Finally, I've written the next chapter..sorry bout that.been busy. More
like lazy, but, as school is starting, it's going to take a lot of time to
get chapters out, so five review needed for each new chapter till I write
another. Also, I know the title isn't correct, "Before the Ring" because
the ring comes into the picture, but what it implies is, "Before the Ring
Took Power and Caused A Lot of Trouble". Oh, and Leani will be in the
story more, but mostly in Gollum/Smeagol's dreams..(you'll see what I
mean). Now...on to the story!!
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Chapter Five: Gollum
A poor, tired Sméagol arrived at home, with mussed up with and cracked lips, but the worst part of all, was when, in horror, Smea looked in the mirror only to see blood smattered all over his face and hands. And worse yet, he remembered, killing a rabbit, and innocent rabbit, and eating it raw.with his bare hands. He was frightened.
Leani could help him. Yes, that was it. He would tell Leani everything, and she would rid the moster in him, the one that killed a rabbit, but more,.killed Dea. Leani would make everything right. In despair, Smea locked his door, and began to weep like a baby.
The next morning, he began his way to Leani's hole. On his way, he passed the bakery. The delicious smell of cinnamon buns wafted over his nose. He walked into the bakery without meaning to. The monster in him was hungry. It put on the ring, and snatched some of the buns. The monster didn't like them.but it like the baker. It crawled over to the baker and.No! Smea jerked out of it. He would not let the monster kill another. He tore off the ring, and ran to Leani's house as fast he could run. He ignored the tugs of the monster that urged him to kill.to steal.
"Leani, 'lo, are you home?" Smea said, while knocking on the door.
"Smea! Hi! Your party was great!," she said while opening the door, "I loved your speech! Got any neat gifts? Come on, I wanna see them!"
"Uh..no," he said, trying to break the merry mood. Leani would think he was joking, "Leani, this is serious."
She cocked her head, ".?"
"Well, ummm...come, let's go outside into your backyard."
"Okay then..." she said, beginning to walk. She noticed very much that Smea grip on her hand was firm, as if he wanted her to protect her from something.
Leani's yard was beautiful. She had many flowers and trees, but her favorite part was to willow, whose hanging leaves made a curtain which she would constantly go in to read quietly.
The two walked under the curtain of willow leaves, and sat on the bench inside there.
"What's wrong?" Leani asked, her deep eyes exploring Smea's. She noticed the worry in them, but what she noticed, is that, every few moments, a sudden fleeting green glint alighted his eyes, a glint fill with hatred, and cruelty. "I.I.killed Dea!" he said, crying like a baby. "I don't know what happened. He found a ring, and something came over me and I killed him, and, dammit, I just don't know what's happening!" he said in frustration. Leani seemed a little taken aback, but she was expected something extreme.after all, Smea usually never had to talk about anything.well, serious. "Okay, Sméagol, calm down. What do you mean something came voer you and you killed Dea? Explain slowly, Smea." She said calmly, though fright and sadness lit up her eyes. This was not the Smea she knew. Smea would rarely even eat meat, for the sake of not killing an animal. But killing his best friend? "I.I.don't know. A monster took over my body when I saw that ring."
"Show me the ring."
"Ssssss! Never!" Smea hissed involuntarily.
Leani said nothing, but began backing away from him. "Now, calm down. I meant no harm. Smea!" she cried, suddenly desperate, "what is wrong with you?" * * * * * * * * * * * Okay, I know that chapter was kind of short and boring, but it builds up. I plan on having Smea kicked out after the murder of ______________, and the transformation beginning. I'll write the next chapter when I get five reviews, or when I feel like it.
A poor, tired Sméagol arrived at home, with mussed up with and cracked lips, but the worst part of all, was when, in horror, Smea looked in the mirror only to see blood smattered all over his face and hands. And worse yet, he remembered, killing a rabbit, and innocent rabbit, and eating it raw.with his bare hands. He was frightened.
Leani could help him. Yes, that was it. He would tell Leani everything, and she would rid the moster in him, the one that killed a rabbit, but more,.killed Dea. Leani would make everything right. In despair, Smea locked his door, and began to weep like a baby.
The next morning, he began his way to Leani's hole. On his way, he passed the bakery. The delicious smell of cinnamon buns wafted over his nose. He walked into the bakery without meaning to. The monster in him was hungry. It put on the ring, and snatched some of the buns. The monster didn't like them.but it like the baker. It crawled over to the baker and.No! Smea jerked out of it. He would not let the monster kill another. He tore off the ring, and ran to Leani's house as fast he could run. He ignored the tugs of the monster that urged him to kill.to steal.
"Leani, 'lo, are you home?" Smea said, while knocking on the door.
"Smea! Hi! Your party was great!," she said while opening the door, "I loved your speech! Got any neat gifts? Come on, I wanna see them!"
"Uh..no," he said, trying to break the merry mood. Leani would think he was joking, "Leani, this is serious."
She cocked her head, ".?"
"Well, ummm...come, let's go outside into your backyard."
"Okay then..." she said, beginning to walk. She noticed very much that Smea grip on her hand was firm, as if he wanted her to protect her from something.
Leani's yard was beautiful. She had many flowers and trees, but her favorite part was to willow, whose hanging leaves made a curtain which she would constantly go in to read quietly.
The two walked under the curtain of willow leaves, and sat on the bench inside there.
"What's wrong?" Leani asked, her deep eyes exploring Smea's. She noticed the worry in them, but what she noticed, is that, every few moments, a sudden fleeting green glint alighted his eyes, a glint fill with hatred, and cruelty. "I.I.killed Dea!" he said, crying like a baby. "I don't know what happened. He found a ring, and something came over me and I killed him, and, dammit, I just don't know what's happening!" he said in frustration. Leani seemed a little taken aback, but she was expected something extreme.after all, Smea usually never had to talk about anything.well, serious. "Okay, Sméagol, calm down. What do you mean something came voer you and you killed Dea? Explain slowly, Smea." She said calmly, though fright and sadness lit up her eyes. This was not the Smea she knew. Smea would rarely even eat meat, for the sake of not killing an animal. But killing his best friend? "I.I.don't know. A monster took over my body when I saw that ring."
"Show me the ring."
"Ssssss! Never!" Smea hissed involuntarily.
Leani said nothing, but began backing away from him. "Now, calm down. I meant no harm. Smea!" she cried, suddenly desperate, "what is wrong with you?" * * * * * * * * * * * Okay, I know that chapter was kind of short and boring, but it builds up. I plan on having Smea kicked out after the murder of ______________, and the transformation beginning. I'll write the next chapter when I get five reviews, or when I feel like it.