Hello folks :) ok this is my first fanfic so it might be boring too you but at least give me a chance i will accept flames and comppliments at that so here it is the amazing story that i wrote at the top of my head:)
wait one more thing i think it is impossible for a person like me too own a great anime like the tenchi muyo series well because i aint got that kinda money well without further adu here is my 1'st fanfiction!
"Looking down on you"
(intro) Ryoko was a wild,outgoing,strong women who held her feelings in as if they were a deathwish to show anyone she encountered
There would come a time when Ryoko would let her feelings spill from her heart to the one she loved so dearly, and the guy whom she felt like she needed to show her feelings to was a man named Tenchi Maski.
He was a lively cheerfull young lad, who was tall had black hair and the most brilliant colored eyes a girl could see. They were the color of polished oak wood wich varied in colors of light to the darkest deepths of brown. Shy and cunning he would go to the farest corners of his soul to save a person in need he was a loving soul and this is why Ryoko spilled her heart to him on every level. But Tenchi would never return his feelings too her. He did not know if his heart was lying to him. So he never told anyone except himself.
It was a brisk cool night,and autum had,retured to Okiniawa and the lovely maiden Ryoko was atop of the rafter keeping busy drinking sake and thinking of her beloved Tenchi. " Tenchi...my beloved Tenchi." Ryoko slurred. She was smashed she couldnt talk right sit straight or see what the hell she was doing. Ryoko had and itch she attempted to scratch it but when she lifted her arm she fell to the floor with a thud that could make evenm president Bush talk straight. Ryoko was so intoxicated that the landing of that paticular was not felt on her rear. It was only a tingling feeling that ran through her body."Tenchi my Tenchi.....how i need you so..IM COMING TENCHI!''
Ryoko got up and stumbled through the halls knocking everything over from a 300 year old china set to little knick knackes that were set on a courier in the corner. Ryoko was making terrible noise as she enterd Tenchis room. Ryoko stumbled to Tenchis bed. Not to anyones surprize the young youth was already awoken by all the racket Ryoko was making. "Ryoko what do you think your doing in my room at this time of night!" Tenchi yelled at the top of his lungs. "Oh Tenchi hold me." Ryoko jumped onto Tenchi. by then then the whole Maski household was witnessing the tramatic event. " Miss Ryoko you get off of Lord Tenchi this instant!!!!!" it was to late by that time.
Tenchi had enough the rage was builing up inside of him for too long. With out him acknowlogin it his rage took over. His hand went into a tightly formed fist and pumeled straight into Ryoko's right cheek which knocked her too the ground. She squeled out in pain that knocked the the drunkness out of her. Tenchi went insane, he pounced onto Ryoko and countinued to drive his fists into her. She countinued to scream out in agony the one she loved was violently beating her. Had she gone to far? This point was obviouse. She finally drove Tenchi off the edge this time.
"Tenchi, Lord Tenchi stop this at once!" Ayeka screamed with her hands to her face. Washu was awstruck at the onslaught that was being forced upon her little Ryoko. Washu sent an electricity ball straight at Tenchi witch sent him plumaling back against the wall. "YOU STAY AWAY FROM HER TENCHI MASAKI!!!!". Every ones feet were planted to the floor unable to move. Ryoko got up, her face was badly beaten. Her eyes showed only sadness that surfaced from the deepest depths of her heart. Her soul was torn apart. "Tenchi...why?" she looked up at the youth she had only shown love too for many years and he reacently beat her down.
"Ryoko leave i never want to see you here in my presence again. I dont trust you anymore, and I cant trust myself around you! Leave here! Tenchi went out of his current state of insanity that just beat Ryoko into an oblivion. And he looked up at Ryoko just before she phased out of the house. "Wait no Ryoko wait! Im sorry Ryoko forgive me!". Tenchi was too late the beautiful but badly beatin maiden phased out of sight before she could hear his sorrowfull cry for forgivness.
Ryoko appeared above the Maski house. She floated off into town in her sorrowfull state. 'Why would Tenchih do such a thing? Thats not like him to hit a girl. But luckily for him I'm used to the treatment he just gave me. But the fact still remains even Kagato wouldn't beat me like that, well he would but not for ten minuets (sorry cant spell that word) straight.
