Times in the Life of an Cyborg
Chapter 4
This is my first fanfic. Want to find out which writing style is the best
for me so please review and tell me what you like best. I need about five
reviews. In my first 3 Chapters I worked much with thoughts and feelings
and tried to explain them in this chapter I want to use more dialogues to
express the thoughts and feelings.
After about ten minutes they arrived at the Kamehouse. "So you think that they let me stay here?" 18 asked. "Sure why not. They let Bulma, Maron and Lunch stay here. Why shouldn't they let you stay here? There won't be problem with that." They flew down and walked to the door. Krillin hesitated a minute. "18 would you do me a favour?" "First you have to tell what kind of favour you want." "Okay! Please don't kill them. I know they can be really annoying when a female is around and always try to get a piece of her but let them stay alive." "Okay.When you allow me to crash their bones from time to time." "But only when they are really annoying. Not your standard annoying." 18 had to surpress a smile. Sometimes it was so relaxing to be annoyed. She didn't have to care about anything cause she was annoyed. Everything is easier and you didn't have to think about everything. Well I won't kill them. That's just a short pleasure. Hurting them a bit is much more fun (( I love when 18 kicks Muten Roshi around). "Hey 18! What are you thinking about you've got this evil grin on your face?" 18 didn't realised that she was grinning. "It's nothing I just thought about torturing your pervert friends a bit" "And that's funny" "Sure." "You really are evil aren't you?" Krillin smiled. "Yup I'm totally evil. Now lets get inside and give your friends the shock of their live." They walked inside. Roshi and Oolong were watching a aerobic show again. (They don't have anything else to do) "Oh noooo she's back." Roshi nearly collapsed. He tried to jump out of the window with Oolong under his arm. But he didn't see that the window was closed. Trying to stop he hit the floor. "Are you ready?" A really annoyed 18 asked. Man these two could annoy her just by being in the same room with her. "Krillin would you please show me my room." "Okay" Oolong's and Roshi's jaws nearly went through the floor. Krillin went upstairs with 18. 18's room was next to his room. Both rooms were connected by a huge bathroom. "This is your room" Krillin opened the door. The bathroom is on the other side of this door. It's a connection between our rooms. When I was young this was Goku's room. This house was built for Muten Roshi and his students and to waste less space they build it so that 2 or whatever how many students stayed in one room used the same bathroom. I don't think you want to use the same bathroom as Roshi or Oolong." 18 walked into the room and sat on the bed. This room is a bit small but who cares. I don't need much room. After saying goodnight Krillin left the room. It was funny having 18 around.
The next morning Krillin wanted to phone Yamchu. But first he had to cope with a little surprise. When he awoke to the smell of burning rice and eggs he didn't expect to find 18 in the kitchen trying to make food for him. "Hey 18 what's up? Are you trying to make something to eat?" Krillin asked.
"Yup I'm trying to make s.th. to eat but as you might see it's not one of the things I'm good at." "Oh that's not bad. Hmm what do you think I clean the mess and you sit down and keep me company" "Okay" Was all 18 said when she sat down. With a smile Krillin began to clean the kitchen mass. "Hey 18 why did you try to make breakfast?" "Cause I wanted to." "And why did you want to make breakfast?" Krillin asked curiously. Oh boy! 18 really is a complicate character. Maybe that's why I love her so much. She isn't such a simple character like Maron, he thought. 18 rolled her eyes. "You let me live here and so I tried to make breakfast to."(long pause)"thank you". Krillin realised that it had been hard for her to say that. "You don't have to thank me. There aren't many women who care about me. I'm happy that you decided to stay here with me. I have to thank you and not wise-versa." Then both became silent. 18 stood up and walked to Krillin who was still cleaning the kitchen. She kissed him on the cheek "Don't sell yourself under worth" She walked out of the house and on the beach where Turtle swam. "Excuse me. Don't I know you from somewhere?" Turtle asked. "Have you been here when the 'Androids' attacked?" "Yes why" "Then you might know me." "Oh I got it you're 18 right?" "Not afraid of me?" 18 asked a bit surprised. This turtle had more guts then Roshi. "Oh no. Krillin told me a bit about you and I don't think that you're as evil as you want us to believe you are." "What did Krillin tell you about me?" "Just that you're the most beautiful girl in his eyes and you can be as nice and gentle as you can be cold and evil" 18 nearly blushed. Krillin knows me far to well. "Okay enough about me. Why is Krillin like he's? I mean he sometimes talks so bad about himself." "Well he is one of the nicest people on this planet. But that doesn't really count in this world. It doesn't help him to get friends. You may have noticed that the Z senshi are his only friends. Many are gone at the moment and so there are only a few left. The only one he can talk to know are Bulma, Yamchu, and Gohan who is still to young for certain things. But now he's got you as his girl-friend and that'll be good for him" "What makes you so sure about me being his girl-friend?" "I saw you yesterday. I couldn't see you're face but I heard enough" Turtle smiled and went on with swimming. "According to me you can wipe the floor with Roshi and Oolong every time you want to". Now 18 smiled too. "Maybe you should talk to some of his female friends." "Maybe. But I don't know them." "That won't be a problem. I'll show you were they live." "How? I won't go swimming with you I hate water." "Then you have to carry me." "That sounds much better than swimming brrrrr." 18 picked Turtle up and took off.
