(a/n): I wrote 3 short poems and I really don't know which one to continue.
So I will like you to review and say me the one you prefer. Thank you!
If you want to like my poem read it slowly and make sure you understand all the sentences. Thank you! Summary: If you ask a human to be immortal he will say yes, human are blind of life
We don't know what tomorrow will bring, We don't heaven know if will live to see tomorrow, But we are sure of one thing;
Tomorrow will come, whit or without us
One more night I'll like to make you smile, But things goes to fast, Yesterday you were a child, And now youre a man, Tomorrow I'll be dead, Maybe waiting for you to come whit me, This is how life goes and you can't escape
You don't have to be afraid of death, Be afraid of life, Cause if they we're not death, Life would have no escape.
If you want to like my poem read it slowly and make sure you understand all the sentences. Thank you! Summary: If you ask a human to be immortal he will say yes, human are blind of life
We don't know what tomorrow will bring, We don't heaven know if will live to see tomorrow, But we are sure of one thing;
Tomorrow will come, whit or without us
One more night I'll like to make you smile, But things goes to fast, Yesterday you were a child, And now youre a man, Tomorrow I'll be dead, Maybe waiting for you to come whit me, This is how life goes and you can't escape
You don't have to be afraid of death, Be afraid of life, Cause if they we're not death, Life would have no escape.