Disclaimer: If they were mine, this wouldn't be a fanfic, it would be a
script for one of the anime episodes... Rating: Well I dunno... I'll say R,
because there will be a lemon (or two... or three...) OOCness? Well
maybe... but without OOCness fanfiction wouldn't exist.
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Seducing Yohji
I wake up; watching the clock on the table I can see it's quite late, 3 p.m. Good thing today is Sunday. I watch Ken and he is still sleeping, spread on the bed, with his head on my chest as well as his arm. Carefully to not wake him up I lift him until he lies on me and hugging him tightly I begin to kiss his face. He seems to react to this since he begins to open his eyes. He stares at me with a look I can't read. "Morning Baby!" "Morning" he rest his head against my body and sighs. He remains like that for a while. "Are you ok?" "Yeah... I was just thinking in everthing that has happened in the last three days" "Do you regret it?" "No, no! I just was thinking in how life can change in a moment. And also how stupid I have been. I should have told you straighfoward but I was scared" "Don't worry 'bout that. In the future we will remember and laugh at it" "Let's go to sleep again? I'm still tired" "Ok... but let's eat a little before we go to sleep again. Wait here I'll be back in a second" I go to the kitchen and look for something to eat in the fridge. I find a melon and cut some. There are is also some ham. I also cut some of it and put it all in a dish. I drop the melon again in the fridge and then I see it... a pot of peach jam. I hesitate for a moment and then grab the pot too. "Here is dinner" I sit in the bed leaving the pot in the floor, just to use it later. Getting some ham and melon in a fork I start feeding Ken. He lacking a fork starts to feed me with his bare hands. I end up sucking Ken's fingers. When the dish is over I drop in carefully on the floor, then is when I touch the jam pot that I almost forgot. When Ken sees it gets his hand back and look at me weirdly. "What's that for?" "You see... the other night after the shower incident I had a dream where..." Oooh... I think we are going to have a funny afternoon. We'll have time to sleep tomorrow...
Fin.
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Yeah... the end. I'm happy with this fic, it's more much better than my first (A Touya x Yukito fic, in spanish, if someone feels like giving it a try the tittle is "Confesiones indiscretas" -yeah, the tittle sucks- ). Thank you veeeery much to all the people who has review this fic. And lots of thanks to Phenocrystian who review the fic. But wait! It's not over yet, there is left a "bonus track" explaining how Aya and Omi did with Aya's katana to end up breaking the tub so there is still fun left :D
A little note about the ham and melon thing... I dunno why I made Yohji get that from the kitchen, the truth is I can't imagine a ham hanging from Weiss kitchen but I was thinking in some juicy fruit and it came to my mind... the ham was just because it goes well with melon, at last where I live.... Well... I'll stop talking about food now...
Someone in the reviews told me I wrote too "now he does that and now I do this" and reading my fic I realized she (i guess it's a she...) was right. I'll try to improve that in my next fic. The fault of this is that when I imagine the fic I don't see it as words but as if I was making a movie with the camara movement and such which wouldn't be bad if I just got the two boys and a videocamara but since that's not possible... I'll try to write better!
Keep waiting for the omake. Next week it should be already done ^-^ See ya! Oh, and pleaaase review (
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Seducing Yohji
I wake up; watching the clock on the table I can see it's quite late, 3 p.m. Good thing today is Sunday. I watch Ken and he is still sleeping, spread on the bed, with his head on my chest as well as his arm. Carefully to not wake him up I lift him until he lies on me and hugging him tightly I begin to kiss his face. He seems to react to this since he begins to open his eyes. He stares at me with a look I can't read. "Morning Baby!" "Morning" he rest his head against my body and sighs. He remains like that for a while. "Are you ok?" "Yeah... I was just thinking in everthing that has happened in the last three days" "Do you regret it?" "No, no! I just was thinking in how life can change in a moment. And also how stupid I have been. I should have told you straighfoward but I was scared" "Don't worry 'bout that. In the future we will remember and laugh at it" "Let's go to sleep again? I'm still tired" "Ok... but let's eat a little before we go to sleep again. Wait here I'll be back in a second" I go to the kitchen and look for something to eat in the fridge. I find a melon and cut some. There are is also some ham. I also cut some of it and put it all in a dish. I drop the melon again in the fridge and then I see it... a pot of peach jam. I hesitate for a moment and then grab the pot too. "Here is dinner" I sit in the bed leaving the pot in the floor, just to use it later. Getting some ham and melon in a fork I start feeding Ken. He lacking a fork starts to feed me with his bare hands. I end up sucking Ken's fingers. When the dish is over I drop in carefully on the floor, then is when I touch the jam pot that I almost forgot. When Ken sees it gets his hand back and look at me weirdly. "What's that for?" "You see... the other night after the shower incident I had a dream where..." Oooh... I think we are going to have a funny afternoon. We'll have time to sleep tomorrow...
Fin.
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Yeah... the end. I'm happy with this fic, it's more much better than my first (A Touya x Yukito fic, in spanish, if someone feels like giving it a try the tittle is "Confesiones indiscretas" -yeah, the tittle sucks- ). Thank you veeeery much to all the people who has review this fic. And lots of thanks to Phenocrystian who review the fic. But wait! It's not over yet, there is left a "bonus track" explaining how Aya and Omi did with Aya's katana to end up breaking the tub so there is still fun left :D
A little note about the ham and melon thing... I dunno why I made Yohji get that from the kitchen, the truth is I can't imagine a ham hanging from Weiss kitchen but I was thinking in some juicy fruit and it came to my mind... the ham was just because it goes well with melon, at last where I live.... Well... I'll stop talking about food now...
Someone in the reviews told me I wrote too "now he does that and now I do this" and reading my fic I realized she (i guess it's a she...) was right. I'll try to improve that in my next fic. The fault of this is that when I imagine the fic I don't see it as words but as if I was making a movie with the camara movement and such which wouldn't be bad if I just got the two boys and a videocamara but since that's not possible... I'll try to write better!
Keep waiting for the omake. Next week it should be already done ^-^ See ya! Oh, and pleaaase review (