Oh Tenchi how I loved you so but now im not sure of my feelings anymore.' By the time Ryoko had come across the the town and Tinjo's bar. Ryoko decided in her head that she could use some alcohol to ease the pain inside her heart and on her face. She landed on the ground but first making sure that no one saw her land . She walked into the pub and sat down on the little red stool ordered some sake and washed away her sorrows.
She busted out crying into her arms. 'Why do i attract all the bad stuff why do i always get the beatings will I ever be loved by someone that i can show my love too with out faking it. I wish i could just die! Too take my life so that all the sorrow can end so i dont have to be alone in the universe. All I want is love and to be loved. What am I talking about how can a science expedriment be loved and show love in return?'
Ryoko cauntinued to sob till she noticed a young man staring at her. He had the apperance of a fallen angelhe was Tall about 6'2. His hair was black with two thick streaks of white hair as bangs which went down to the corners of his eyes the rest of his hair was short and spikey. His eyes held a radient color of emerald green such the colors of Washu's eyes. He had a slight tan and anyone could tell he was built because you could she the outlines of his muscels through his shirt. He had a pair of baggy denim pants on and a shirt that showed an awfull way to escape the police. He also sported some skateboarding shoes (im looking at my brother right now and im writing what he's wearing:P)
Ryoko looked away 'Men their useless they will beat your heart down till you cant take no more. But yet theres something about that boy that seems so familular. He blushed and looked away. HE arose from hisi current possision and walked straigh to Ryoko. He spoke with a deep handsome voice "Miss you need to go to a hospital you are badly beatin." He held concern in his voice. "Its none of your business and im fine thank you very much." Ryoko resisted the kindness this stranger was showing her. "Ma'am you obviously havent looked into the mirror lately have you because you look like your about to die if you dont get some 'advanced medical attention' Ryoko" "What how do... you... know...my...name?" but before she could get and answer, her eyes rolled into the back of her head and her eyes started to bleed. She blacked out. Finally the affect of the brutall beating that Tenchi delivered finally showed its face. The pain was unbearable. Everyone in the bar looked toward Ryoko and the young stranger picked Ryoko up and phased out of the bar and into the night sky.
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Okay folks thats it for the first chapter of my story and i hope you enjoyed it .i hope that i added enough details so flame me applaude me just dont damn me to the farest corners of hell :) im writing chapter 2 as soon as i download this thing:) buh bye
magicmailbox14
you can email me at my other name it's Squeekychipmunk@msn.com
wait one more thing i think it is impossible for a person like me too own a great anime like the tenchi muyo series well because i aint got that kinda money well without further adu here is my 1'st fanfiction!
"Looking down on you"
(intro) Ryoko was a wild,outgoing,strong women who held her feelings in as if they were a deathwish to show anyone she encountered
There would come a time when Ryoko would let her feelings spill from her heart to the one she loved so dearly, and the guy whom she felt like she needed to show her feelings to was a man named Tenchi Maski.
He was a lively cheerfull young lad, who was tall had black hair and the most brilliant colored eyes a girl could see. They were the color of polished oak wood wich varied in colors of light to the darkest deepths of brown. Shy and cunning he would go to the farest corners of his soul to save a person in need he was a loving soul and this is why Ryoko spilled her heart to him on every level. But Tenchi would never return his feelings too her. He did not know if his heart was lying to him. So he never told anyone except himself.
It was a brisk cool night,and autum had,retured to Okiniawa and the lovely maiden Ryoko was atop of the rafter keeping busy drinking sake and thinking of her beloved Tenchi. " Tenchi...my beloved Tenchi." Ryoko slurred. She was smashed she couldnt talk right sit straight or see what the hell she was doing. Ryoko had and itch she attempted to scratch it but when she lifted her arm she fell to the floor with a thud that could make evenm president Bush talk straight. Ryoko was so intoxicated that the landing of that paticular was not felt on her rear. It was only a tingling feeling that ran through her body."Tenchi my Tenchi.....how i need you so..IM COMING TENCHI!''
Ryoko got up and stumbled through the halls knocking everything over from a 300 year old china set to little knick knackes that were set on a courier in the corner. Ryoko was making terrible noise as she enterd Tenchis room. Ryoko stumbled to Tenchis bed. Not to anyones surprize the young youth was already awoken by all the racket Ryoko was making. "Ryoko what do you think your doing in my room at this time of night!" Tenchi yelled at the top of his lungs. "Oh Tenchi hold me." Ryoko jumped onto Tenchi. by then then the whole Maski household was witnessing the tramatic event. " Miss Ryoko you get off of Lord Tenchi this instant!!!!!" it was to late by that time.
