laugh. "Keiko!" he took her by the shoulders and shook her. "Keiko! Come on! Snap out of it!" Keiko lifted her head with her uncomprehending eyes and gave him a blank stare. "Keiko! Please!!" Grim's eyes widened slightly and he backed away even as Keiko rose to her feet, her hand pulling out her sword from its sheath. "K-keiko...?
Grim had to jump to the side as Keiko brought her sword around at him. "Keiko! What are you doing?!"
Keiko looked up, but there was no comprehension in her eyes which were clouded over. She raised her sword again.
"SENSITIVE LOVE SHOCK!!"
Keiko was thrown into the wall as HealerVenus and Liam stepped into the room. Grim was on his feet instantly. "Kaela!!! WHAT DID YOU DO?!" he ran over to Keiko and lifted her up. "Keiko..? Keiko? Onegai, wake up..."
An evil laugh came from above them, as the three conscious people looked up, Olivia was floating in the air above. "Not only do you fight me, but you knock out your allies, so smart..."
Kaela growled. "SHUT UP! You killed my father!! You killed my brother!! Prepare to die!!!" She jumped up in the air, Kaoran's sword in hand. At the same time, Keiko shook her head.
"Kaela!! Stop!!" but even if she wanted to, Kaela couldn't stop, she had too much momentum. Olivia smirked and drew a black sword and positioned it so that if Kaela came too much closer, she'd run right into the tip.
The plan would have worked, Kaela had no way of stopping herself in the air, had it not been for the unexpected movement of Liam who jumped up and grabbed Kaela out of the air. It took great thought to know where Kaela was going to be and so, where to jump. Keiko frowned deeply but then smirked again. Liam half turned, sensing something. Keiko raised her hands "WEREWOLF HOWL!!"
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and THAT'S where I'm gonna leave that chapter XD *Cackle* I'm back and my cliffhangers are as bad as ever!! Muahahahahahah!!!! I know its REEAAALLY short, but I REAAALLY wanted to get the chapter out. I'm concocting the ending as we speak :P so it WILL be done.
tee hee...go here for me and Rose Thorne, please? ^__^ *cackle*
Far be it for me to sound bitchy/rude, but in my opinion you're abusing the word 'Koibito' just as numerous authors on ff.net have abused the word 'Aishiteru.' (Myself included). Going a bit off topic here, but in Japan, 'Aishiteru' is a very serious way of saying 'I Love you.' Japanese people make it a habit *not* to say it. Just like that, you're using the word 'koibito' (obviously meaning lover). Why are you calling Yaten-Muse that? It's not as if you actually go out on dates etc. And unless I'm much mistaken, you two live more then half a country apart. Not to mention the fact that it was quite inappropriate. It has absolutely nothing to do with your stories. Suddenly coming out with that? Please.
Also- Unless I am much mistaken, Yaten-Muse wasn't the first person to come up with the Seiya/Yaten or Taiki/Yaten fanfictions. As far as I am concerned, The Mad Hattress was (for the Yaten/Taiki) and Amykins for Seiya/Yaten. Calling Yaten-Muse that ('The Seiya/Yaten or Yaten/Taiki writer') implies that she is the only writer of those two pairings on ff.net.
*Finally*- less exclamation marks (etc) and 'pretty faces-' it makes it rather difficult to read what you wrote.
~Seito no Senshi
In response to this Seito-san, I have a few things to say. One, get off your high horse and stop being a little self appointed fan fiction censor. Don't think you're all high and mighty just because you call yourself a 'Japanese Student.' I normally don't get this upset at anyone, as those of you who know me, know quite well. However, Seito-san you have crossed the line. Do not underestimate me. Or insult me or Cris. Alright? Further, I will use whatever faces and numbers of exclamation points I want. And if something I say 'implies' something else that what I mean, you know me enough to be able to figure out what I was saying. So just shut up and stop being the little Fanfiction.net police dog like 'Fido'.
I'm hoping there are still people who want me to write, such as Lottio. In response to Lottio's request, for being kind enough to review, sure, I'll write a Seiya/Mamoru for you ^~. But I have to finish a few more stories first, okay? ^_^
Now in response to Cloe.
I'll believe it when I see it, it's one thing to say you're going to finish your fics and quite another thing to actually DO it. Don't you think this LOVELY introductory that you just babbled about would have been better as an author note at the beginning of a new fic or a new chapter to one of those MANY fics you claim to be going to finish?
No offense or anything but I'm rather pissed you just wasted my time reading this and if you wanted to put yourself out on a limb and reveal to your 'readers' what you've been doing, the better suggestion would have been to privately e-mail them. So, in short, quit the small talk and posting pointless rants about yourself (this isn't a blog) and write a complete fic. Do not presume that I'm trying to yell at you (though I probably should be for wasting this resource) but when you do put something personal (no matter how pointless) out for the public eye, you're asking for this sort of criticism.