If you wanna know what'll happen next and who Turtle and 18 will meet you should write some reviews I want only 5 pretty pleeeeaaaaaasssseeee
After about ten minutes they arrived at the Kamehouse. "So you think that they let me stay here?" 18 asked. "Sure why not. They let Bulma, Maron and Lunch stay here. Why shouldn't they let you stay here? There won't be problem with that." They flew down and walked to the door. Krillin hesitated a minute. "18 would you do me a favour?" "First you have to tell what kind of favour you want." "Okay! Please don't kill them. I know they can be really annoying when a female is around and always try to get a piece of her but let them stay alive." "Okay.When you allow me to crash their bones from time to time." "But only when they are really annoying. Not your standard annoying." 18 had to surpress a smile. Sometimes it was so relaxing to be annoyed. She didn't have to care about anything cause she was annoyed. Everything is easier and you didn't have to think about everything. Well I won't kill them. That's just a short pleasure. Hurting them a bit is much more fun (( I love when 18 kicks Muten Roshi around). "Hey 18! What are you thinking about you've got this evil grin on your face?" 18 didn't realised that she was grinning. "It's nothing I just thought about torturing your pervert friends a bit" "And that's funny" "Sure." "You really are evil aren't you?" Krillin smiled. "Yup I'm totally evil. Now lets get inside and give your friends the shock of their live." They walked inside. Roshi and Oolong were watching a aerobic show again. (They don't have anything else to do) "Oh noooo she's back." Roshi nearly collapsed. He tried to jump out of the window with Oolong under his arm. But he didn't see that the window was closed. Trying to stop he hit the floor. "Are you ready?" A really annoyed 18 asked. Man these two could annoy her just by being in the same room with her. "Krillin would you please show me my room." "Okay" Oolong's and Roshi's jaws nearly went through the floor. Krillin went upstairs with 18. 18's room was next to his room. Both rooms were connected by a huge bathroom. "This is your room" Krillin opened the door. The bathroom is on the other side of this door. It's a connection between our rooms. When I was young this was Goku's room. This house was built for Muten Roshi and his students and to waste less space they build it so that 2 or whatever how many students stayed in one room used the same bathroom. I don't think you want to use the same bathroom as Roshi or Oolong." 18 walked into the room and sat on the bed. This room is a bit small but who cares. I don't need much room. After saying goodnight Krillin left the room. It was funny having 18 around.
The next morning Krillin wanted to phone Yamchu. But first he had to cope with a little surprise. When he awoke to the smell of burning rice and eggs he didn't expect to find 18 in the kitchen trying to make food for him. "Hey 18 what's up? Are you trying to make something to eat?" Krillin asked.
"Yup I'm trying to make s.th. to eat but as you might see it's not one of the things I'm good at." "Oh that's not bad. Hmm what do you think I clean the mess and you sit down and keep me company" "Okay" Was all 18 said when she sat down. With a smile Krillin began to clean the kitchen mass. "Hey 18 why did you try to make breakfast?" "Cause I wanted to." "And why did you want to make breakfast?" Krillin asked curiously. Oh boy! 18 really is a complicate character. Maybe that's why I love her so much. She isn't such a simple character like Maron, he thought. 18 rolled her eyes. "You let me live here and so I tried to make breakfast to."(long pause)"thank you". Krillin realised that it had been hard for her to say that. "You don't have to thank me. There aren't many women who care about me. I'm happy that you decided to stay here with me. I have to thank you and not wise-versa." Then both became silent. 18 stood up and walked to Krillin who was still cleaning the kitchen. She kissed him on the cheek "Don't sell yourself under worth" She walked out of the house and on the beach where Turtle swam. "Excuse me. Don't I know you from somewhere?" Turtle asked. "Have you been here when the 'Androids' attacked?" "Yes why" "Then you might know me." "Oh I got it you're 18 right?" "Not afraid of me?" 18 asked a bit surprised. This turtle had more guts then Roshi. "Oh no. Krillin told me a bit about you and I don't think that you're as evil as you want us to believe you are." "What did Krillin tell you about me?" "Just that you're the most beautiful girl in his eyes and you can be as nice and gentle as you can be cold and evil" 18 nearly blushed. Krillin knows me far to well. "Okay enough about me. Why is Krillin like he's? I mean he sometimes talks so bad about himself." "Well he is one of the nicest people on this planet. But that doesn't really count in this world. It doesn't help him to get friends. You may have noticed that the Z senshi are his only friends. Many are gone at the moment and so there are only a few left. The only one he can talk to know are Bulma, Yamchu, and Gohan who is still to young for certain things. But now he's got you as his girl-friend and that'll be good for him" "What makes you so sure about me being his girl-friend?" "I saw you yesterday. I couldn't see you're face but I heard enough" Turtle smiled and went on with swimming. "According to me you can wipe the floor with Roshi and Oolong every time you want to". Now 18 smiled too. "Maybe you should talk to some of his female friends." "Maybe. But I don't know them." "That won't be a problem. I'll show you were they live." "How? I won't go swimming with you I hate water." "Then you have to carry me." "That sounds much better than swimming brrrrr." 18 picked Turtle up and took off.
If you wanna know what'll happen next and who Turtle and 18 will meet you should write some reviews I want only 5 pretty pleeeeaaaaaasssseeee