This is it ladies and gentlemen. I think you have been waiting this since you read the description of my fic. This is the deciding factor. Read this and you will know if you will continue to like my fic. And warning, this contains extreme fighting.
Please read and reply, I'm sorry it's kind of short, but it is very important.
The abyss claims me
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Nabar laughed cruelly, making Gobi look up in terror. Nabar leapt forward, shoving Gobi out of the way, and grabbed Gohan around the neck cruelly lifting him off of the ground. "So, this little piece of trash is the reason we were brought off of our vacation time, and were ordered to come to this little dust ball." He turned to his men. "What do you think we should do with him boys?" They all laughed and jeered at Gohan. One wanted to break his neck, another wanted to blast him, then still another wanted to just leave him and blow up the whole planet. At the mention of this the others all started to cheer, and pat the white banded brigadier on the back. The leader laughed at the mention of blowing up the planet, and threw Gohan towards the men, he landed roughly on the ground, and the others picked him up and held him forcing him to his knees, and making him look towards the ground. "The leader Nabar laughed again cruelly, and turned on his foot, and started to stalk towards their main ship, which was stationed a short distance away.
No…Gohan…He's just an innocent boy he can't be killed just because of who he is. I can't accept it…I can't allow it! In that moment Gobi reached down inside of himself and did the most courageous thing he never thought he could do. He stood shakily on his feet, and ran after Nabar. "Nabar! Please! He is only a child, you can not take him, please he never did anything to anger the empire!"
Gohan jerked his head up in surprise. What…what the hell is that idiot doing? I am giving myself to them so they leave this planet! What is he doing!?
Nabar stopped; he turned slowly towards Gobi behind him, and frowned. "You want me to spare this kids life huh?" Gobi nodded his head, terror making him tremble like a leaf. Nabar turned fully around and faced Gobi. "No."
The word hit Gobi like a ton of bricks. Gohan…poor, Gohan…
Nabar smiled, a cruel dark smile. "And because you delayed us so long Dr. I think a punishment is in order."
Gobi jerked his head up in horror. "What…what do you mean?"
Nabar stretched out his arm. "You know what I mean fool!" Nabar started to form a Ki blast in his hand, and watched in amusement as Gobi covered his head in a protective stance.
"No!" Gohan screamed and fought his captors, trying to break free. At the sound of Gohan's plea, Nabar smiled fuller. And at the last moment he jerked his arm away from Gobi, and let the ball of Ki launch off towards the hospital. Gohan watched in shock, he could see the ball inch closer and closer to the hospital, expanding as it reached it. He blinked, and then the ball exploded, blowing up the hospital and some of the surrounding buildings, killing hundreds of innocent bystanders. What…what happened? Gohan's vision faded, he was trapped in his mind now, the darkness wrapped around him, crushing him beneath its massive weight. The pain, the anger the sorrow all hit Gohan, making his mind burst in agony as he thought about what happened. They're dead…and it's all my fault!!! Gohan slipped over the edge into the darkness, he fell, fell endlessly into the abyss in his mind. NOO!! Gohan saw a small speck of light in the distance, and he reached for it, he reached from the eternal abyss that was sucking him in, and grasped the light.
Nabar laughed maniacally as the hospital burned to the ground in seconds after
the blast hit. He smiled, and turned to
the Dr. and in one swift move he punched through him, he let a grin stretch his
lips as Gobi coughed blood onto his chest, and Nabar formed another Ki blast in
his other hand and smashed it into Gobi's face, killing him on impact, and
sending him flying back into the wall, a crumpled form, a good man silenced
forever. "That was great!" Nabar laughed as he turned back towards his
men. He frowned as he noticed the boy
on his knee's trembling, his face down, his eyes clenched tight. "Grab him and let's go." Nabar watched as the men grabbed the boy,
and started to drag him onto the ship.
Gohan screamed endlessly, his voice echoing throughout his mind as the light absorbed him, bursting inside of him, enveloping him with it's unholy essence. They will die! They will all die!! Gohan screamed, and ripped out of the grasp of his holders. The men jumped back in surprise, but before they could move Gohan grabbed two of them by the head, and smashed them together. Gohan screamed again, and grabbed his own head as a tidal wave of pain and power racked over him. He screamed louder, as his hair stood straight up and lighting burst around him, killing a few more of the invaders with it's crackling power. Gohan charged a small group of others kneed one in the stomach, rupturing his spine through his chest; Gohan crushed his skull with his elbow as he turned away and kicked another in the side breaking him in half. Gohan's eyes grew a cold uncaring hate filled green, as he crushed another mans throat with his hand, and threw him to the ground, caving in his chest as he stepped in him, then over him.
There were only a few invaders left at this time, and Gohan growled fiercely as he blew them apart with a Ki blast from his out stretched hand. And as this all happened the Leader watched on in horror.
What…what is going on? He had no more time to think as Gohan's hair grew longer and burned a fiery gold, Gohan screamed as his transformation was complete, his muscles bulged further, ripping through the shirt he wore. Gohan charged Nabar gripping him by the throat with both his hands.
"DIE!!" Gohan threw him into the air, high above the city. Gohan flew up after him, his hands clenched together below him as a Ki ball began to form in his strong grasp. He raised his hands above his head, beams of light erupting from his grasp as he came over Nabar. In one swift motion he brought his hands down on him, releasing the Ki blast at the point of impact, the ball pushed Nabar straight down, there was a thin gold line from where it impacted him, and it grew longer as the ball continued to push Nabar down, when he crashed into the ground it exploded. Destroying miles of the planet around him.
Gohan hovered in the air, his hands clenched to the sides of his head as the pain continued to rack him. Gohan screamed again as the power began to overwhelm him farther. His eyes grew wider as his hair began to stretch towards the ground, the pupils in his eyes disappeared as he screamed in agony. The power burst out of him, making his muscles swell and pulsate. What is going on!? AHH!! Gohan formed two massive Ki blasts in his hands, and brought them to his chest, as his eyebrows disappeared into his forehead and his hair reached his waist he released the blasts, they exploded into him, sending him flying to the ground a smoking crumpled form. Gohan smiled as he crashed into the ground. The pain…it's…leaving…
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This is the first time I've done this, and from what you've read, you probably know why. The fic has just taken a violent turn from the happy happy, kill bad guys live wonderful ever after sort of thing. I'm not sure what's going to happen next, just be assured, Gohan is not dead, and this is not the end of the fic.