[bows out]
Look. Don't you dare tell me ~I~ wasted your time. If you didn't like reading it, ~you~ wasted your own time, sweetie. And because of your snide remark I can't wait until all of my stories are done, then you'll be eating your words. I'm not ranting, and the heck do you mean 'wasting this resource'? Its YOU who are wasting the resource, hun. So don't even THINK about insulting me. Flames are one thing, but this is something totally different.
What was a simple gesture to let people, whom I ~thought~ still wanted me to write, is NOTHING to flame about. If you don't like it, don't read it.
Seito-san, one last word. I respect you as a writer of decent fan fiction, but I'm afraid I've lost all respect for you as a person.
Now, minna. I ask you to read and review this chapter so that I know people still want me to write and that I'm to writing for air. That's the only reason I write, to bring stories to you that you enjoy. There is no author without readers.
If Only I Could Turn Back Time... Chapter 11: Darkness
Wolf glared at the floor as she walked. How could Kaela have said such a thing?! She could be so...so...infuriating sometimes!! The young Wild Senshi had reverted to her younger form and had lost Grim. "Once I get everyone out of here I'm just going to leave," she muttered. "gonna go back to the future. Let Chibi-usa-baka stay in the past forever for all I care! Her, Kaela, and everyone! I don't need anyone!" She stopped to lean against the wall. "I don't need anyone... Taikichan... Yatenchan... Kaoran... Locke... Julia... They're all gone...why? Why?! People care about them! They had a reasons to live! I should have been the one... "Poor little lost senshi... you want to join your friends?!" an intense voice hissed. Wolf looked up and didn't get a chance to scream before darkness swept over her.
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Grim ran down the corridor franticly. He had sensed a great evil power eminating from where Wolf had run off to. He knew Olivia. She would kill Keiko in a second, for two reasons. One, she was a senshi, a starlight to be exact. And two, she was the future offspring of Seiya and Usagi. Though Seiya had rejected her, she was still jealous of the moon child that had claimed the Starlight's heart. As he was thinking these things, Grim wondered how he was running so fast. He had even outrun the infamous Cheetah and Liam, both were very fast runners. "How? This speed...where is it coming from? My heart...its beating so fast...I'm scared for her...I'm worried, concerned...I'm...in love?" A loud scream broke into Grim's thoughts. "Keiko!"
Grim skidded to a stop in front of a doorway and all the color drained out of his face. Keiko was on her knees in the middle of a dark room, a aura of darkness eminating from her. Her eyes were hazy and uncomprehending and her skin was very pale. A large dark shadow was towering above her. Grim run forward even as the shadow vanished with an evil laugh. "Keiko!" he took her by the shoulders and shook her. "Keiko! Come on! Snap out of it!" Keiko lifted her head with her uncomprehending eyes and gave him a blank stare. "Keiko! Please!!" Grim's eyes widened slightly and he backed away even as Keiko rose to her feet, her hand pulling out her sword from its sheath. "K-keiko...?
Grim had to jump to the side as Keiko brought her sword around at him. "Keiko! What are you doing?!"
Keiko looked up, but there was no comprehension in her eyes which were clouded over. She raised her sword again.
"SENSITIVE LOVE SHOCK!!"
Keiko was thrown into the wall as HealerVenus and Liam stepped into the room. Grim was on his feet instantly. "Kaela!!! WHAT DID YOU DO?!" he ran over to Keiko and lifted her up. "Keiko..? Keiko? Onegai, wake up..."
An evil laugh came from above them, as the three conscious people looked up, Olivia was floating in the air above. "Not only do you fight me, but you knock out your allies, so smart..."
Kaela growled. "SHUT UP! You killed my father!! You killed my brother!! Prepare to die!!!" She jumped up in the air, Kaoran's sword in hand. At the same time, Keiko shook her head.
"Kaela!! Stop!!" but even if she wanted to, Kaela couldn't stop, she had too much momentum. Olivia smirked and drew a black sword and positioned it so that if Kaela came too much closer, she'd run right into the tip.
The plan would have worked, Kaela had no way of stopping herself in the air, had it not been for the unexpected movement of Liam who jumped up and grabbed Kaela out of the air. It took great thought to know where Kaela was going to be and so, where to jump. Keiko frowned deeply but then smirked again. Liam half turned, sensing something. Keiko raised her hands "WEREWOLF HOWL!!"
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and THAT'S where I'm gonna leave that chapter XD *Cackle* I'm back and my cliffhangers are as bad as ever!! Muahahahahahah!!!! I know its REEAAALLY short, but I REAAALLY wanted to get the chapter out. I'm concocting the ending as we speak :P so it WILL be done.
tee hee...go here for me and Rose Thorne, please? ^__^ *cackle*