I wrote this fan fic as a writing exercise, to help get my creative juices flowing. It was fun working with characters who were already fully developed. I was not worried about writing a original story line, nor was I going for something plot driven. I just wanted to have fun. If you wish to review I would be more than pleased to hear what you think of my writing. The main things that I was concentrating on, was how the story flowed, and dialoged. Did you feel the story moved smoothly from one part to the other? Were there any places that you felt didn't fit or were jerky? How was the dialog. Was it believable? Thank You for taking the time to read my fan fic.

Nandelin