Tenchi had enough the rage was builing up inside of him for too long. With out him acknowlogin it his rage took over. His hand went into a tightly formed fist and pumeled straight into Ryoko's right cheek which knocked her too the ground. She squeled out in pain that knocked the the drunkness out of her. Tenchi went insane, he pounced onto Ryoko and countinued to drive his fists into her. She countinued to scream out in agony the one she loved was violently beating her. Had she gone to far? This point was obviouse. She finally drove Tenchi off the edge this time.
"Tenchi, Lord Tenchi stop this at once!" Ayeka screamed with her hands to her face. Washu was awstruck at the onslaught that was being forced upon her little Ryoko. Washu sent an electricity ball straight at Tenchi witch sent him plumaling back against the wall. "YOU STAY AWAY FROM HER TENCHI MASAKI!!!!". Every ones feet were planted to the floor unable to move. Ryoko got up, her face was badly beaten. Her eyes showed only sadness that surfaced from the deepest depths of her heart. Her soul was torn apart. "Tenchi...why?" she looked up at the youth she had only shown love too for many years and he reacently beat her down.
"Ryoko leave i never want to see you here in my presence again. I dont trust you anymore, and I cant trust myself around you! Leave here! Tenchi went out of his current state of insanity that just beat Ryoko into an oblivion. And he looked up at Ryoko just before she phased out of the house. "Wait no Ryoko wait! Im sorry Ryoko forgive me!". Tenchi was too late the beautiful but badly beatin maiden phased out of sight before she could hear his sorrowfull cry for forgivness.
Ryoko appeared above the Maski house. She floated off into town in her sorrowfull state. 'Why would Tenchih do such a thing? Thats not like him to hit a girl. But luckily for him I'm used to the treatment he just gave me. But the fact still remains even Kagato wouldn't beat me like that, well he would but not for ten minuets (sorry cant spell that word) straight.
Oh Tenchi how I loved you so but now im not sure of my feelings anymore.' By the time Ryoko had come across the the town and Tinjo's bar. Ryoko decided in her head that she could use some alcohol to ease the pain inside her heart and on her face. She landed on the ground but first making sure that no one saw her land . She walked into the pub and sat down on the little red stool ordered some sake and washed away her sorrows.
She busted out crying into her arms. 'Why do i attract all the bad stuff why do i always get the beatings will I ever be loved by someone that i can show my love too with out faking it. I wish i could just die! Too take my life so that all the sorrow can end so i dont have to be alone in the universe. All I want is love and to be loved. What am I talking about how can a science expedriment be loved and show love in return?'
Ryoko cauntinued to sob till she noticed a young man staring at her. He had the apperance of a fallen angelhe was Tall about 6'2. His hair was black with two thick streaks of white hair as bangs which went down to the corners of his eyes the rest of his hair was short and spikey. His eyes held a radient color of emerald green such the colors of Washu's eyes. He had a slight tan and anyone could tell he was built because you could she the outlines of his muscels through his shirt. He had a pair of baggy denim pants on and a shirt that showed an awfull way to escape the police. He also sported some skateboarding shoes (im looking at my brother right now and im writing what he's wearing:P)
Ryoko looked away 'Men their useless they will beat your heart down till you cant take no more. But yet theres something about that boy that seems so familular. He blushed and looked away. HE arose from hisi current possision and walked straigh to Ryoko. He spoke with a deep handsome voice "Miss you need to go to a hospital you are badly beatin." He held concern in his voice. "Its none of your business and im fine thank you very much." Ryoko resisted the kindness this stranger was showing her. "Ma'am you obviously havent looked into the mirror lately have you because you look like your about to die if you dont get some 'advanced medical attention' Ryoko" "What how do... you... know...my...name?" but before she could get and answer, her eyes rolled into the back of her head and her eyes started to bleed. She blacked out. Finally the affect of the brutall beating that Tenchi delivered finally showed its face. The pain was unbearable. Everyone in the bar looked toward Ryoko and the young stranger picked Ryoko up and phased out of the bar and into the night sky.
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Okay folks thats it for the first chapter of my story and i hope you enjoyed it .i hope that i added enough details so flame me applaude me just dont damn me to the farest corners of hell :) im writing chapter 2 as soon as i download this thing:) buh bye
magicmailbox14
you can email me at my other name it's Squeekychipmunk@msn.com