Okay, I kinda forgot to write something before the chapter one my last
chapter, (did that make any sense?), so anyway, thanks for all the reviews
I got (actually I only got three but that still excites me). The story is
a little slow, but I promise you it will be going a little faster as soon
as we get into.the ring!!!!!! Bwa ha ha ha ha!!!! This chapter kinda
short and boring, but it's just so you get a taste of how happy poor
Sméagol's life was and little bit about Leani (actually, you get to know
her better after Smea finds the ring). There are probably going to be more
chapters on the transformation into Gollum and all the tortures that came
for poor ol' Smea with it (Boo-hoo). Okay, anyhow, onto the story!! (drum
roll)
Chapter Three: Bliss
In between the time Smea met Leani, and before he got the ring, life was bliss-pure bliss. The two hobbits became friends-more than friends, but were still young. It was in the river were they spent most of their time, searching for "river rocks", the pretty greenish-blue stones Smea loved to examine, and Leani, who would use them to decorate something.
Even if Smea wouldn't admit it, Dea knew very well that Leani and Smea were in love. Smea maintained they were just very good friends, but Dea would only chuckle, and tell Smea that he would remember that on their wedding day.
"Smea," Leani said one day, in a rather sad voice, "The rumors are that evil is arising. Whether they are true or not, it seems there are more orcs-"
"What??"
"Orcs, Sméagol. They are horrible monsters that delight in killing and torturing." She shook her head sadly. "There are more of them appearing, and some people, not hobbits, mind you, but people, are beginning to support this evil. I just want to ask you to be careful. I'm.scared."
It was not the rumors of evil that shocked Smea, but how serious they must be if Leani was scared. Leani was generally brave and unfrightened, but for something like this serious enough..
"I'll try," he answered, unknowing of the future that would await this poor, innocent hobbit.
I know how bad that chapter was, but I just want a little something before the ring comes into the picture.but it does come in next chapter. But the story truly begins there (hence, the title makes absolutely no sense). Leani will be more in the story from chapter five and up (how, why? You'll see......)
Chapter Three: Bliss
In between the time Smea met Leani, and before he got the ring, life was bliss-pure bliss. The two hobbits became friends-more than friends, but were still young. It was in the river were they spent most of their time, searching for "river rocks", the pretty greenish-blue stones Smea loved to examine, and Leani, who would use them to decorate something.
Even if Smea wouldn't admit it, Dea knew very well that Leani and Smea were in love. Smea maintained they were just very good friends, but Dea would only chuckle, and tell Smea that he would remember that on their wedding day.
"Smea," Leani said one day, in a rather sad voice, "The rumors are that evil is arising. Whether they are true or not, it seems there are more orcs-"
"What??"
"Orcs, Sméagol. They are horrible monsters that delight in killing and torturing." She shook her head sadly. "There are more of them appearing, and some people, not hobbits, mind you, but people, are beginning to support this evil. I just want to ask you to be careful. I'm.scared."
It was not the rumors of evil that shocked Smea, but how serious they must be if Leani was scared. Leani was generally brave and unfrightened, but for something like this serious enough..
"I'll try," he answered, unknowing of the future that would await this poor, innocent hobbit.
I know how bad that chapter was, but I just want a little something before the ring comes into the picture.but it does come in next chapter. But the story truly begins there (hence, the title makes absolutely no sense). Leani will be more in the story from chapter five and up (how, why? You'll see......)